Immortal Heavenly Way

I have read the entire translation of your work. The courier and the beginning of this one. My favorite thing here is the big translation. There is a hook at the beginning, a network in the middle, and a pocket at the end. It is worth learning from me. But I have only read the first chapter of this book, and I have no say in the rest of it. Let's talk about the first chapter. Why didn't I read it? Because of those complicated fights. I personally think that from the first chapter, you are not very familiar with Xianxia. As a fairy, fighting must be based on the premise of already having an emotional connection with the characters. However, the beginning of the game lacks a sense of continuity and throws out very complicated weapons and combat. This will make people eat a lot of food at once that is difficult to swallow. No matter how good it looks later, it's easy to suffer at the beginning. As above, I hope we can give each other guidance and encourage each other in the future. Thanks

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