The True Explanation of Taiyin

The books that were originally put in were put out again?

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Generally speaking, the subject matter is acceptable, and the plot is relatively rich, but there seems to be some shortcomings in the characterization of the characters. Regarding the development of the plot, the effect is very good if the progress is appropriately accelerated. If the protagonist is highlighted and the foreshadowing is expanded, then the book will be quite good! Although it is just a flaw, it is very important! My [Q] is 6|2|5|6|4|1|4|9|2... I am willing to encourage you! !

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He actually wrote "**" openly in the introduction.

Author, you are very careful in describing the characters, but you are too careful and lose the distinction of priorities. In order to describe those talented people, the author is often reduced to a sideshow. Just like this plot, the supporting roles each have more roles than the protagonists. It is not easy to assign an opponent, but it is a passerby @@(Anonymous). I can't figure out who is the talented one. It is the protagonist. It is recommended that you don't write every scene so clearly. You can use the protagonist to gather information or speculate and then supplement the plot. In this way, the protagonist's presence will be more important. The protagonist is not strong now, so you don't have to write some powerful characters. Although this enriches the world, it weakens the protagonist. Many writers from Qidian have a good grasp of this aspect, you can refer to it. A little suggestion, come on author! 🤭🤭🤭

There are a lot of typos, and the plot is pretty good, but the protagonist's presence is too low, just like Kuroko.

Do you have an outline? ? Or write whatever comes to mind? ? ? It's very confusing to write here and there and knock here and there.

Poem No.: Looking at the sword in cold light, how many honors are there on the sword? There is no need to consider the common people for the incense. Even if the smoke of the river disappears and the clouds are buried, the lonely sun still shines on the ancient tombs. 😄