I Am Yuelao in Cultivation of Immortality

This is the original words—————— The setting is that the ancient heaven has collapsed and there are no gods in the world, so the protagonist does not understand the gods of the ancient heaven. The main plot of this book, which I did not mention in the introduction, is actually the reappearance of the inheritance of the gods of the ancient heaven. Many inheritors rebuilt the heaven and sought the throne of the new emperor. —————————— Then what I want to say is. The inheritance of Yue Lao is actually not very impressive. It is unrealistic to expect people from this inheritance to be able to defeat people from the inheritance of the Five Great Emperors. It is impossible for the new emperor to let him be. But what are the development prospects of Yuelao inheritance? You can refer to Taishang Laojun. It's a sinecure with a name, but all immortals have to call him teacher.

I don't know if the author approved the vest. As a young reader, I don't know if my requirements are too high. I don't care about the updates. I hope it can keep the excitement that makes people want to read on. Because it's really hard to find an upright novel. One is the integrity of three views, and the other is structural. Especially when the protagonist's ability further improves, it needs to be logical, and don't be strong for the sake of being strong, and use some nondescript tricks. I'm a little curious about the development of the plot after Chou Peak. After writing these battles, I have a framework. Without some new approaches, new ideas, and new character plots, it would be easy to fall into clichés and become boring. Let's wait and see!

I found that the author's pacing is very good, especially the suspense left in each chapter. The pacing is just right, making it enjoyable and fascinating to read, and it doesn't look like a novice at all.

The writing is quite nice, and the marriage plug-in is also interesting. I hope I won't write about the male protagonist's emotional scenes or write less about them in the future. I only like to watch the plot and upgrades, and I hate seeing romantic scenes. Better not to be a stallion Come on! (O^^)oo(^^o)

Long Aotian is the sense of sight. Please ask the elders to take action, teach him how to behave and send him home.

I read it well before I went there, but the more the author writes, the weirder it becomes. He even tied the other end of the red thread to the main character, the junior brother. This is the rhythm of becoming a gay. Can the author be more normal? Or does it mean that the author has gay feelings?

Moreover, the red thread can also be embodied and used as a magic weapon 😄

It's just my personal thoughts, please don't blame me if I'm wrong... If the author is a newcomer, then the first few dozen chapters are indeed very good, even compared to some authors who have written 2 or 3 books. Moreover, watching the ordinary plot aroused my interest, and sometimes I felt faintly satisfied. Although I can't read as much as some people who read all day long, since I'm still just a student after all, it can't be considered too little. Some books become more and more outrageous and irrelevant as they go on, and are not as engaging as the previous ones, and they are completely impossible to take back. I hope the author can wrap up the story perfectly and have a satisfying ending. 🌹