Ancient Formation Path

It's a very nice book. I hope to read more 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

It's so well written. I wish my brother happiness forever and becoming a god soon! ! ! 👍

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Tongtian is the supreme clear, the original is the jade clear

After reading the first three chapters, I feel that the writing style and prose are pretty good. However, one thing needs to be said. The concept of your story is too big. There is a lot of information in the first chapter. The readers feel confused when they first read it. You can leave some things that don't need to be written in the front until later. , Speed up the progress of the plot first at the beginning, otherwise it will be difficult to retain readers if the work is slow. You must prioritize the information well, and you can't just want to shove it all at the beginning of the article. This is my ball, 264..407..6244..., And I am a writer. If you don't understand, just ask me.