Jin Yong Martial Arts Academy

The characters and plot in Volume 3 are too rough

I've traveled through time, I've traveled through time, I've finally traveled through time, come on

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I think those two are enough to tie with Yin Zhiping

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Describe vivid images. It's just that pig's feet don't look like a time traveler. Yitian World is okay, Shujian feels that Pig's Feet is like a native, and doesn't feel like a time traveler. There is an illusion that the natives have gained the memories of future people.

Very good, it can be turned into a TV series! ! !

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I never expected that Wang Dachui traveled through time?

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In terms of details, first, both poems are original from time to time. Don't forget that the male protagonist is a technical nerd. I have never seen a technical nerd who can recite poems. Besides, if you are good at poetry, you can't mess around with it, right? Let's talk about Aunt Qiong Yao first. The male protagonist doesn't want to be penetrated and wants to go home. Is it fun to watch him being so passionate and ambitious? If he is ecstatic about time travel and hopes to make a big deal, let alone plagiarism, this poem is quite appropriate, so does the author contradict himself in the first chapter? In the second song by Jiang Jie, the male protagonist is a senior who is about to graduate, right? He's not an old man of seventy or eighty years old. Even if he is worn, he doesn't have the tone of having experienced all the vicissitudes of life, right? Those who didn't know better thought it was an old man who had been dumped a hundred and eighty times who had traveled through time! Since you are heading to a prestigious university for a bright future, you should be full of vigor and vitality. You can't have a mentality that makes you look a few decades older if you time travel, right? To catch a bug again, there is a problem with the segmentation of the second paragraph. Looking at the entire first chapter, is the author himself confused? The transition between memories and reality is very stiff and not natural enough. The beauty's description is mixed with the scene of the small town where she lives, and I don't know what to say. Furthermore, as mentioned before, Xu Zheng had already seen the person coming clearly, and only with a flash of lightning did he realize that the other person was a character. Did he deceive me with his eyes? A half-grown child of about ten years old is still very delicate and beautiful. Is this the result of eating too many hormones and maturing prematurely? Ahem, I'm being venomous again. Let's go have lunch. Come back and continue. Please forgive me for being such a bad old woman~~

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