Destiny Is Supreme

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I always like to watch stories where the big villain suddenly turns into a minor villain, and the bigger villain is killed by the protagonist before he appears, but then the evil one is discovered.

Every time the protagonist's emotions break out, they feel particularly contagious and can impress every reader.

If you continue like this, you will definitely be successful. God will never let you down for your efforts~

The theme of supreme destiny is placed in the science fiction category. At first glance, it emphasizes the future, but it is a bit scattered. It feels that the main axis is not very clear (much like infinite flow + apocalypse +?)

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The style of the novel is quite similar to Swallowing the Stars, and I feel that Hua Feng put a lot of thought into the writing and plot. In terms of writing power, he should not be weaker than others. So where is the current problem? Basically, I have found it now. Since Huaifeng hopes to have some venomous suggestions, I will point it out directly here. It's just that the plot rhythm is not grasped well. Judging from the opening, it is too slow to heat up. At the beginning of the first chapter, the function of the ancient sword used in tomb robberies does not attract readers' curiosity very well. It can be said that Goldfinger's arrangement is too weak. As for the beginning, whether it is a waste material turning around, a passionate beginning, or a suspenseful beginning, it can bring excitement to the readers. The current way of writing does not fall into any of the above categories, and it seems a bit weak at the beginning. Sci-fi apocalyptic novels are actually nothing more than passion and pressure. The pressure of breakthrough, the pressure of resources, the pressure of survival. The protagonist of this book has a calm personality, so it would be good to write it in a wise way. So, first of all, the beginning needs to be changed. Secondly, in the subsequent plot, we didn't encounter the fate-changing meteor until Chapter 10. The foreshadowing of the previous steps was too long. With such a long plot and lack of excitement at the beginning, it is estimated that many readers will not be able to persist beyond the tenth chapter. Therefore, these foreshadowings must be cut off. Write it simply, or use flashback later. In fact, writing ten chapters is not necessarily more time-consuming than writing ten condensed paragraphs, but the two give readers a different feeling. As for the subsequent plot, starting with the assessment and battle, it is relatively satisfactory. However, the content of the previous article does not change, and readers cannot see the subsequent plot. The above is for reference only.