Ancient Sword Tianfeng

The writing is quite good, cheers to the author＾0＾~!

If anyone has read this book, please leave a trace, even if it's a curse. Seeing someone passing by will always give you more or less motivation. Single player is really boring😊

There are millions of paths in the world, why do you and I choose this one? It's because we are both storytellers! Tell the story well and let others listen!

1. Looking at the name, I thought it was a classical fairy tale. 2. The four large characters on the cover are not very clear. This cover is relatively amateurish. 3. I have seen too many introduction formats, "There is no... Only..." It seems to be an introduction to a book by a great master. I have read too many introductions like this and just ignored it. 4. There is a cheat like the mysterious iron card in the first chapter. It is very direct, but your narration is very bland and not attractive enough. 5. In the second chapter, I always felt that the villain was a bit unreasonable, a waste of time, a bit cliche, and I didn't feel immersed in it at all. 6. In the third chapter, after the protagonist was humiliated, he made up his mind to take risks and practice. I always felt that this reason was a bit far-fetched. I continued reading a few chapters, but I didn't want to continue reading too much. In short, after writing more than half a million words, it is still tepid. The author needs to think carefully about whether he needs to make some changes.

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It's very hard to pinch a leaf! Kapok feels the same way! 🤝🤝🤝🌹🌹🌹

Well, let me tell you a few words, buddy. I am both a reader and a writer. I read your book. Although it was very enjoyable to read, I think there are some problems with the writing, especially in terms of the fascinating and background settings. I think if I were better, I should be able to become a god! But I still have it in my collection! I hope you can read the first chapter of my place and learn from each other, but my plot connection is much different from that of my elder brother! Go to my place to have a look and add it to your collection! Others besides the author are also welcome to read it. The book is called "Peerless Beauty" and this is the link: [url=AzmE7f]

🤭🤭 A bright moon is longing for me, the moonlight in the two places is like water, I am lucky enough to read your poems in three lives, the four seasons turn around in the Mid-Autumn Festival, the five blessings come to bring good luck, the six and six good fortunes are always with me, the seven stars accompany the moon people with joy, and the Eight Immortals toast wine on the table. I wish the author a happy Mid-Autumn Festival. May the author say 'so easy' to creation! ! ! Xian Xia Zu [url=FFrq2m]

A ray of remnant soul resists the sky, so what if it disappears into ashes? When I kill the god, I will kill the devil for you! "Smiling Proud Netherworld" is waiting for your favor. Taohua wrote the book with all her heart, just hoping to meet a confidant. I beg you spiritual nobles to lend your eyes to Taohua and take a look at Taohua's painstaking work! [Url=Ef6JRz]

Strange red clouds swept across the earth, covering up the light of the sun and moon. Zombies are everywhere at dusk, baring their teeth and claws, roaring crazily. Countless mutant beasts hide in dark corners, ready to deliver a fatal blow to humans at any time. Aliens from outer space have descended on Earth, and they regard human survivors as prey. Prehistoric civilization, lost glory, and the truth concealed by time are gradually unveiled. Wu Tian, ​​who was helped to resurrect the Secret Treasure Bone Tower before the end, had another chance. In this life, he no longer misses, no longer escapes, faces difficulties, just to climb the supreme road, so that there will be no regrets in life. Link:[url=faq6Jn]

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A fool in the village met a scrap collector and asked him in a low voice: "Are you collecting iron?" The scrap collector looked around and said, "Collect it!" The fool said: "It's a bit long..." The scrap collector said: "It's okay, let me go and have a look first." The fool said: "Wait until night!" "At night, the fool led the waste collector to the railway, pointed to the train track on the ground and said: "These are the ones from Nanjing to Taiyuan, please give me a price!" The waste collector said: "Go away!" Click here for more jokes: [url=3QvM7n]

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We are like pilgrims on the road to the starting point. Every click, every collection, and every recommendation needs to be prostrated and prayed for. We understand each other's hardships best, so can we help each other! [Url=Jn6Znq]

🌹🌹🌹The writing is great, I like this kind of writing, keep up the good work! Mo Hai Lan Bing comes to visit.

Cool Brother|2015-03-1720:45:50 There are too few chapters, so I can't finish it. Jiangnan Talent|2015-03-1023:17:06 This book is very well written, I like it, come on Zhang Yifeng|2015-02-2815:41:16 It looks good, it's okay, please update it soon Angels also cry 2015-02-2421:57:21 Ancient Sword Tianfeng is still okay to watch Lonely tears|2015-02-0714:38:59 Not bad for my taste

Although... I still have to ask for some support, even if it's a little recommendation, collection or reward, your support is the motivation for me to update. It's really hard to live alone...

Good book🤭🤭🤭🤭