Supernatural Game

It feels unsatisfying to update it every day. I saved 100,000 words and finished reading it in a while. I don't know how long it will take to gain weight before I can continue reading.

After reading the book "Game of Superpowers", I believe everyone has the same feeling: smooth plot, coherent plot, and solid writing. There is a sense of urgency from the beginning, and the reader quickly becomes involved. Then as the plot develops, when the first volume is finished, people breathe a sigh of relief. The power setting in this book is a highlight, but also the source of contradiction: acquiring other people's powers. You can see the contradictions of human nature from it, and the emotions are well grasped. There is nothing bloody and the plot is reasonable. Of course, after saying good things, now it's time to give opinions. First, the smooth plot of this book is both a strength and a flaw. Because the plot is too straightforward, and the plot relies mostly on fighting, it lacks the twists and turns of the story and easily makes people feel tired. Secondly, the subject matter of this book is novel, but it also limits the scope of the book. There are too few urban descriptions. Although the theme is a game with supernatural powers, repeated battles will easily make people feel tired, which will inevitably cause some readers to give up. Thirdly, there are too many fighting scenes, and some sections are too long. Because Hu Mou writes very carefully, some sections are too long, which is not conducive to reading. At the same time, the growth and development of the protagonist can be read in one sitting, and there is no impressive plot. Of course, these are all minor flaws, and there are no problems with the writing. You can safely collect it. This book has many attractions, but because it is a relatively unpopular science fiction genre, there are relatively few readers. I hope Hu Mou will not be discouraged. Also, here are some suggestions. If you want to embody cruelty and conform to the theme of a game with superpowers, you can gradually improve the protagonist's abilities, including intelligence, judgment, etc., So as to adapt to later development. The protagonist's qualifications are a good foreshadowing. Through this foreshadowing, many plots can be introduced, but remember to grasp the story's origins and transitions. Only in this way can the overly straightforward plot of this book be changed. Appropriately simplify the language. Although detailed description is a good thing, sometimes it will appear redundant. Reduce the appearance of long paragraphs and write paragraphs that are suitable for reading. Only in this way can people have the desire to read on, otherwise most people will just scan it. Similarly, the scene can be expanded. The first primitive jungle scene is too small, so the description does not have a sense of scene. It just gives people an empty feeling. Only by setting up a big scene and a twists and turns of the plot can a big climax be written. Although fighting is indispensable, if you reduce the fighting and increase the plot, you can avoid this boring feeling. Okay, there is actually no big problem with this book, but it may be limited to a certain pattern due to the limitation of the subject matter. But in the later period, the development will get better and better. The higher the growth of the protagonist, the larger the scenes will be. Therefore, please feel free to collect Hu Mou's books and keep reading. The plot of this book is worth reading. The above is purely a personal opinion, and may be full of nonsense, but in general, best wishes to Hu Mou~ END

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