Song Dynasty Qingping

The ten-day update is obviously a luxury, and the monthly update is the rhythm. . .

The first half is okay, but the second half is really bad. I guess the author just didn't have the intention to write it.

I haven't read any good books, so I plan to read this one for the third time...

Wasn't it the time with the female ghost in the late Northern Song Dynasty? The female ghost sister is so Akali... Is she actually the sixth child? 😭😭😅

In the new 2014, I hope that Hawthorn's books will get better and better

🤭🤭🤭 I feel that in this book, the pig's feet are not so perfect, nor are they so excellent, but they are full of flesh and blood. Mistakes will be made, there will be emotions, there will be love, and there will be loss. This is something written by someone who has experienced it. Maybe this book is not perfect, but it is close to our real life. To paraphrase a movie line: "You will never get what you want, but you will miss what you don't want." It is talking about people in real life. Great book, thumbs up. I had been watching it on my mobile phone and nook3, so I went online to post a narrow-minded emotion. 😄

Happy New Year, author! I wish this book will get better and better! It would be better if it could maintain stable updates!

The next ten recommendation votes are to recommend *****, which is a memorable value! 😃🤭🤭

The author's writing style is quite reminiscent of Lu Xun and Lao She🤭

I thought it would be good after reading the introduction, but it was only the first two chapters, and I was still dizzy after reading it. YY's novel had no real topic, and the words pretended to be profound. After reading so many novels, this was the first one that made me dizzy in just two chapters 😅

This is the invitation I sent in Yi Ping Shu Lou and the reply I gave after Longzhu. Regardless of whether the writing is good or bad, it is useful to the author or not. I just express my thoughts as a loyal reader and try my best to provide better suggestions for the promotion of Hawthorn+. ID: The romance is over The book "The Days with the Female Ghost in the Late Northern Song Dynasty" written by Kaiwei Hawthorn has profound writing skills, smooth language, and its strange and descriptive characteristics can be seen in the plainness. At the same time, the author has a strong knowledge of details and is very careful and observant! Of course, we still have to talk about the shortcomings: As you said, there is still some drag in the plot, but judging from the content, it is not the author's intention to do it, but it is probably because he lacks writing experience and puts part of his energy into describing the environment, customs and insignificant things, resulting in nothing to watch or enjoy, etc., Which makes it feel boring and dragging. Secondly, the typesetting is a flaw, which greatly affects the mood of reading. It is best to make no more than three or four paragraphs into one natural paragraph. This approach will make the page look more beautiful, and readers will not be less tired of reading. Third, regarding the issue of perspective, the author must be clear that what is visible or what readers expect is basically the protagonist. The protagonist is the soul and core of a text. So it's best not to stray too far from the protagonist's perspective, even if the matter concerns the protagonist. Of course, this is especially important at the beginning. It's okay to show up, but don't show up too much. In this book, too much at the beginning will weaken the protagonist's presence. Fourth, the background of the protagonist's past life and present life is still needed. Although it is not necessary to write a lengthy essay, you can still write a few concise sentences, which will give readers a much stronger sense of involvement. For example, who was the protagonist in his previous life, what did he do, what accident happened to come here, and what is the reason why the protagonist is here, yes, he was soul-melted, what kind of person this person is, what is his personality, etc. Address: ****://***. Lkg.***/Thread-*****-1-1. Html Floor 420

Do you still remember Grandma Rong on the shore of Daming Lake? Ahem~ No, it was a vote that year~ I promised the author that if he broke one million, I would be his protector~ Now that he is almost breaking one million, I will also practice and upgrade~😃😃😃

If you don't write it, publish it sooner. . Lest we readers have to vote! ! Even if you didn't enter the imperial court in the Northern Song Dynasty, I wonder how you can continue writing? !

Female writer? Just write some scenes that make people cry. After reading a chapter, it will be more uncomfortable than making people beat up. . It's ugly, just like I can't stand the red building. .

Are you ready for the end of the world? No! Please be serious! Kongkong, go get my clothes! A different kind of apocalyptic novel! Please look forward to "The Guardian of the End of the World" [url=6BNrQb[God of Wealth Software,1,6,1,1,2,8,9,1,0,8]]

It's hard to understand. If you skip a line, you won't understand it at all. The continuity is too poor. I read the first part of the first volume. The female ghost only appeared once, and it's not clear who the protagonist is or who the female ghost is 😟

I haven't stopped for two days in a row recently. I stayed up until two o'clock at night and read more than 170 chapters. I feel like I'm in a beautiful dream, and there are few things that can attract me so much. Whether it's a plot or just YY's excuse, including SC's military history writers and professional writers, I think they are all missing a bit of beauty. I have only seen them in a few books by Yuesuguan. I think this is probably Nagase Tomoya's new drama "Ohara, Don't Cry" "The world is full of thoughts and feelings" in "The World's Thoughts" and "The Thoughts of the World" and "The Thoughts of the World" make up this world. The thoughts and feelings of love between Li Qingzhao and the male protagonist in Hawthorn Da You outline a beautiful dream. I hope you won't be malicious and kitsch, just keep going like this, and those who support you will continue all the way. By the way, the Sa family has been busy with a lot of mundane affairs recently, which will probably end until the end of July. Life is very irregular, but after July I will also make some starting coins to support you! Based on the plot, I deduce that it is all C. This was originally a big poisonous point, but with your detailed writing, it has completely become. In Long Kong's evaluation, it is at the level of food and grass, or even fairy grass. It is similar to internalizing and absorbing the poison and turning it into an elixir. Li Qingzhao and Su Jin are a bit like the Valkyrie and the little scoundrel in "Zhibeiyou" (sorry Luoshui Chicory, I forgot the male protagonist's name but I remember Jiu Shanmei called him "little scoundrel"), while Li Shishi is like Gan Ningzhen in "Zhibeiyou" , but "Journey to the North" outlines an aesthetic world of oriental fantasy, a fantasy world. I hope that Hawthorn can use that delicacy to outline a dream-like wonderland, a Northern Song Dynasty composed of thoughts and love! 🌹🌹🌹

What is the author doing now, changing his vest?

This book is indeed very delicately written, and the results shouldn't be like this.

Overly focused on detail descriptions of scenery and abandoned the plot and characterization of the characters. Readers are here to see novels, not landscape paintings. Maybe the author put a lot of thought into writing those scenery, but at least I just skipped it.

Does anyone know what's going on with the author now? Has he changed his vest or something? Would you like to read his new book?