Super Space-Time System

The world view of the authors is too poor. Most of the time, a group of people fight among themselves and fight for each other. People have no concept of sharing. They can only plunder and fight for whether I have it or not, whether I will live or die... After the plot unfolds, it is usually a cycle of constant fighting, plundering, bullying and being bullied. There are absolutely no bright and positive things such as "friendship, courage, victory", only some distorted things are constantly exaggerated and justified. The most common bridge section is ... In this world where strength is respected and the weak eat the strong, those powerful and powerful people who are in a slightly bad mood will not be able to reason with you at all. There are too many reasons to kill people. For example, I'm in a bad mood, I don't like it, or I'm attracted to something on you, or I just want to grab some money or sex along the way. ... The road to cultivating immortality must be long and difficult. But I don't want to live a mediocre life and face the pain of birth, old age, illness and death. I no longer want to be viewed as an ant by others, and I don't want others to easily decide my fate. I have my free will. For my life and my freedom, I must continue on the path of cultivating immortality. This is my oath. ... This is a completely different place from the stage he knew in the past. It is more tense, more cruel and darker, more bloody and inhumane. It looks relaxed, but when you are in it, you are tensed almost all the time, because if you are not careful, not only will you be in danger, but your family will be miserable as well. ... It won't conflict with other exercises, so can it be practiced together with other exercises? However, more than 30,000 words have been memorized. What about this black cloth? Pass it on to future generations? Nonsense, of course it will be destroyed. … People are suspicious of each other, every stranger may be a potential enemy, and the saddest thing is, so are your relatives and friends. There are a lot of other worldviews with Five-Star Red Flag characteristics. For example, when he found out that the other party could not be offended, he kicked him and yelled: "You are confused, who can't you offend? Offend him?" ? ? ? Do you mean it's okay to offend the little guy? Reading books that distort values ​​like this can only cultivate people with wrong values, right? They are all hysterics, right?

Come visit Jun who is working hard and insist on writing the story in your heart. We all have our own unique thinking and unique insights. Naturally, we also have our own stories in our hearts. Don't look at the current trend or deliberately chase the present. It is just the present. With a tenacious heart, believe that you are the trend of the future. I believe that your works will be loved by thousands of people in the future. Don't stop your fingers from typing on the keyboard. You will definitely be able to do it, because you are the style of the future and you are the mainstream of the future. Come on, let's encourage each other.

Insufficient level, relatively novice plot concept

This is the second time I have read this book. When I saw Lin Yun, I really didn't dare to get into it. I just looked through the book reviews. There was nothing else. Tian Boguang's book was nothing. I just endured it. . But if Lin Yun has something that is not her own (and she will accept it in the future depending on the author's intention), she doesn't dare to fall into the trap... There may be many such examples in reality, but for us, the frustration of the protagonist in the novel is nothing.. Light abuse is nothing. Emotions are pure in it... As long as there is no severe abuse. Accept... There is one more thing. If Lin Yun hadn't betrayed and then found the protagonist, I don't think many people would be disgusted with this. Even if Lin Yun had a child, I think more people would be able to accept it... But you write it like this now... After reading so many books, it's weird for you to design this paragraph like this...

He was poisoned at the beginning, and even blasphemed against Xiao Longnu on behalf of Yin Zhiping

Haha, the author is actually a rabbit (selling butt), awesome

Why fight back only after hitting? ? What is the author doing, seeking death? ?

It's obviously a fun story about traveling through different worlds, but it has a sadistic heroine. Are you afraid that too many people will read it?

I hope that if I open a new book and continue this setting, I won't write the plot in such a cruel way. To be honest, every world and every character will really test the heart.

You guys may not know this, but the author is also the number one person in the Green M Bastard Circle.

This book is adapted from the author's personal experience

The author is also very famous in gray space. If you are interested, you can check it out.

Devouring the laws of heaven and earth, seizing the karma of cause and effect, and turning fate for one's own use - he is a cultivator who defies heaven and earth.

People always make progress or decline in criticism and abuse. Fortunately, the author is the former, and his new book has made obvious progress. Come on⊙▽⊙

I can no longer hold back the passion in my heart and decided to give you 999 likes

I can no longer hold back the passion in my heart and decided to give you 999 likes

I think it should be placed in fantasy or science fiction.

Then I wanted to see what he would do after seeing the male protagonist. . . The result of 220 surprised me. . Horrible. . I'm afraid I won't be able to afford to be hurt if I keep reading. . Directly block the boss 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭. . Can you give me some strength🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

I originally thought it was weird when I saw the heroine calling the protagonist's boyfriend on the phone in Chapter 111, thinking it was a clerical error by the author. However, I didn't expect that in Chapter 112, when the heroine and the protagonist met, the heroine actually called the hero "boyfriend". . . . . . . . Brother, have you ever seen a couple in love calling each other "girlfriend" and "boyfriend" to each other's face? ? ? Do you think this is an introduction to others? . . . And in which novel have you seen such a title appearing between lovers? ? ? Or when you meet your girlfriend, you will say, "Girlfriend, what are you going to do???". . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Although I am poor, I can still recommend and support

Sweat, I just finished watching Brother Corpse and came to comment. Damn, from the beginning until Brother Corpse is not very abusive except in the real world (not to mention Lin Yun, he abuses Cheng Xiang), the male protagonist has been abused in the emotional scenes in other planes and cannot stop at all. The male protagonist is also often abused by bosses in the plane, and even gives away drugs that can quickly increase his strength without side effects. Although it was to defeat the boss at the time, it was still very unpleasant. In the 30 years of Taoism, the male protagonist has done so many tasks, traveled through so many worlds, and been abused so many times. However, the book is still very good to read, but the constant abuse makes people feel uncomfortable. I hope the author will show this later. Even if he doesn't write happy articles, he won't be so sad, okay? Finally, I would like to ask the author, have you been emotionally traumatized or have masochistic tendencies?