Demonic Supreme Lord

Unexpectedly, this book has nearly 700,000 words. A super low-level mistake and a lack of writing power have surfaced together, which is enough to conclude this book. What kind of super low-level error? I won't talk about it yet. Let me first talk about the upgrading path of general online novels, that is, the protagonist keeps upgrading and defeats the corresponding villain until he is the strongest in the universe. It can be said that this is the case in every book. It can be said that the benchmark for the protagonist's upgrade, as well as the sense of satisfaction, lies not in numerically speaking how many levels he has been promoted to, or how many genius treasures he has obtained, but also in his killing of the corresponding villains. For example, the protagonist was bullied by a Foundation Builder in the past. Later, through hard work and luck, the protagonist was promoted to a Foundation Builder, and then fought back and abused the Foundation Builder who bullied him before. This is a sense of satisfaction and a sense of upgrade. It's that simple. The arrangement of the villains in each book is roughly like this: small villain, medium villain, major villain, and the outer world (the protagonist is unaware of the alien BOSS at the beginning) After the protagonist has finished killing these villains, the book should be finished. Is there such an arrangement in this book? Yes, and it is obvious that the minor villain is Lei Hao, the medium villain is Bai Jin, and the major villain is Lao Mo. Heaven outside the sky (not available yet) Okay, I've written more than sixty words in this book, what's the situation now? Xiaobai: Lei Hao had a fight with the protagonist not long ago (it was actually the first time the two of them had fought). Because he was outnumbered, Xiaobai was injured and ran away. Counterattack: Bai Jin, the protagonist is still looking up. Not long ago, he was holding his thighs to make him feel afraid of him. Looking at this posture, it is estimated that a million words ago, the protagonist did not dare to confront him head-on. As for the big anti-Old Demon... Just don't say it. Okay, except for the villain, let's talk about the protagonist's adventures. There are many, there are really many. The spiritual talismans are like pieces of paper, there are a lot of Ganoderma lucidum, this ghost recording, that ghost ghost, this secret book and that secret book. There were so many, so many that I was dazzled and couldn't even remember them. However, all I know is that the villain, the gangster surnamed Lei, is still there, and they had a fight not long ago. The protagonist was three against one, and he took advantage. It was not easy at all. As for Bai Jin, I dare say that the protagonist doesn't even have the courage to challenge now. He just insists that he is invincible and needs to be outsmarted. I am not a reckless person... Please, this is not an official document, why are you making so many twists and turns? Nearly 700,000 words in, the villain is still there and still threatens the protagonist. I don't even know what the main character's previous adventures were for. More than 600,000 words, still emphasizing the power of foundation-building monks... Maybe some people are dissatisfied, has the protagonist never killed anyone? Foundation-building monks have also been killed, indeed, but those people have a characteristic, they are all passers-by, they are just taken care of, and they do not have much role as a benchmark. You can look at those red books, those small villains, medium villains, and major villains who appear in the beginning, and what happens after 700,000 words, and then you will know how low-level the mistakes made in this book are. Let's not talk about Internet articles, let's talk about Jin Yong who has been studied in depth by Brother Yi. Take The Condor as an example (this is a book with a relatively obvious upgrade rhythm). From the time Guo Jing became sensible, Yang Kang was a minor villain, Ouyang Ke was a medium villain, and Ouyang Feng was a major rebel. If you calculate how many words it takes for Guo Jing to defeat Yang Kang, how many words it takes to defeat Ouyang Ke, and how many words it takes to keep pace with Ouyang Feng, you will understand how problematic the upgrade rhythm of this book is. Just imagine, Yang Kang had his first fight with Guo Jing after more than 600,000 words, and Guo Jing still had the advantage of having more people. What would it be like?

The author's earlier book. There were several poisonous points, and I finally gave up the book 1 Open the powerful ghost, knowing that it will definitely come out. There is no need to risk it in person. I feel that the author did not think it through when writing it at the beginning 2 Fighting with three Qi refining layers is completely inconsistent with the previous setting 3 The relationship with Duan Wei. I was a little disgusted I couldn't continue, so I gave up the book.

The first chapter is full of nonsense, and the whole article has nothing to do with pig's feet. Pig's feet are weak and incompetent, and they are fighting for wits. Are you mistaken? Throwing stones is fighting for wits. It should be said that he lied to them and said that he was not feeling well, or went home to see and then said that he was not suitable for cultivation, delaying time and so on. Since he was accepted into the Demon Sect, why bother writing about Lingxiao Palace coming here? It has nothing to do with cattle and horses. It is too confusing.

The male protagonist's character is too weak and incompetent. He has to fight with wits and courage, but he doesn't notice it at all. He has already fallen into the devil's door, and he thinks about going home to his mother and sister all day long. He is really a little poisonous. If he fights with wits and courage, he doesn't notice it. This book is a bit too poisonous now.

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From a sense of immersion. Proper kneeling and licking is the way to go. . But the licking was careless, just like instinct. . I really can't bring it in, so I abandoned the book.

The sword and shield were hit hard to the ground by the heavy sword. It's very good and looks good.

Why do you feel that this introduction is self-contradictory

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Just wait for this book to become a hit. 😁

Borrowing ghosts to kill people Kill two birds with one stone Everyone praises the team Little did he know that he had already been seen through by the enemy. Smart becomes smart-aleck How to ask someone to take over If I remember correctly This is not the first time The protagonist did something he thought was brilliant In fact, it was clearly seen in secret He also said that it was a long time ago when he saved Senior Sister. In fact, the protagonist just did useless work In fact, people don't need him to save them at all. Brother Yi, why are you doing so many twists and turns? Can't you see the protagonist?