Pillars of the Wu Family

Let's talk about his sister first, Sheng Ji... Various dedicated chapters were given in the early stage to cultivate feelings and create a sister who doesn't know what the situation is... But then she just skipped it, right? What's the point of writing about her. . It's something that can be dealt with in a few strokes Besides, Uesugi Kenshin's sister was raised with such virtue as the heir to the samurai family? All kinds of random things regardless of the importance. Is the author too influenced by the two-dimensional tsundere? When the protagonist meets certain women, it becomes almost impossible. He doesn't look like a man at all (this is the Warring States Period) I have seen more than 200 pictures so far, so since the author has finished the book, I won't say more. . If you can see some of my suggestions, I hope they can strengthen the role creation aspect.

Halfway through the movie, I didn't write a few serious battles, it was all about farming. It's really weird to suddenly turn into a bitch in the middle period, especially when you accidentally see someone taking a bath or something like that. It's embarrassing. Moreover, a woman who is independent, strong, and doesn't pretend to be polite to the protagonist is not popular with modern readers. There are too many similar people around her. On the contrary, the real Yamato Nadeshiko type is more popular. Just like Lin Daiyu, a woman who loves to be petty, likes to quarrel with Jia Baoyu and like to be coaxed. She may have been popular in the Qing Dynasty because she was rare, but there are too many such women in modern times. On the contrary, at least I personally prefer Xue Baochai.

Don't be fooled by the author's introduction of historical knowledge The IQs of all the characters will not exceed the level of primary school students The lowest poison point is that the 9-year-old protagonist, as a general, leads 7,000 people to annihilate 18,000 people from the Sanhao family If you cannot accept this, please do not open the book. This is already the least poisonous point, and there are countless more illogical ones than this. According to the author's description of the protagonist, unifying the world within one year is not a dream.

It was written without thinking. 400 People were divided into 5 teams and shot in 5 rounds to kill more than 1,500 people? Or 500 people shooting several rounds at a distance of 50 meters? What gun reloads so quickly?

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 223. The author basically doesn't understand the extent of European military equipment and combat effectiveness from the mid-to-late 16th century to the early 17th century. It's arrogant to think that Japan's rags are comparable to European armies. I feel like I've seen Showa's staff, and I don't like Showa.

The author is really bad at writing about women, and he is simply a dog-licker.

More than half of an article of more than 2,000 words is always historical trivia. I can't stand the second volume 🤫

Quite water... I read dozens of chapters, all of them talking about environmental history. The reason why I read Japanese Sengoku is to see the village war. Every fan book is so watery, and how many people are interested in this kind of book... Until I went to Kyoto, it can be summed up in one sentence: I traveled to the Kira family, and then Imagawa came over, so I had to escape to Kyoto... The rest is all water. I have fought several battles in other fandoms, and you haven't started here yet...

At that time, there was no such high level of asking for death. One achievement collapsed. This time, you are asking for thousands of dollars for death.

No wonder it's not likable, more than 50% don't write about the protagonist, but about other people. Why do you write so much about others? The secondary ones account for most of the words? Have you mentioned the main plot in one sentence?

It doesn't matter that I can speak Japanese, but can you please not always include that or more of this. It looks awkward. Also, the author has too many personal things, and there are too many historical facts that have nothing to do with the plot, which always goes off the rails. And it's too slow to keep farming.

The core idea of ​​this book is just one sentence: nobles will always be nobles, and common people will always be common people. Nobles whose families are in ruins are also nobles. Even if civilians are talented and capable in literature and military affairs, at most they will end up in a position where they only have the right to speak. When their term is over, they will get out immediately.

There is no doubt that she is a lolicon! More than 200 chapters are all about lolita! Do you mistakenly think that as long as you raise lolita and control it, we won't scold you for being a lolita control!

Can Japan call it the Warring States Period? Fighting with weapons in the countryside is more or less the same!

This protagonist has multiple personalities. He is acting stupid in the first half of the chapter, being cute in the second half, passionate in the last chapter, and crying like a woman in the next chapter.

Why didn't the protagonist resist Imagawa in Mikawa, but went to Kinki to confront Miyoshi? Isn't this a more powerful fight...

After looking at the first few pictures, I really can't accept the arrogant look of the protagonist.

Interestingly, I have gamified the protagonists of several novels

This book, like "Dreams of Tosa", has too many words to introduce the background! ! ! In fact, there is no need to introduce it in too much detail. People who read novels do not need to learn history. It would be better if the story is stronger. In this way, the author can write easily and it looks good. I wrote 100 chapters like this and only had one or two battles. It's really uncomfortable for readers who want to read Sengoku.

I can't stand it any longer, the writing is so bad, there are either missing words, missing punctuation, or too many words, and there are so many typos that it affects reading. The author also particularly likes to use transliteration of Japanese. The smell of house is overwhelming. It's not like this after 13 years😅

Imagawa Yoshimoto really knows how to choose the time to go to Luo. It's ridiculous that he can still encounter the same weather two years in advance.

Is there any extra chapter for Wu Mei? It doesn't matter if the extra chapter doesn't need to be updated daily or weekly. Just thank you for future Tokyo, modern derivative Warring States works, etc., Or explain some fragmentary stories that are not finished at the end.

Those who have already started calculating said...

If the writing technique is just different in style, the communication process between the protagonist and the Nanman woman is the most embarrassing and childish part of the book. No matter whether the protagonist is a teenage lord. He is still a father in his twenties and a super lord. When he communicates with that southern barbarian woman, he feels like a child. It is full of embarrassment. It is completely different from the heavy feeling when fighting with other daimyo.

He is strict with himself, but he also strongly supports the disgusting readers of Erwuzai. It is unreasonable not to attack the street.

Not bad, the writing and plot are excellent 🥱

I don't have too high requirements for a book written many years ago The advantage is that it is somewhat well-documented. There are some descriptions of the farming process, and the writing is not bad. When the little girl does not appear, the dialogue between the protagonist and the retainers is normal and relatively excellent Let's list the poisonous points 1. When the protagonist talks to the retainers, he will use some popular words that have been around for a few years. It is more dramatic and more frequent (it may not have been a problem back then) 2. The protagonist showed a strong admiration for young girls when he was about ten years old (a euphemism) 3. The protagonist cannot defeat Imagawa as much as Miyoshi. Of course, this is nothing, but the protagonist defeated Miyoshi's army with half of Miyoshi's strength, and later on, many prisoners were captured. That's not to say that the protagonist can't win all the time, but that's not the way to be happy. 4. Before going to Echigo, my relationship with the general (Daichi) broke down. That is to say, the author did not want the general to hold him back, so there was nothing wrong with it.

It's Bafu, it's Bafu 🥺 Well, why don't you ask the Ume Shogun to tell you 🤭 Also, don't finish it so quickly 🥺

The subject matter is good, but it's too ideal.

It is the best novel about the Warring States Period that I have read that does not include eunuchs. There are too few good Warring States novels.