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1: This is a novel that I felt was bad at first, but the more I read it, the better it became. 2: The author did a particularly good job in setting up the plot and laying out foreshadowing, and the structure is also quite gratifying. From time travel, to the encounter with an annulment and engagement at school, to the fall of a hot girl from the sky, it vaguely followed a wasteful flow, but it went with ease. The subsequent plot development also has some merits, but it still seems to have a vague feeling of being unpleasant. Three: The reason for this feeling is that the logic of the author's writing is too poor, and the author is not good at making up for this logical flaw. For example, the protagonist lives alone in a lonely house and sleeps in a tree at night. This is illogical in itself, but the author cannot give a logical explanation to make it logical. The attitude of the family members is also too rigid and rigid. This is illogical, and the author still cannot give a logical narration to round it out. Four: This kind of illogicality, in the final analysis, is the excess between the plots that the author imagined. The author does not want to use his heart, and he does not want to write a beautiful, appropriate and comfortable transition. He only concentrates on expelling his own desires, such as the soft girl descending from the sky, such as the Holy Spirit Sword Body, and such as the heart-stealing powder. These key plots really made me shine when I wrote them out, but the excess in the middle is really a bit rough and hard to swallow. Five: It is also important to note that the author's protagonist's personality deviates greatly from his own setting. Although the author wrote in the first two chapters that the protagonist is aware of the difference in his identity, the author did not write about the indifference and ignorance of the world as a killer who was tested. Instead, he was an image of a gangster who quickly integrated into his identity. The original identity of the time travel has almost no use. These shortcomings make the author's story that could have been better-looking have a lot of sand mixed in, making it taste rough and difficult to swallow. If it can be eliminated, the imagination can go further - after all, the beginning is the most important thing to attract readers.

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Chapter 33 is not divided into sections, which makes my head spin.

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