Immortal Emperor Dongyi

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The reading is over, the plot is very well constructed. The writing style is also good. It's just that he was born a man, so although he tried his best, he still lacked a sense of delicacy and agility. But this is inevitable. The foreshadowing explained earlier is very good. It would be perfect if it was a long article. But since it is a free short article of 10,000 words. So the foreshadowing should be more obvious. People will look forward to it. In the end I decided I shouldn't have laughed and left. As a female writer, I also represent some readers. He will hope for a perfect love, so he can leave lingering messages saying that he plans to reincarnate, gather souls and so on. Although it is vulgar, find a good point to cut it in, and it can appeal to the public. Thank you Xiaosu, let's work together.