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[Comment] I just started watching it and there are a lot of bugs.
The first one is an obvious mistake you will make in this kind of book, which is the problem of dialogue during battles. For example, when Puck beat Sven and Lion, you wrote the plot where the air stab can stab but the human stab cannot. In this case, how can you find so much time to say so many words to Sven? Also, Chapter 36, which is such a long sarcasm, even Jay Chou can't say it as eloquently as you. In addition, there are some bugs in the details, such as the size of lina and lion. You wrote that you can see the line passing by, but that is not the case. The animation effect of the magic line appears instantly. Moreover, although the actual damage caused by the spell effect is indeed not enough for the opponent to react, don't forget to add the hero's spell-casting action. In the game, it is difficult to dodge. One is because it is either controlled to death or the team battle is chaotic. In normal lanes, you just throw it to the puck. Not to mention professional players, there are a lot of people you can dodge in high-level ladder rooms. In addition, I am also very surprised about the equipment. I just watched the 2nd battle. Why are they all using secret techniques? Doomsday has already released Soul Ring. Phase gank or prosthetic legs for damage are better than secret magic. Puck's DPS accounts for a large proportion of Pu's attacks. Generally speaking, they have artificial legs. Recently, phasers have become popular in TI4. There are generally two types of props for Secret Techniques. One is for the team (for example, if the main force is short of mana, use it as a support, or if there is a thunder card on the opposite side, use 2 to 3 pairs of Secret Techniques to restore mana). The other is for some high-consuming heroes to support mana (for example, doomsday, pandas and the like have no intelligence growth, and only one set of skills has no mana, or Zeus, although he has no mana, Although the intelligence is not low, but the set is almost empty of mana), don't use the secret magic item as a magic item. A CD of about one minute will return 100 mana points, which means that the mana return is less than 2 points/second. If you use a magic bottle control F, not counting the bottle transporting home, you can get 225 points with just magic in 2 minutes.
In this kind of old novel, a lot of people talk to themselves. They clearly don't explain clearly, but they think they are very clear. They say they love Dota. What are you writing about?
[Comment] On how disgusting the Lord God is.
Under normal circumstances, if the protagonist of a book has a completely irresistible big boss, the usual method is to erase his personality, such as the Heavenly Way of the Great Desolate Style and the Lord God of the Infinite Style. Or downplay its influence and give it few opportunities to appear, such as the emperor in traditional martial arts novels and Hongjun in the Great Desolation. Or give the protagonist a golden finger that can secretly resist him, such as various Infinite Flow Honghuang Flow fan works. Like this book, we arrange a person with personality and consciousness who can suppress the protagonist to death, with the purpose of playing the protagonist to death. He tells the protagonist all day long that you are just a toy of your father, and I can play with you however I want. He is playing with you to death, and the protagonist has no ability to resist. I don't know what the author's purpose is, maybe it's to bring people into the protagonist to experience the pleasure of being tortured. Speaking of which, I estimate that more than half of the people who removed this book were disgusted by this main god. If you want to give the protagonist a powerful golden finger, you must suppress his upgrade speed. This is the reason why the book looks so good in the early stage. Now you have not controlled the protagonist's upgrade. After a few chapters, the background has not been laid out, and the protagonist's skills have already become bugs. Now you have to use the main god, a big killer, to suppress it. So the author set up the protagonist's bad luck to weaken his battle victory, and also created a main god to add various difficulties to the protagonist. I can understand this, but the most stupid thing about the author is to set up a complete personality for the main god, and let him pop up from time to time to disgust people.
[Comment] Big Love DOTA 5 votes are given away
Daai DOTA 5 tickets are given away 🌹🤭🌹
[Comment] Are you sure that for a level 3 butcher without shoes, the bent tip of the hook when walking out has practical significance?
The butcher's hook has a range of 125, and the level 2 hook has a range of 700. The butcher was crushed to death, has no shoes, and has only a movement speed of 285. There is indeed no need to wait for the 0.51 Second cast backswing, as moving cancels the casting backswing. Are you sure such a butcher can come out with a visibly bent hook? Moreover, the protagonist has time powers, so the Butcher's position after taking the hook will not be noticed? Moreover, the curved hook is basically meaningless. There is no obvious curvature when there is no push. It is more meaningful to have the push extension hook. What is the situation in this legend?
[Comment] With the jumping knife, it is completely impossible for the protagonist to be hooked.
After all, the butcher's hook has a trajectory. Shouldn't the protagonist be able to hit the target every time he jumps 😅
[Comment] I am speechless about the divine hook
Wouldn't it be discovered as soon as the hook is drawn when the superpower is activated? So much time is not enough to hide.
[Comment] Good book support
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[Comment]Fatifying
6 Votes per day for fattening. If you don't have online banking, you can't make a reservation. You can only check it out. The only way is to give tickets every day. I have always supported 🌹
[Comment] Back in Time of Pig's Feet (That's what the big spider is called)
Why don't you want the pig's trotter when you go back in time? Do you want it when you want to fight 7 Monarchs?
[Comment] My prediction or suggestion for the next plot
After a team battle, only the Axe and the Butcher were left alive. However, the Butcher's blood was very low and was within the kill line. The ax rushed up to kill the Butcher with the bonus speed of killing others. At this time, our protagonist relied on his superpower and clicked on the piled carrion 0.01 Seconds before the kill. He decisively raised the blood a little. The kill failed, and then bit the rot with his backhand to open up the rot. The last trace of blood was hooked to death.
[Comment] See scene 19
You are playing games with your life, but others are playing games for the sake of games. If the Lord God arranges a victory mission, and then one of you retreats instantly, one gets disconnected, another receives a call, and one finds a girlfriend, then how do you break it? Although the author will definitely create various situations for the protagonist to successfully counterattack, this mode seems frustrating.
[Comment] The army line is on the high slope of Karl. The butcher's hook cannot reach that far, and the CD of the hook is too short.
Also, the hook CD is too short, right?
[Comment] Talking Butcher vs Carl
I immediately thought of a certain period of the war between the gods, where the butcher's consciousness scalded Carl to death, Carl bought his life to reward the sky fire, and finally the puppy destroyed the world...
[Comment] How many words are there in the group?
How many groups are there? By the way, I use the game name of the protagonist when I play DOTA2.
[Comment] Your sister's model has been changed a lot. It's not bad.
The model of dota2 is more exquisite.
[Plot] A BUG has been raised and I hope the author can correct it.
There is a plot in the chapters where the pig's feet are used as a geomancer, where VS jumps back after a substitution. However, VS and Butcher cannot equip weapons. I hope this can be modified.
Huh? Does anyone want to make egg tarts together?
[Comment] Luck should offset luck, right?
Witch Anatolia Zheng Lei's luck can increase the passive chance to 100%, and Yin Qingya's luck should be able to reduce the opponent's passive chance. Your basic chance is not 100% but is temporarily increased to 100% by the lucky ability. But our luck is not lower than yours, how can we still get critical hits again and again. Could it be that the lucky ability can only be effective on one's own heroes?
[Comment] It's just a drop in the bucket
Such a bad article, why can't you update five chapters a day?
[Comment] Butcher doesn't seem to have equipment to support agility, right?
Although the blood volume and attack are high, if the attack speed is not enough, it will definitely take time to fight against the Skeleton King, right? It is recommended that when writing such details, the editor simply calculates the attack speed based on the levels and equipment of both sides. This kind of data explanation and comparison can also be reflected in the article, otherwise just theoretical inference will not be strong enough. I still feel that I can definitely beat Skeleton King, but the time shouldn't be so fast that Ax King can't react. In addition, I personally think that everyone's operations in high-end games will not be too different, and the DOTAX settings do not allow X treasure accounts, right? What's the difference? It's awareness and mistakes. Whoever makes more mistakes and whoever makes mistakes at critical moments will lose. Therefore, when writing, please try to avoid saying that the opponent's operation is not sharp enough. You can think of a situation where both sides' operations are perfect, but someone makes a key mistake and the protagonist catches it. The third point I want to make is the protagonist's time control skills. I think we can dig deeper into it. The biggest feature of time control is the control of time, but this control does not extend beyond the protagonist himself. This means that the protagonist's own time can slow down when playing DOTA, but the hero controlled by the protagonist is still subject to the speed of the passage of external time. But what about the protagonist competing against the club in real life? When the protagonist himself participates in the battle instead of the hero controlled by the protagonist, the time control skill has a bug-like meaning, that is, the attack speed tends to be infinite, dear! Have you ever considered it? The last thing I want to say is some... BUGs. In the same way, when the protagonist's own time passes slower, this characteristic does not extend to other things. The keyboard still obeys normal time, right? Then when you slow down the time ten thousand times, it is equivalent to the keyboard being pressed ten thousand times faster by the protagonist's hand. Such a fast speed requires acceleration, and acceleration in a very short period of time requires a huge acceleration. Acceleration is proportional to force, so it will be very laborious for the protagonist to press the keyboard and mouse during time control. I have never considered it. . . There are also some bugs pointed out by the theory of relativity, which I won't mention. Anyway, the protagonist's time control is not achieved by approaching the speed of light, right? . I hope the owner can give a reasonable explanation for these things. . . Finally, I said that Lu Zhu has helped me regain my confidence in Qidian. It has been 8 or 9 years since I first spent money to read Lu Zhu. She must be a cute girl, right? ? ? ! !
[Comment] I didn't understand it at all when I saw Chapter 32
Why is there such a girl? Even though both parties don't know each other, they still make such bold moves and make all kinds of unreasonable troubles. Please don't do this. Author, please concentrate on writing the plot. You don't always describe girls.
[Comment] Regarding the issue of PA dodging CK critical strikes--
In Dota, critical damage ignores dodge. If both trigger critical hits 100%. . Obviously PA will die a heroic death.