Primitive Evolution

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I haven't finished reading this book, so I don't know what the rest of it is like. I hope it's just food.

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If you don't like reading it, don't read it. No one is forcing you to read this book. "It's very uncomfortable to see." Your ID makes people feel uncomfortable to see it. There is no charge for this book. If you don't like it, write it yourself.

In terms of the first two worlds, the biggest flaw in the first world is that there is no positive description of the final battle. We only know that people died, many people died, and the protagonist played a great role. This could have been a ** point. On the other hand, the author said that the protagonist often receives tasks from the police station. As for the task description, you have no idea what you did and how you did it. The whole world is relatively empty. If these two points can be supplemented, the structure will be good. The name of the second world, to put it bluntly, can be changed to "Good Luck Dad's Soy Sauce and Golden Thighs Journey". The whole journey is about being a nanny, occasionally relying on golden fingers to trick the enemy, but the final success is still due to luck. . . The orthodox unlimited flow either relies on fighting to attract people or relies on layout to attract people. The author is not very good at these two points, let alone the battle of wits. The author's setting seems not to welcome this kind of thing. In terms of combat, the author's writing power must be strengthened. The so-called battle description now has the feeling of analyzing the BOSS battle strategy of a turn-based game. It cannot be called a battle at all. Overall, I feel that the author's ability to create plots is good, but his ability to describe details needs to be strengthened. Don't always rely on large paragraphs of data to explain problems. We need details, and Infinite Streaming especially needs details.

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If you don't like it, you can click X to remove it from the shelves. But when I saw a piece of content, I was confused. I didn't even have any fan points, and I didn't see your ID in the record of voting for recommendations. I have always disliked such great critics. "Who can escape the turn of fate? The ancient myth reappears in the steel city!" It was originally what was in my introduction, Infinite Worlds within a box. "ID Silent Place" you are just a self-righteous guy. It actually disturbed my mood for writing novels.

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The second seal of the Lucky Talisman requires three types of blood of the protagonist. There is already one type, but there are still two types missing. In the biochemical plane, the protagonists of each plot are next to Pig's Feet. Not to mention the original Alice, the clone version will be upgraded to the protagonist of Destiny later, so at least two copies will be enough. Why isn't pig trotters unblocked?

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It's okay, but there are always voice-overs in the main text. It's just a way of opening up the imagination. It was originally very good, but it makes me lose all sense of substitution. Moreover, the author's IQ is a little worrying. He shows off all the good things for others to see, just because he is afraid that others will not be as wise. It is a miracle that he is still alive.

Speaking of Ace-style books, although they are not very well written. It's not like it only has the lowest rating🤫

😅 As soon as you enter, you will immediately be followed by a lolita and a beautiful woman. Couldn't they be comrades? It's not bad for the protagonist to be a lone wolf. I think the never-ending battle is the main theme of Mugen-ryu, whether it's a physical battle or a battle of wits... If you want to recruit girls, then look at the romance. To make a friend of the protagonist's sister, does the protagonist have to be tolerant of this character? If we create another lolita, and it's not Zheng Zha's lolita, besides being cute and holding back, will it be of great help? Of course, it's still possible if it's deliberately written that way, such as enhancing her strength to make her a violent lolita, but that would take away the protagonist's role 😅

When I was writing about Resident Evil in the Starry Sky, some idiots came to criticize me and said it was cliche. I just want to ask, has anyone written about the extinct world of Resident Evil 3 like me before in the online world? ? ? Similarly, when watching KOF, please note that it is not the King of Fighters by those guys who have no understanding of the game background, but KOF94. Do you know the difference between the world view of KOF and the world view of The King of Fighters? ? ? Don't always think that you are the center of the world. Why is it that every time Mao Xingkong opens a new volume of the plot, someone will show his presence? ? ? In other words, I was just a street kid who ran around naked for two months! Also, if you don't like reading, no one has ever forced you to read it. In terms of the weekly points ranking of Qidian Infinite Streaming members, my book is just a scumbag in the 30s. Even if you are really a fan of unlimited streaming, you can still watch the masterpiece above! I know that many people don't like to read the introduction of each volume, so I would like to reiterate it here. Original Evolution Volume 3: KOF94 C-level contractors, warriors truly needed in space, equal rights and obligations. The ripples of the real world began to ripple, and Ouyang Yu, who still knew nothing about it, plunged into the stage that belonged to the strong - the beginning of the KOF competition! Don't just know about the three artifacts and the big snake, at most add a NESTS organization! Do you know how vast the plot of the original KOF is? Finally, the tricks vary from person to person, but they are all different. The outline of my world has been set, and the power system has been determined. I will not change it no matter how much you spray. Also, answer someone's question. Resident Evil corresponds to human nature. I write KOF for combat experience and system adjustment. Finally, most of the high-end hero movies in the United States are from the Marvel series. No matter what is written, some people will vomit it! Can I write about the Battle of Pearl Harbor? Does anyone see it? Write about The Pianist on the Sea? The Shawshank Redemption? Cinema Paradiso? Can it also lead to the background of angels? But how many people can accept it and understand it? ?

Didn't the previous protagonist unlock a talent when he became the chosen one? Why don't you analyze the space?

According to the author's settings, from what I see now. Only by upgrading the military rank can you be rewarded with a basic skill, and by consuming the military rank can you redeem some items. So, the author has set that there are no skills that can be redeemed in this space? Even some basic-level skills or some knowledge-based skills such as language, driving, computer, etc. Are not redeemable at all? Does it all require trading, fighting monsters, or self-study? As for various items, except for military ranks, which can be purchased, there are no others? As a general point of space currency, apart from upgrading items, or offsetting some special skills and abilities and treatment consumption, it has no other use?

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