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The Dark Apprentice is the first novel I read. Is there anything similar 🤝

All I can say is thank you for your novel. Thank you for your words, which let me see what fantasy is. Roland has always been fresh in my memory, but when I came here I found that The Dark Apprentice has been taken off the shelves, alas.

🥺Shui Da finally returns. After waiting for nearly half a year

"Dark Apprentice" by Sister Shui is my favorite Western fantasy literature and online novel. Ever since I accidentally discovered this book in the school library when I was in the first year of junior high school, I have been deeply immersed in it. I was fascinated by Moya's story. I even used the names of the characters in the book to give nicknames when playing games. I read all of Sister Shui's works at that time in one go. Because of this, I fell into the trap of fantasy literature, and later read The Dark Elf, Dragonlance, and many of Tolkien's works. Now, looking back ten years later, I still feel nostalgic for the time I spent hiding under the covers with a small Nokia tablet and staying up all night reading Sister Shui's novels. I am very happy to see that Sister Shui is still writing, as if those green years in the past have never been far away. I sincerely hope that Sister Shui will have a happy life, and at the same time continue writing novels, so that I, a wanderer in a foreign country, can have more spiritual comfort.

Next door, it's called "Strange Path". You can also see the off-the-shelf Apprentice and Roland next door.

Today I suddenly thought of The Dark Apprentice, so I searched for my wife's pen name, and I can still find it. Time... The Dark Apprentice is really good-looking, and this one should be good-looking too. 🌹

It's been updated! ! ! ! ! As expected, we are all stuck at home, so we have nothing to do.

Hmm... How to put it? As expected, I still prefer novels with female protagonists, but I only like Moya and Roland written by Shui Da (Ciel-chan is really miserable. Rather than liking her, I think I feel pity for her more...) Compared with the cliché heroine stories in the novels bought on the street for more than ten yuan, Shui Da's Dark Trilogy is really fresh in my memory. Especially Moya, I have to say that the character of Moya really made me fall into it and I couldn't extricate myself. Especially when Moya confessed his love to Sistar, I was so excited... And I first came into contact with the Dark Apprentice when I was in adolescence, and I didn't handle the relationship with my friends well. I seemed to be reading the third physical book (I remember it was borrowed by a boy in my class from the school library) Then I began to be attracted to Moya, and then I stayed up late on the Internet on weekends and read the entire Dark Apprentice in ten lines at a glance. Maybe it was out of love for Moya, right? I was eager for everyone to know about her, so I recommended her to the whole class for some reason. Although no one paid attention to her at first, everyone gradually became aware of her and started to take turns to take a look... After that, many classmates also fell in love with Dark Apprentice. Naturally, we have a common language with everyone, and the relationship has naturally become much better. Thank you Dark Apprentice, Shui University, and fate for letting us meet Otherwise, I don't know how I could have survived those years. Thank you Shui University for bringing such a good work.

It took 8 years to write a novel, and the Anti-Japanese War is almost over. You are only halfway through the outline of the plot?

Or if you can't continue writing this book, you can try to open a new one 😭

I finally found this book again, is it possible to finish it?

*? Resurrected? 😭

Why don't you write about Bao Bo Shui? He has written so many good novels.

Is this the legendary book that makes people popular?

I watched The Dark Apprentice and Roland when I was in junior high school. I read some romances at that time and happened to encounter fantasy. I was fascinated by it. During the days of military training, I even took the opportunity to go home and watch it on the computer. I don't know why it is no longer available here...

Is it time for Sister Shui to have a pen name or seal her pen?

It's been ten years. I still remember this eunuch novel ten years ago. The eunuch is disgusting.

Is the author getting married and having children?

Happy New Year~~Come on big time[fn=2_3] I have read your book a long time ago, and I started it again today. I am very moved.

"Those brought by Count Essonne" Missed a word?

There have been a lot of things going on recently, so when I have time, I quickly hide in the world shaped by boiled water to draw energy while relaxing and escaping reality. Start reading from volume two. In some small places, I felt Bao Bo Shui's efforts, such as its efforts to integrate games and orthodox Western fantasy, which moved me a little. But I feel that the law of cause and effect should be used less or not at all. (In fact, I have read every book, but until now I have not understood what the law of cause and effect is. I came to read the story, and I am not willing to understand the theoretical knowledge. Arbitrarily understood as an extremely powerful... Thing that exceeds "magic science" and is close to defying the heavens. What magic cannot satisfy and achieve, it is left to the law of cause and effect.) In addition, I don't know if Mr. Baoshui has some "germphobia". For example, I don't want to use things that I have used or even abused in the previous books in the next book. Try to avoid repetition. In fact, I think it doesn't matter if other things are repeated as long as they are not the main part of the story. Even some repetition makes it easier for the reader to enter that world and focus on the story and characters themselves. The purpose of reading Western fantasy genres shouldn't be to seek "newness", right? There are still some old shortcomings that I won't mention, for fear of damaging the confidence of the boiled water master (there is always a sense of crisis that you will run away one day). I always only mention the shortcomings and not the advantages, but I am reading it and will continue to read it. The only way to read online novels is to read Lord Boiled Water.

The big trap finally started! I've been waiting for a long time~~

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It's so hard to finally see the Pillar of Fire! ! ! ! I've been waiting for a long time~~~~~~

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The world of swords and magic, hack and slash, map cannon, forbidden spells and some weird spells, praise! 🤭🌹🤭🌹

Vera: Daddy, I want that toy. I want that toy. Link: Okay, okay, I'll buy it for you after I eat in the big pit, be good.

Just like the title! ! ! 🌹🥺

It's a pity that I only saw the author's big book now. (I can't help it, I've gained weight just to see) You, the author, are a set person. Your writing is too dry, the plot is not rich enough, the details are poorly described, and there are basically no details. The inner activities are just plain water, and the various plots and atmospheres are not enriched at all. It is a waste of such a good story and setting. The novel is written like a game guide. I suggest the author to read Amber XX (the rendering of the historical background and the emotional enhancement are excellent), xxx Doomsday Syndrome (although it is very middle-class, but it is really immersive) Using the same writing method for one project, the first project of Edgar has only 67 chapters (like writing a game guide), while the first project of Doomsday Syndrome (with a full sense of immersion) has more than 100 W words written. . . The first time I met a dragon knight in this book, Peng, the dragon landed. The knight came down and said a few words to the protagonist, and Peng flew away. . Is this the right way to write it? The dragon knight appears for the first time! What about the description of the momentum when it fell? What about the description of the dragon's majestic appearance? What about the majestic description of the Dragon Knight? The part where you meet the demonized Thunder is too simple. With this kind of plot, I would be sorry to the audience if I didn't write eight chapters in ten! The shock when I first saw him, the memories of the past, the dangerous confrontation, the feelings afterwards, the final rest, especially the ashes, I forgot to take away. The lack of too much could have allowed for more words and a more comfortable description for readers. PS: Also in the book, I saw that fire conquers water, and water conquers earth... Where did the author see this? It's obviously the other way around. I just don't feel comfortable vomiting, and the author is totally surprised. . =========================================== The first-generation gods, second-generation gods, and third-generation gods are not good names. We should use something more meaningful. Ancestor (pillar) god, ancient god, hero god. . . The description of the Magic Goddess is too vulgar, just like the grocery shopping aunt, which is unbearable.

[Fn=2_4] Let's open a book of Xian Xia. The writing style of Kai Shui's Xian Xia (in the Shushan Swordsman Legend system, don't let mortals read it) will definitely be a hit, at least better than fantasy. Now Western Fantasy is in decline.