A Passer-By's Life of Cultivating Immortals

The writing on the spiritual world at the back is messy and full of loopholes. You can still read the front part, which is about cultivation, but the back part is completely like a running account, with all kinds of messy lines that can't be sorted out clearly. All kinds of searching for memories, amnesia and sealing memories, it would be better to end by ascension

It didn't look good, so I decided to give it up. I can only say that the writing was passable, the relationship between the characters was incomprehensible, and the sloppiness was good for others. I am inexplicably confident in my ability to see people...

The previous chapters were well written, but the heroine kept losing her memory and in the end, even the hero also lost his memory. I really couldn't bear it! The thunder is rolling...! Did the author watch too many Korean dramas or did he have to rely on amnesia to make up the plot later?

Jumping directly to the back, I saw that Chu Yang was the male protagonist and didn't want to watch it. He also had amnesia. Then the female protagonist gave birth to a child alone and was speechless to the male protagonist 😅😅😅

Nowadays, this kind of novels always turn the high-ranking protagonist of the original novel into a disgusting character. Although some of the novels are well written, I still can't stand it every time I see the dark protagonist. 😭 To be honest, if the protagonist of the original text is really so disgusting, no one will read the book. Even if the book is popular, it will only be a minority. Most of the protagonists are still normal. So I really can't stand that many authors write the lofty protagonists of the original text as disgusting characters. Every time I see the author let his protagonist (one of the protagonists or supporting characters of the original text) turn the original text into a lofty character. It's very difficult to give twisted explanations for various behaviors of the protagonist (the most important protagonist in the original text). There are always many descriptions of the dark thoughts in the protagonist's heart in the original text. Every time I see it, I really want to say, unless it is a dark protagonist, otherwise which author would write about the dark thoughts in the protagonist's heart. Many of the novels that I later discarded are basically because the dark protagonist is too undesirable to read. 🤫 Moreover, Tutu's article is just like most of these articles. The female protagonist has all kinds of cheats, and she has always hated and belittled the female protagonist and robbed her of opportunities. She said that the female protagonist will kill her in the future, so she tried every means to weaken the female protagonist and eliminate the people around her. I like how Tutu wrote the original text from the perspective of a passerby, rather than from the perspective of the female supporting character. Finally, I don't have to see a lot of content from the female supporting character about how vicious the heroine is. 🥺 In particular, Huang Luoyi ignored his predecessors in Lingquan and only focused on his appearance. It is really expressive. Many of the female supporting characters in this kind of counterattack novel are really not very good. If it were not for the author's preference, under normal circumstances, he would have died long ago. However, Tutu still has some shortcomings. Although it is to let readers understand the background of this article, the descriptions of the heroine and the supporting characters were a bit uncomfortable at the beginning. I almost abandoned the article because Tutu first wrote about the content of the original heroine and supporting characters. Fortunately, I persisted and realized that the article was well written. 🤭 And it seems that this kind of text is like this. There is always a special emphasis on the characters in the book, especially the heroine and the supporting character. They usually describe how the protagonist or supporting character XXX will do things. Every time, the terms protagonist or supporting character are emphasized, for fear that others will not know what the character is in the original text.

Li Daya, that disgusting baby, the heroine is so weak and idiotic that there is no limit, this article is extremely poisonouscompared

I insist on reading more than half of the book, but I really can't bear it. The heroine loses her memory. Forget it, but everyone around her loses her memory in turn? ? ? Shouldn't the title of the book be called Amnesia and Immortal Life?

I don't understand why the heroine said that even if the heroine and the original heroine's things are in front of her, she will turn away. Isn't it an opportunity for her to travel through time? Knowing the plot is also an opportunity. I feel that the heroine is a bit contrived.

His mind is like that of a junior high school student. He is clearly a six- or seven-year-old kid in the text, but he likes him and he likes her. Didn't the author look at age when writing?

Logically speaking, it should refer to Huang Luoxue, but if you read the book, it is also possible that Luo Yu. Although girls can also use the Son of Destiny, most of them use the Daughter of Destiny. Could it be that the son of destiny is Luo Yu's brother?

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The author should be quite young. I feel that a plot is always too simple and long-winded. You can try to refine the logic and plot, and don't mix too much psychological activities. Also, since the heroine's predecessor is in her twenties, she shouldn't act like she has the same mental state as her age.

I heard that in this novel, men and women often have amnesia. Emma died laughing??? Sorry

After reading the first chapter, it was pretty good. After dozens of chapters, especially when Song Ning appeared, I felt that the style of the painting was wrong. Then I looked for comments and read it. Well, thank you for clearing up the mines! I gave up! When I first watched it, I thought Gou Wa was the male protagonist!

The second half is too bloody. It turns out that I also gave up on writing back then.

The author's story is very good, but his writing skills are not good. He could have mentioned it in one stroke, but in the end, all the dialogues were described, and he didn't mention anything that should clear up the readers' doubts. Let's just stay in the fog together.

Then what kind of tendency does Li Daya have to purge disgusting people and repay kindness with vengeance?

How disgusting, the heroine is so holy that she can be a mother to someone else

The heroine has too many bad romances and is involved with too many men. The relationship with the male protagonist was also very bumpy, but in the end they were still together😇😇

In order to climb the Immortal Platform, what's the point of turning yourself into a person whose memories except cultivation have disappeared? It's just a training machine.

The heroine won't be fat forever, right? Then I'll be rude. I can't accept that the heroine is not good-looking.

It looks good, it's not the same cliché, it's a bit new and interesting. The clichéd comments are a bit annoying, but they don't affect the beauty of the writing. Readers and authors who don't understand appreciation don't have to worry about accommodating them.

Am I the only one who doesn't like Huang Luoxue very much?

Hu Meier is not worthy of Xuankong. If these two really get together, it would be too disgusting, mainly because Hu Meier is unclean.

Dissuaded by all kinds of bloody spoilers

A little pornographic article about cultivating immortality...😁😁😁

Passerby Ding was born with innate energy, and it was too obvious to abandon the article.

I just read a few chapters. She is a five-year-old child who behaves like an adult. Her mind is filled with descriptions of sexual love. She even entered the room of her brother who was a few years older and had sexual intercourse because she was afraid of being criticized. She also always thought about hugging someone's lap. Tell me, what kind of protagonist would a person like this be? At the beginning, she was given a purple spirit, but in the end she was only thinking about sexual matters, and she still wanted to meddle in other people's affairs and help the original heroine? No, who do you think you are?

Why should the heroine of a sadistic novel be labeled as a strong woman 😅 Everything she writes is just stupid💩