Bird God

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It's a very attractive plot. In today's world where there are so many works, I'm really happy to see such a work... I hope the author will continue to work hard, develop his own style, improve his writing skills, stick to his own writing path, and don't ignore quality for the sake of quantity... I agree: quality comes first! Dear readers! ..

In fact, there is also a national mahjong player named Wushuang, called Shisan. China also has thirteen-card mahjong. It should be said that Japanese mahjong comes from this kind of mahjong. For example, a cup of mouth is called "General Gao" in China, the old man of Qing Dynasty is called "Qing Mojiu", etc...

There are many areas in Yunyang that I suggest to improve. As someone who just comes to muddy the waters, it's hard to say. There are too many characterizations and the storyline is still not deep enough. I'm not quite sure of the importance of the plot. I hope it can be improved. Please reward me for my experience in muddy waters.

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The subject matter is novel, and at first I thought it was going to be a high-end movie. Unexpectedly... I still returned to the secular world and followed the popular route. Innovation followed by self-imposed

However, these days, you can practice music, chess, calligraphy, painting, etc., You can even cook a dish and build a house. You can't escape the [training] system no matter what, and there's nothing new about it if you read it too much, so in the end it's the author's writing style and imagination that dominates (probably). Whether your writing is good or bad, it doesn't really matter as long as it's not at elementary school level. The key is to use your good or bad writing style to make what you write look interesting. Why is it interesting? You need to open your mind and have full imagination to think of interesting plots, and then describe the interesting plots in your mind in the form of written expression. (Of course, this is just simple for me to say...) As for how to describe the plot well and completely, I don't know... If the author himself feels that his chapter is not passionate, humorous, aggrieved, or sad, then the readers will let alone... Okay... [Actually, I just say one sentence] [ I couldn't stand it after reading more than ten chapters... It's not that the author's writing is not good, it's just that there was nothing that attracted me to read... Not humorous, not leisurely, not passionate, not YY,,,,, The problem with the plot and writing style is not big. Even with ordinary writing style and bloody plot, it can be written very interestingly, but I don't know how to write it... I post this just in the hope that the author can write this book better.

Cheers, bro, it's updated. I saw the latest one. Come on, work hard to update. Thank you for your hard work.

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