Leisurely Fairy Road

? ! ! ! ! This book is actually written by Wen Tan. I didn't expect it to be written in Qidian. Hmm, this book is really not good to read, the writing is terrible, and the characters are also terrible...

Let's suppress it first and then praise it, I'll comment on the other half after reading half of it. . First, the heroine's previous writing is really hypocritical. Who stipulates that if you embark on the path of cultivating immortality, you have to "break all ties" with your family and family. She moans and groans for no reason and wants to distance herself from her family and family. She also thinks that this is the "truth" of the path of cultivating immortality, saying that "everyone is lonely on the road of cultivation." . I'm not the only one who's disgusted. Fortunately, halfway through the novel, the author suddenly brought this "characteristic" back to a normal view. Maybe it's because there are too many people who left messages and raised this point. Secondly, halfway through, I still don't know what the difference is between the female lead cultivating the chaotic energy and others cultivating the profound energy of heaven and earth. Except for the Green Lotus Jade collected at the beginning, there is nothing special about Chaos Yuan Qi in the subsequent cultivation adventures. The magical weapons, spiritual beasts, or secret realm experiences have nothing to do with Chaos Yuan Qi. Is it just to highlight the special nature of the female protagonist? ? At least I haven't seen any difference from Xuanqi even after watching half of it. . If the protagonist in other novels practices Chaos Vitality, it is estimated that level-level challenges, spiritual beasts recognizing their masters, and secret treasures are all related to Chaos Vitality, so that their specialness can be highlighted, which is the normal novel logic. . Here, however, the plot development is no different from Xuanqi. . . Okay, except for the complaints above, what you can watch is that the plot is awesome~~ It is a wonderful adventure and the road to immortality. There are also pitfalls layer by layer. I hope that the pitfalls can be fixed in the future~~ The so-called hardware is not strong enough and the software can make up for it~~

Forgive me for my lack of imagination. Some people think that they are too beautiful. In reality, no matter how beautiful people are, they will think that they are not beautiful enough.

I really can't stand it anymore, it doesn't look like a fairy tale at all. . .

It's better not to write fairy tales anymore, that's not your strong point. The front is very detailed, and the back is like a plot introduction. The heroine is indifferent enough, and many characters are not explained, such as the master, the master's son, etc. Oh, and the last master, I wonder what the heroine's belief in practicing Taoism is? Live purely for yourself

## She was the first empress in Chinese history before Wu Zetian. [Url=nyqYbq] In the long river of history, she passed by in a hurry and was not well known to the world. Although she was the emperor, she experienced hardships and suffered like a poor person. [Url=nyqYbq] In the turbulent times of war, she drifted in the wind, but she was tenacious and self-reliant and stood up to fight. [Url=yeUJRz] She was entangled with the three emperors Gao Yang, Yu Wenyu and Yu Wentai all her life, and they were both enemies and friends. [Url=yeUJRz] She once thought she had found her true love, but the cruel reality shattered her dream and made her take revenge. In the process of revenge, fate made her fall into pain and confusion. Can she take back what's hers? Can she rule the world again and revive the country? [Url=yeUJRz] She is Emperor Yang of the Northern Wei Dynasty - Miss Yuan.[Url=yeUJRz]

Chapter 1 I didn't understand what it means to like others but not want others to like you. This reminds me of a sentence~~~~~~~~~~

I think this book sucks...

Chapter 1 was eaten, what do you think?

I still can't stand it anymore, it's so disgusting. It seems that Danmei drama plays a heavy role. It's really disgusting!

What about the first chapter... Was eaten? ? ? ? !

Madam, do you really not consider continuing this book? Make it complete? I still want to see the back part

First of all, the plot. The previous plot is very good, but it is a bit unfinished. Especially from the beginning of the interstellar chapter, I feel that the heroine has no sense of belonging and keeps drifting. The writing is also like running water. The plot is not very deep, and it is more emotional! The second is the heroine's design and writing techniques. To be honest, I don't understand the subtle psychology of the heroine who was tired of her own beauty in her previous life, and I can't understand why the heroine has a cold nature as soon as she appears. Even after cultivating as an immortal, she deliberately alienated and guarded against her brother and master who were good to her! Personally, I think there is no problem with the character, but the problem is the writing technique - I really don't understand the heroine's past life in Chapters 1 and 2. It seems that in order to pretend to be mysterious, the heroine's experience is hidden, and it is not revealed until the end of the interstellar chapter. For example, one of them is together, and the other is married, so it is impossible to understand the heroine's attitude towards relationships (including love, family and friendship) throughout the whole story! The inability to empathize is probably the fundamental reason why many readers criticized the heroine for being pretentious, and therefore deducted a lot of points from the heroine! Furthermore, I feel that the author did not think very clearly about the settings of the heroine's chaotic spiritual root and chaotic energy! As some readers have pointed out - I don't see the superiority of the heroine's chaotic aura! Indeed, although it is always emphasized that the energy of chaos is superior to the spiritual energy of the Five Elements, no matter whether it is fighting skills or other aspects, it does not show the slightest advantage! It feels like the heroine is divided into a separate category from spiritual cultivation, Buddhist cultivation, demonic cultivation, and demon cultivation! Moreover, according to Taoist theory, chaos is the initial state of everything. The five elements of spiritual energy, fairy energy, demonic energy, demonic energy, corrosive energy, etc., Should essentially all evolve from the energy of chaos! So, the energy of chaos should be higher than and include these categories. Why is it that the heroine can absorb the five elements of spiritual energy and fairy energy, but avoids the evil energy, corrosive energy, etc.? Finally, I would like to complain about the audiobook version. It is best to listen and read at the same time. Later I discovered that some chapters of the audiobook version were seriously deleted, and sometimes the details before and after did not match up. This is good and bad.

It's very beautiful, it suits my taste, and the writing is pretty good. There are some shortcomings, but they don't have much impact. I don't understand why the comments are like this.

This book is very good, why has no one read it? An earlier article on immortality that I read a few years ago!

The happiest thing in the world is to write a book and get a subscription, get rewards every day, get monthly tickets all the time, cats eat fish, dogs eat meat, and Ultraman fights little monsters. I would like to bow down and thank you, classmate Pian Chen, for your support. Thank you for your monthly ticket. I would like to ask again, do you have any more?

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

A bit interesting 🤭

It's really beautiful! ! ! I can't say what's good about it, it's just very comfortable.

I really like this book, it's well written and I like the author a lot!