Plot Spoilers

Name: Plot Spoilers
Author: Four Steps Away

剧情破坏者

by Four Steps Away (距离四步)

Status: Ongoing
Length: 36k Words
Genre: Sci-Fi
Audience: Male
Subgenre: Time Travel
Updated: 12y ago
Source: Qidian

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Synopsis

"Ding dong! Mission generation: Ask the host to find a way to put these underwear on Spider-Man's head, and then let him fight the second generation of Green Goblin! Punishment for mission failure:..., Mission completion reward..." Lin Ran looked at the unconscious Parker and smiled proudly. Picking up the modified 502 glue, he put on the underwear that smelled like obsession that day and put it on Spider-Man's mask. "Ding dong! Mission generation: Ask the host to gather all the passengers on the Titanic and play this movie in the lobby before the Titanic hits the iceberg! And ask Jack and Rose to jump into the sea voluntarily. The mission will be completed! Punishment for mission failure: the ship is destroyed and the host dies, and the mission completion reward..." After the movie was played, Lin Ran looked at the stunned people and spoke the contents of the mission in a trembling voice. In the system hall, Lin Ran looked at the clown and asked in a hateful tone "Why should I do such a thing, why on earth?!" New book for newbies! Please recommend! Please collect]

Reader comments

[Comment] The plot control is not mature enough
The plot control is not mature enough, and the transition is very blunt, which needs to be improved... The description is slightly lacking in agility and the sense of substitution is not deep enough... The logical thinking is a bit confusing, and the protagonist's personality is very unstable...
12y ago
[Comment] The writing is a bit messy
In some places, the preface does not match the postscript. But the story is good.
12y ago
[Comment]Style
It seems that the first story is more joyful and innovative.
12y ago
[Comment] Let's fix it. What kind of task should I change?
After I changed the mission, the rest of the story was really messy. After reading two pages, I stopped reading. It was too ridiculous. Superman let the bullet go to KO. It was so unnecessary. Who else said that Superman had to face the plane's shooting head-on, so he just dodged it for the sake of convenience? Now, it's like a child having a snowball fight with someone. If the snow hits you, it's not a threat. Who's too stupid to take the hit? The first reaction must be to avoid it. Besides, Superman's speed is much faster than the missile. Besides, the shell is not dirty or smelly when it hits you.
12y ago
[Comment] Chinese martial arts versus fantasy death knight plus a group of tyrants?
What did you make of a simple urban science fiction movie? Fighting zombies, okay, I can accept it. Fighting tyrants is not impossible, but a group of them? Plus a fantasy death knight. Do you think Chinese martial arts are so awesome? Or are you out of your mind?
12y ago