Immeasurable Immortal Fate

The book is not bad, the plot is neither fast nor slow, and the description of the characters is good. It can be seen that the author still has certain writing skills, but there are also many problems. First of all, the character characteristics of the protagonist are not delicate enough. Secondly, the interesting points are not prominent enough, there are not enough selling points, and the grasp of the main line of the story is slightly lacking. Finally, the grasp of many details is not very smooth, making people feel like a piece of jade that is not perfectly carved. Let's exchange it, it won't hurt you: two, one one, four, zero zero, two five, nine one. 🌹🌹