Rebirth Contract Fantasy World

The author put a lot of effort into giving the protagonist abilities, but the abilities are too complex and varied, and they are not perfect at all. Many abilities are useless and a waste of energy. It is better to eat them all with one move. The protagonist is complicated, messy and weak 😅. The one with a super-sailor body is just for fun. Saiyans themselves are talented in fighting and cultivating Qi. You didn't see it here, but they were named just to attract attention.

You are a great author. I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and you managed to persuade me to quit in just two chapters. That's fine.

After reading the first chapter, all I can say is that it's poisonous! The kind of bloodline that can connect to other worlds and have a certain stalemate, and the entire family takes Pangu as their surname? The protagonist's original name is Ni Tian? I can accept these too. But you gave him a schizophrenia, how can the two personalities still force each other? Sorry for being too poisonous! Don't vomit or complain, this is still the content of the first chapter. . . . . .

Don't read it, it's extremely poisonous! Really, I have never seen such a bad book. Let's not talk about anything else. The surname of Pig's Foot is Nitian and the name is Pangu. Is it powerful? I just want to ask if you are afraid of it?

I gave up the book after reading the first chapter. I couldn't complain about the name of the main character and my life. It was amazing. It feels like it was written by a high school student who doesn't understand anything.

Reading a novel for the first time! I can't help but complain! It was quite a creative idea! But the author is really too verbose! The narrator explains too much! The word count is too low, but the key is that reading the narration feels like reading a textbook before, which is boring! What a pity for a good idea

I just want to say, I have a date with a zombie, do you understand? The book you wrote is still very good, whether it is innovation, suspense, layout, including the golden finger opening, it is reasonable. However, I saw you saying that Zombie 3 was unreasonable, and I wanted to ask, is that unreasonable? Do you really understand it? What is Zombie 1 talking about, what is Zombie 2 talking about, you know, to be honest Zombie 3 is not easy to understand. When I watched it for the first time, to be honest, I didn't understand it very well, because there are many shots in Zombie 3 that appear in flashbacks, and there will be some time and even space confusion. Actually, putting all this aside, according to the setting of your book, in addition to Zombie 1, some may become a contract world, Zombie 2 and Zombie 3 cannot be contracted. In your setting, Journey to the West cannot be contracted into a world, and Zombies 2 and Zombies 3 are even more impossible. Characters like Tathagata and Guanyin have already appeared in Zombie 1 (these characters have the power to destroy the world, such as Tathagata's Purifying Mantra). I don't need to say more about Nuwa, General, and Nuwa who are higher up in Zombie 2. The God who created human beings, General: In the finale of Zombie 2, had General kept his hands on Kuang Tianyou, could Kuang Tianyou, who had just been promoted, beat Jiang Chen? Zombies 3 can be said to have reached the limit. Not only did it appear, the human king Fuxi, Our Lady of Yaochi, Ksitigarbha, Destiny, and what a catastrophe is, but also those: heaven, earth, man, and the three strange books. Do you think the setting in your current book can be contracted? Zombie 1 is equal to Journey to the West, let alone 2 and 3.

I really wanted to read it but was dissuaded by the first chapter.

The creativity is very strong, but the writing is a bit messy. I would like to ask about the New World and how the Contract World is divided. Is the New World the main world where the protagonist currently lives, or is it something else? Also, are there six special Contract Worlds for the protagonist? There is no such thing at all. Finally, be supportive. Give a reward. Although not much

Never write the world in online novels into the infinite stream, which will make people not want to continue reading (the world in Qidian novels will always have pitfalls that cannot be rounded, no matter who wrote it)

I feel uncomfortable when I see the protagonist's name

I was stunned from the beginning.

Aren't these the opening armors better than those? ?

I barely read more than 200 chapters. The author's world view is too naive.

I couldn't stand it after reading two pages of the first chapter, it's so poisonous

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If you stay in one plane for a long time, you'll have nothing to do and dress around.

As soon as you spoil the story, I will turn over the chapters.

Write a hammer, if you don't have a martial arts level, how do you know which one is better? ? ? ?

It's easy to make drama.

The meaning of the heart (｡･㉨･｡)ﾉ♡ I love you so much

The author writes so well! ! ! ! ! !

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Sharingan? ? ? There is deeruseful

Too wordy, the plot is average, just watery

I found this book and read ten lines, and I immediately felt sick. Is this an old antique setting from a certain life? I felt like I was vomiting after watching Chelsea. Then I went back and suddenly saw that it was from 14 years. That's okay. It turned out to be an old antique. This routine has that taste.

After reading the name of the protagonist, I knew that this book was poisonous. Who is he? His name is Pangu. Doesn't it sound powerful?

If you don't write about the interstellar genre, "Swallowing the Starry Sky", you will waste your creativity in vain.

Good books, good articles, so wonderful, keep up the good work!

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