Fighter Unparalleled

The novel has now reached 250,000 words. First of all, I have to express my feelings. It is not easy for the author to persevere. However, seeing it now, I think there are still a few points that need to be said. First, age seems to be a bit inconsistent. No matter Xuanji, Lutong or Xiaoxiao, they were just 6-year-old children in the beginning. Putting aside their abilities for the moment, this can be explained by differences in talent or something. Of course, it's okay to call them weird, but saying things like "Girl, let's go together" always feels slightly inconsistent. If the author wants to create a young and smart protagonist, it is understandable, but he still wants to control the degree. After all, age is there, and people have to care about it. Secondly, the novel is a bit strange in its mixture of ancient and modern styles. When I first read it, I thought this novel should be biased toward ancient times. However, when I see the words "chain restaurants" and "I'm so sorry," it seems to have a bit of a modern trend. Although this can make the language of the novel more humorous, it is not very harmonious after all. All I can say is that the author should be more cautious when writing. Third, in terms of structure, it seems a little confusing. When Xuanji and others entered Xuanyuan Hall, Wudaozi, Wang Po and others were fending off foreign enemies. In fact, if these two clues are written well, they should be quite good. However, it felt like the author was writing in a hurry, so the transition between the two clues seemed unnatural. The control over the plot still needs to be strengthened. However, overall, this novel is still good, and the layout is relatively large. Therefore, I am still looking forward to how the author will shape it later.

Moreover, your article is very imaginative and your writing style is also convincing. I support you. Come on, I wish you a steady flow of writing and a steady stream of "talent"!!

The beginning is very grand, and the pits dug are not bad, but the later stages must be controlled well, otherwise it will be easy to mess up.

Every time the protagonist's emotions break out, they feel particularly contagious and can impress every reader.

I like this book, I know it, but there are still many people who don't know it! Calling: All netizens who read this book, repost it to at least 10 website forums! Talk about this book to at least 10 friends!!

It means that this book has almost reached its peak on this subject, and the author is making further progress!

Keep up the good work, don't be a jerk, write according to your own ideas, you can do it

As a pure reader, I read this novel and found the plot and characters attractive enough. However, sometimes I felt there were some problems with the writing and I looked forward to better writing.

Even the supporting characters must go to great lengths to write out their characteristics. Personally, I think the author has done a pretty good job in this regard.

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Write slowly. I don't care if a book is updated quickly or slowly. I only care whether the book is worth reading. I don't want to say anything about writing, because when you write a book and look back at it, you will definitely have a lot of emotions. Never give up. Because we are with you on your way

I've been reading it since the first year of my freshman year. To be honest, the writing style of DA is not that great, but the story is still very attractive. I hope DA doesn't make the devil too evil. I'm a little scared when I read it. Keep up the good work!