Demon-Eyed Asura

"So happy (●°u°●)", Xiaohun's Immortal Asura is a song I like very much. I just found out today that it is the theme song of this book. First add ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

I came here with Mo Tong Shura. I looked at the writing style of the introduction and saw that this novel is very well written. I can see that I have great writing skills and wild imagination. However, again, this style is not suitable for the current style of online novels. The two novels are like two people. I am very curious, what made the author change so much? It's really a good novel.

I hope you will overcome the suffering as soon as possible and get back on your feet!

Looking forward to the explosion next month~

It is the first time for the author to write a book. After more than 150 chapters, he has become quite clear about the two skills of digging holes and filling holes in writing novels. During the construction process of this book, I personally feel that the author is a well-deserved master of digging holes. However, I am really not completely satisfied with the author's hole-filling process from beginning to end. The title of this book, "Demon Eyes Shura", naturally uses the protagonist's pair of magic pupils as the main entry point to form the plot of the book. However, after all, the protagonist had his eyes and arms transplanted back then. The author wrote that I think the protagonist's arms, which were supposed to be like artifacts, gradually "disappeared from everyone". In fact, if you add the iron hand to the protagonist while writing the magic pupil, the plot of the book will be more exciting. After all, there is an extra sub-line, and it will always become more exciting. But now the author seems to have forgotten these arms, which always makes the protagonist and the readers feel a slight sense of discomfort when thinking about it. There are still places like this in the middle, and it has become a common phenomenon in this book that the author fills in the gaps but does not fill them up. This will make readers fall into a pit and be unable to get out. What a tragic thing. Another outstanding representative of the pit of dissatisfaction is Ms. Guanyue. Author, author, do you know that I really want to know whether the girl Guanyue is dead or alive now? I really don't understand the current life state of this woman! I remember that the author still spent a lot of pen and ink on the aspects related to this character. In the end, this person passed away with uncertainty about his life and death, and it was always difficult to explain... If you take a closer look at these unfilled holes by the author, you will find that they are all very small and unintentional mistakes. However, once these unintentional mistakes appear, the integrity of the book will be greatly affected. Therefore, the author's creative process needs to be more detailed in order to successfully become a god!

I have a weak question, will the author release a follow-up?

😃Also, wait for the new book!

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Come on, author! ! ! 🌹🌹🌹😄😄🥺🥺

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