An Artistic Life

What should I say, I really enjoyed reading it at first, and felt that there was hope of becoming a god book, but when I saw the part about Xu Yuexun, I felt a little uncomfortable. Furthermore, what I said to the Chinese teacher made me gradually doubt the author's orderliness. Then the conversation with Josefina made me very uncomfortable. And the part about choosing a singer, traps, and never seeing each other again, it felt very, very childish. So I read it lazily, gave up, and stopped reading the rest of the plot. Also, I have a subscription to this book. I don't mean to blackmail you or anything, I'm just a pure reader. If I feel hurt in any way, I'm sorry.

The writing is too watery! First of all, the author wanted to write a refreshing story about rebirth, but he failed to do several things: 1. The age was chosen too young. If the age is junior high school and high school, then a large part of your audience will be junior high school and high school students. It cannot win the hearts of real book readers, because the majority of people who read books are people from high school, college and society. 2. If the protagonist is too young and you are too outrageous, it will be too explicit and artificial. Reading experience is too bad 3. Author, you should act according to your ability. You know what your writing style is like. If your writing skills are not up to par, you should use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, and make up for it with new ideas in subject matter and ideas.

Although it is no coincidence that it was not a book, The Old Man and the Sea was published too early. Although it is a short story, it is difficult to follow up on the vicissitudes of life. The height is too high, how to go up? ? ?

I thought this persimmon was very soft, haha

Let me make it clear at the beginning that I am not trying to criticize this heroine. I personally like her very much. What I want to say here is the author's flaws in this character's setting. According to the protagonist, Xu Yuexun is an innocent girl. The male protagonist tells us all about her life story when we meet her for the second time. She also doesn't know the skills necessary for a killer: acting skills that can kill all first-class actors in an instant and a certain amount of intelligence and scheming. Of course, the character setting in the article is very convenient for the male protagonist to hook up with, and it is very loving for all book lovers and soft girls. But for Xu Yuexun's identity, this is a big flaw. Xu Yuexun was born into a family of killers. Of course, the killers here should be more accurately said to be agents who perform the country's secret assassination missions. Putting aside the fact that the agents are not trained and brainwashed by the state but inherited by the family. Even if Xu Yuexun has never killed anyone, she should possess some of the necessary qualities of an agent and a killer. Please, Sister Xu was raised as a killer from a young age. Does the family of killers only teach them fighting and shooting when training killers? Don't those psychological qualities and thinking patterns need to be cultivated from an early age? How did the members of this family of killers pass down the family? Do they have the aura of the protagonist, or do the task targets and their bodyguards both have IQs of 9 when performing tasks? ! ! Of course, it can also be explained that her family doted on her and did not want her to be a killer, so she deliberately isolated her from these dark sides. However, note that the author said that her mother supported her becoming a killer, but this mother did not pay attention to her training. Is this the stepmother of the legendary Snow White? Ahem, it's a very important thing here, so I'll say it again. I'm not criticizing Xu, but I'm complaining about the inconsistency between identity and character settings. Of course, a pure and beautiful girl like Xu Meizi cannot come from today's materialistic society. She can come from a scholarly family, but of course she must be involved in martial arts. Ordinary martial arts families can also be used. If they are from a killer family, then I think Huang Rong or Huan Huan have better characters. This is a character analysis. It is not intended to be sensational, but to express my feelings. I would like to ask the author to pay more attention when writing the book. At the same time, I also wish Li Kuangda to make more progress in writing the book and achieve better and better results. Subscribed.

Not kitsch, not arrogant, well written!

Indeed, Rongruo's poem "Magnolia" is indeed consistent with the format of the poem. If it were published in the name of Gu Yang, it would not be an exaggeration to say it was poetry. But it appears in the text. That poem by Nalan Xingde. I once saw in another urban article that the person also wrote a poem about Rong Ruo's magnolia flowers. I want to say something here. Rongruo's sentence "If life is just like the first time we met" comes from "Magnolia?" There is no doubt that the poem "The Ancient Jue Jue Ci Cambodian Friends" is the poem. As for the brand Magnolia, the words are the same as those in seven-character rhymed poetry. So a lot of people admit their mistakes. Of course, I'm not complaining, I just want to say something to prevent some people from being misled. I think the phrase "If life is just like the first time we met" is a poem. Also, please do your best to update.

The first thing that emerged was Nalan Rongruo

Li Kuang is an old bird, right? The writing style is so luxurious and sharp, and the previous parts are already very well written. If the quality does not drop, it will definitely be a sacred book in the time travel and entertainment series. Come on Li Kuang, I will always follow you and support you.

I was originally looking at a book that was so fresh and refreshing, but a female killer suddenly appeared and taught me the six moves... This style has completely dropped, and it is really a failure.