Lord of Dawn

Come on buddy, your hard work will pay off! 🤭

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Suddenly I discovered that Chu Da updated an extra chapter every day! Very good! Keep it up! [Fn=2_5]

The more you write, the better! Worth encouraging! Believe that you will succeed one day! 🤭🤭🤭

1. The title of the book is not great, but the content is really good. It is a modern city + Western cultivation system. The main plot is salvation, and the sub-plot is the collection of the Red Dragon Book. The fighting is quite innovative. 2. The cultivation system is very mature. These are not entirely original to the author, but the author summarizes and organizes them well. Wizards (bloodline), elves (elements), knights (body), prophets, etc. The cultivation system with faith as the core is very complete. 3. The skills and function settings of Red Dragon Book, Icon Sympathy and All-image Melting Furnace are eye-catching, especially the use of anger. However, I personally don't like the third ability awakened by Icon Sympathy. It's not nice to call it "XX Big Clap" 4. The shortcomings of this episode are that the female characters are not well portrayed, and there is too little description of Shuguang Academy at the beginning. The protagonist leaves the academy as soon as he reaches bronze, but the American chapter is well written for the time being 🤭

Ah? The nagging thing is! Forehead!

I have read Chapter 180 of your book. I have given you recommendation votes in the past two days. Your book has dug a lot of holes. Reading your book reminds me of Wang Yu's Mortal Cultivation Biography. The maps are often changed, and the protagonist has constant adventures and dazzling tricks. Your writing style is better than Wang Yu's, but the map changes too much and are too dense. The United States went to hell, then to the world of Tianmai, and then back to the earth. The elements in it are It's good to have new ideas, but other pitfalls are dug after only a few chapters. Some good elements are not used better, such as America, hell, and the world of Tianmai. The story can be longer. Moreover, the protagonist's learning is too complicated, and the prophet skills at the beginning are not used. It is not until he becomes a disciple of Zhang Sanfeng that he wakes up and realizes that he has this ability. In short, this book is good when viewed separately, but the main plot is not clear when taken together. If you have your next book, I suggest you refer to some books that carry XX systems with you, which will make you feel more comfortable and organized.

I haven't watched it for a while! When I came back, I found it was getting better and better! Hope the author keeps up the good work! The more you write, the more exciting it becomes!

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A good book deserves a thumbs up! I give you a thumbs up and keep cheering for you!

I've just read a few chapters and it feels very good! It is neither clichéd nor lacking in delicacy. It is a rare masterpiece! Will continue to support!

Although it has some flaws, it is really well written! I also hope that the hole dug ahead will not be completely filled! What's going on with those wings? When will the Red Dragon Book be collected? I'm really concerned!

Not much to say about good books! Don't be stingy with rewards!

The writing is good, I will continue to pay attention! 🤭

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Although Chu Da's update is okay, can it be properly exploded? I waited a few days to watch it, but it's still not enough!

Although it is not popular, it is really well written! It can be seen that data does not mean everything! Come on, author!

The data is indeed terrible. There is just one person who insists on voting every day.

The first few chapters are too confusing, but the rest are quite good. Unfortunately, 90% of people only read the first few chapters. It might be better to change them.

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