Mad Demon Cultivator

It is recommended that the author change the character of the protagonist to make the ancestor of Huanmoxiu a kind-hearted, indecisive and benevolent woman.

Is the protagonist a demon cultivator, or an ancestor who seizes the body of a mortal? Can't he use some demon cultivator's skills to suck people's souls and blood essence?

Returning demonic cultivators are just women. They are demonic cultivators and have been killed long ago.

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After reading one chapter, I feel that the writing is good, and the structure of the plot is also very good, but there is a slight flaw. I feel that the plot of DaDa should be more ups and downs. Of course, this is my personal opinion. Just give Da Da a reference, hehe. The second is the characterization of the characters. The detailed description is very good, but the panoramic description is somewhat lacking. I hope you will pay more attention to it. Overall, the writing is very good and the processing is relatively good. These are my personal opinions and are for reference only. After all, writing a book is a personal matter, and the evaluation of oneself by the outside world only serves as a supplementary reference and cannot be used as a decisive factor affecting the direction of the story.

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Chapter 86: What is the rhythm of memory traces? If those four scenes were from the male protagonist's past, it would be a tragedy in life. . What route is the author taking?

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