Tianjiuding Yuan

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The writing is full of talent, and the description of the characters and their style of life reflect your profound understanding of human nature and the world. This makes your novel feel authentic and credible, with a strong flavor of life. Hope to see new chapters sooner! Keep up the good work!!!

The plot of the story is getting better and better, and it is also very interesting. Like a glass of sake, although it does not irritate the throat, it is difficult to put it down after drinking it. It can be seen that the author is writing with great care. Come on, author! ! !

The author's novel successfully told me that I can't guess the author's thoughts. This is really a cruel reality!

I read the novel in one sitting and it didn't take much time. Up to now, the plot can only be said to have expanded slightly, right? I always feel that the author has not really unfolded the plot of the story. So let me talk about some of my opinions on the novel. Of course, these are just my own understandings. If there are any shortcomings in what I said, I hope the author will forgive me! As the most important part of a wonderful novel - the plot, I feel that the plot of this article still lacks excitement. Generally speaking, a good novel can attract readers' attention in the first 30,000 words. And what do you rely on to attract readers? Naturally it's suspense. A beginning without suspense is actually a failure. It cannot be said that there is no suspense in the first 30,000 words of this novel. For example, which force is Lu Chen's grandfather fighting against, and what secrets does he hide? This should be regarded as the most important foreshadowing. But other than that, the author seems to focus on writing about the lives of Lu Chen and Chu Mufeng in the academy. Overall, it tends to be bland, without any twists and turns. This will make readers feel dissociated while reading. In addition, the setting of the novel seems to be nothing special. There are too many settings like this in online novels, where young people with extraordinary talents continue to become stronger through experience. This is Shuangwen's consistent routine, and I can't say whether it is good or bad. But I personally hope that the author can come up with some new ideas. However, the praiseworthy aspect of this novel should be the description of the fighting scenes! The author has put a lot of effort into this aspect, especially the college competition, which is particularly exciting. I hope the author will continue to do so!

The article is delicately conceived yet unrestrained, the writing is realistic yet equally gorgeous; the plots are interlocking and enchanting, with a coherent flow, and the emotional expressions are clear, implicit, and accurate; the characters are vivid and lively on the page, and they feel ready to come out, as if they are standing in front of the readers, and their movements leave a deep impression on people. I have collected and read your masterpiece and fully support you! I wish you success and immediate success! 😄😄

Compared with Lu Chen, Chu Mufeng's personality seems to be a little restless and he is not easy to calm down. I'm afraid he needs to control this...

Looking at this, Li Xiaohan must be the kind of spoiled and delicate girl, right? Since I was a child, I have been loved by all kinds of people, and I don't know how high the world is.

Lu Chen and Chu Mufeng became familiar with each other so quickly. In a sense, it can be regarded as a sympathy between strong men, right? These two guys are not to be underestimated.

Lu Chen is pretty good, I like him! He is powerful but unassuming and low-key. I look forward to seeing him appear more often.

Although the writing is still not perfect, it has considerable appreciation value. I believe that this sharp and restrained style will allow me to read more exciting novels from you in the near future. However, there are also some slightly blunt aspects in the character creation, which are worth pondering. Come on!!!! Support you!!! Good book, support!!!!!! [Uid=343947]

Qingqingzi chants, lingering in my heart. Your figure lingers deeply in my heart. I am grateful for your support, grateful for your messages, and grateful for the precious insights you give me every time. Before dawn, the morning mist fills the eyes with longing, but it will always disperse, just like your works and your character, one day the clouds will clear and the moon will shine!

Speaking of which, this is really a mantis stalking the cicada, with the oriole behind. This woman Li Xiaohan should not be underestimated. It is really scary... It's a pity that Wang Farewell.

Although they both come from aristocratic families, why do they feel that Chu Mufeng and Li Xiaohan are treated so differently? In comparison, Chu Mufeng was not so favored!

Oh oh oh! Congratulations to my friend on the Dragon Boat Festival! Today's task is heavy, so first send my blessings! Life doesn't need to be earth-shattering, just be happy; friendship doesn't need sweet words, just think about it; money doesn't need to be carried in a car, just enough; friends don't need to be all over the world, just have you! Use a portion of beautiful "red", a portion of happy "flower", a portion of healthy "green", and a portion of happy "leaf" to make a "happy rice dumpling" for you. Happy Dragon Boat Festival^0^!

Good incense is used to diffuse virtue, good paper is used to immortalize the world, good pen is used to make flowers, good ink is used to rejuvenate, good tea is used to wash away troubles, and good wine is used to relieve worries. It means that good fragrance is used to cultivate one's moral character, good paper is used to write immortal words, good pen is used to write beautiful chapters, good ink is used to paint dazzling pictures, good tea is used to wash away the boredom of the soul, and good wine is used to dissolve the sorrow in the heart. 🌹

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Nothing to do! Let's take a look at Dada's works. After seeing Dada's works, I realized that I still have many shortcomings in writing! I dare not say that your work is a masterpiece! But there are many plots in this book worth learning from! Come on! No advertising, just browsing your book reviews...

I want to read, I want to read, I want to think, I want to read, I want to read, I want to think, I write well, I write wonderfully, I write wonderfully, I support you silently, haven't you noticed, you must stick to it, stick to it, you will be the king in two years, you will have a large number of readers in two years, continue to pay attention, you must keep writing [url=yiAzIn]

After reading one chapter, I feel that the writing is good, and the structure of the plot is also very good, but there is a slight flaw. I feel that the plot of DaDa should be more ups and downs. Of course, this is my personal opinion. Just give Da Da a reference, hehe. The second is the characterization of the characters. The detailed description is very good, but the panoramic description is somewhat lacking. I hope you will pay more attention to it. Generally speaking, the writing is very good and the processing is relatively good. These are my personal opinions and are for reference only. After all, writing a book is a personal matter, and the evaluation of oneself by the outside world only serves as an auxiliary reference and cannot be used as a decisive factor affecting the direction of the story.

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