Reborn in 80, Jordan and I Compete for GOAT

No system is not invincible, there is victory and defeat for each other, are you planning to write this for yourself?😰

In the early 1980s, the NBA was a distribution center for drugs and gambling. Are you a Chinese looking for death by playing in the NBA? Even white people can't survive in the NBA.

I was confused when I saw him acting like he was stopping 911. Then he said he was a James fan, and I finally understood 😅

The author is probably not very old. He feels that great powers have risen in the last decade or two, so he takes it for granted that the 1980s and 1990s will be the same. Completely divorced from the authenticity of the era. The literary and sports genre writes about Europe and the United States in the 1980s and 1990s. It is either white, Latin or black, even if it is mixed race, it is more authentic than pure yellow. Once the most basic truth of a novel cannot be established, the upper limit will not be too high.

Are you going to write it just for yourself? It's divided into sections. It's very difficult to see.

The subject matter is okay, and the growth-oriented protagonist is okay, but there are too many digressions. It's 911 and it's a hometown meeting. Can't it focus on basketball? The protagonist entered the NBA in 1985 and was about to retire in 20. Don't even think about participating in the Olympics. Will doing so many messes promote the plot? It will only discourage readers. Also, the paragraphs are too uncomfortable. It would be much better to read less long paragraphs!