Great Master

Before reading: 🥔He is the author of books like Dou Po and Wu Dong. No matter how bad it is, how can it be worse? You all say that this big master is not good-looking, but I want to see where the lower limit of Potato is? After reading: WOC, this is actually the same author as Doupo and Wudong? The whole book of The Lord is spent fighting dungeons, and there are only 100 chapters left to fight bosses and fight dungeons to obtain immortality. The transitions in the dungeon are even more abrupt, and the plot structure is even more messy. I don't even want to say that the fate of the male protagonist depends entirely on the various arena competitions that others give him. It's just the spiritual arts at the beginning, the magical arts above, and the magical powers above. So why is it divided into so many? Wouldn't it be better to just divide it into three major stages at the beginning? It is simply a typical example of writing step by step. The plot is full of loopholes, and the pit of the inner demon thunder abyss has not been filled. The setting of the Immortal Code has long gone. The scene where Luo Li asks Tang Qian'er who she is actually appears twice. If you say you didn't find a ghostwriter, Tudou, it can only mean that you have Alzheimer's disease. Not to mention the countless mistakes in names and numbers throughout the book. There are a lot of mistakes that even elementary school students would not make. This is not a problem of not thinking about the plot at all. This is a lack of care and a mentality of not taking the readers seriously. They just want to fool him, as long as this book can help him earn money from the readers. There are still people who praise this kind of behavior, and there are fans who praise this big master. It is really extremely ignorant. I can only say that Tudou hired a lot of trolls to make money, but the hearts of readers are cold. No matter how much you brag about yourself, it will not help. The response to Yuan Zun and King of All Appearances later was also mediocre. I can only say that the only things this boy is really interested in are Dou Po and Wu Dong. After reading Dou Po and Wu Dong, when you see this review of mine, run away. Don't think about seeing what you want to see in this book. It will only make your impression of Tudou completely rotten.

After reading nearly 500 chapters, I couldn't help but want to write something. I started reading Tudou books in high school. At that time, I only liked paper books, so I bought the complete works of Dou Po to read. The size I bought is a small notebook, which is perfect for lying down and reading late at night. I think I will always remember that when I saw the chapter where Xiao Yan went to the college to lead the new students to fight against the old students, that was the first time I felt my blood boiling. I'm actually embarrassed to say that, but at that time I suddenly had the courage to resist everything. Then I managed to lose sleep that night. I didn't look for Dou Po's books to read again later on because Dou Po's position in my heart was not easily shaken and I couldn't easily accept a new story. This time I watched The Master because so many years have passed and I want to rediscover the passionate feeling I had at the time. However, I failed. And also a little disappointed. Have I become more demanding because I have read too many books over the years? Or have I really lost the ability to enter the book realm all at once? Maybe. I don't deny that my requirements for Tudou are higher than those of his first book, nor do I deny that I am no longer the middle school girl I was 6 years ago. But it's not just that. My disappointment with Tudou is that he not only failed to make his writing style more mature, his stories more exciting, and his plots more creative, but he also lost the original passion for writing. Admittedly, as a reader, it is impossible for me to know what state the writer was in when he was writing. It's just that when Doupo was written, it was the first time I wrote an article, the first book, and the style was taking shape for the first time. The immature brushwork made me look more passionate now. Why, the big master can't do it. I can only regret that Tudou is no longer the young writer he was 6 years ago. That's it anyway, just some gossip that I can't help but want to say. If you don't try to move forward, you can only stand still. If you get used to standing still, you will slowly be overtaken and become a regression. Finally, I would like to give you a more sincere suggestion for book fans. I hope I can write less articles in the future: Yes, but... Also, don't always use the same word too many times. To describe a girl, she has beautiful eyes, and when a girl nods, she nods lightly. No matter how good the word is, it will cause visual fatigue. Moreover, if everyone uses the same words, it will only make people gradually feel that there is no difference between them except their names, as if they are just a writing framework without soul.

I feel that the world view constructed by Tudou is coming to an end. Fighting to Po Wudong gave people great expectations, but in the final chapter, the Overlord was unable to control the world. All the content was written around Muchen, which was monotonous and narrow. The Condor Trilogy runs through the timeline sequentially, but the Lord does not. As a reader, I did not feel how grand the world is, how it is a place where planes meet, nor did I feel the protagonist's struggle and progress, nor did I feel the splendor of the world. This trilogy kind of sucked, which is a shame.

Looking at Doupo all the way, this one is the worst. The story originally had a good idea, but unfortunately the author's writing level is comparable to that of a primary school student, with typos, grammatical errors, numerical errors, logical errors... Countless. If you streamline the content to make up the word count, reduce it to at least half, or even two-thirds. If we look at the error tolerance rate of 1/10,000 in a publication, as a work that requires a fee to read, it is quite disappointing to the readers. I can read Doupo two or three times, but I won't want to read this book again.

I'm quite speechless. After reading a thousand pictures, the protagonist hasn't killed a few people yet. Every time someone wants to take your life, but the protagonist doesn't kill him when he has the chance. Every time this happens, for example, in the Beicang Spiritual Academy competition in the major spiritual academy competitions, the Blood God Tribe tried to kill your wife, but you severely injured them but didn't kill them. I've read a thousand chapters, and the protagonist didn't die more than five of his enemies, which is quite speechless.

Recently, The Master is also going to be released as an anime, and it has touched something deep in my memory. The most memorable sentence in the book is when Muchen finally sets out to find his way to the Heavenly Supreme. It is undeniable that the plot is still repetitive and vulgar; but it is also undeniable that although the three books are the same, the unique young passion of the protagonist in each book is unique. The process of reading is indeed painful, but after reading it all, especially when a person has been wandering alone for many years, it is easy to become a substitute, as if he is the protagonist in the book, going through thousands of dangers and dangers, and finally reaching the top.

General review of Shuidou's three books: the same story, plot, script, woman (with a special identity), the path to cultivation, and three levels of villains. In addition: Emperor Yan plays with fire and refines elixirs, Wu Zu takes revenge and destroys demons, and Muchen fights dungeons.

It can only be said that Dou Po is the pinnacle, and the master is Niu Ma.

The writing is not as good as Dou Po. I skipped through the entire chapter of The Lord, skipping at least a third of the middle chapter 🙂

Let me tell you, now I have seen the abandoned book on the Earth Supreme battlefield. I want to say that the protagonist is trash. I have written several times before that the protagonist feels that he has a background and a powerful mother but it is of no use. If his mother hadn't left the skills, he would be awesome at the beginning? If it weren't for the photo of his mother in the spiritual hospital, he wouldn't know how he died, and if it weren't for his mother's factor in Lingxi, the protagonist would never get many opportunities, and he would be a wolf-hearted person. Besides, Tudou doesn't know how to write except for women. The heroine is not here, and the other women come and go. Others say that when you get married, you only have one heroine, so don't let the hero go around plundering people and showing mercy. How about accepting them all? Otherwise, we can't write about brotherly love? Comrade? Are all men dead to you? If you're not a woman, you can't write? Finally, when I went to the Supreme Being of several ranks, it was not easy to write the protagonist material. Fighting across a rank would mean life or death. If so, why do you write so awesomely? And in that supreme battlefield, can the protagonist of level 4 be able to fight level 5? As a result, United Jiuyou's fighting spirit was almost beaten to death by a sixth-level warrior. You wrote that the battle formation master was so awesome but so rubbish. Wu Tian is at least one of the four commanders. As a result, the Dragon Snake Sect is a subsidiary sect of a powerful force, but the writing is not as good as that thing. It is really mindless. Is the fighting intention so rubbish? The same goes for the battle formation master. If you can't win a cross-level fight, just don't write the fighting intention, okay? The protagonist has so many chance skills that other people can't get, and there are so many of them that others can't practice, and they can only reach the first level, which is quite useless. Everyone is welcome to refute this rubbish article, an article that is mindless, an article that has great skills but is useless, an article that tries to siphon off and then becomes embarrassed but does not write about brotherhood.

Rating: ⭐⭐ One ⭐ for Xiao Yan, one ⭐ for Lin Dong As for "The Great Master"💩, it doesn't count. .

A novel to lower your intelligence After reading more than a hundred of them, I feel like my IQ has been crushed I really don't know why this novel has such a high rating, or is it just a scammer?

From Dou Po Martial Arts to The Great Master, every book makes me think endlessly. Although sometimes the routines are the same, it still does not affect my enthusiasm for these books.

It's not as good as the previous ones. The author seems to have passed his peak. I feel that Dou Po and Qian Kun are the great achievements, but the one that cannot be surpassed is Warcraft Sword Master. I still remember that there was no one at home, squatting in the snow and watching on my mobile phone, full of memories [fn =4]😁😁😁😁😁😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Very enjoyable to read. I finally finished reading all three books.

The male protagonist has to level up from beginning to end, and at most he will suffer a little physical pain. It's a straight drive all the way to the top. At the beginning, the enemies were unkillable, but they were all saved at the last moment, which was very annoying to watch.

Why is there no season 6😰

🙂🙂Floating over

Not many people died during the whole process. You are the reincarnation of Jin Chan

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Xiao Yan: I know you, you are Lin Dong. Looking at the entire martial arts world, you are a rare existence. Lin Dong: I know you too, you are Xiao Yan. One strike can shock the whole book Fighting the Sky Xiao Yan: I think back then, in Wutan City, our Xiao family was one of the three major forces Lin Dong: I think back then, in Qingyang Town, our Lin family was one of the four major forces Xiao Yan: I think back then, in Wutan City, I got a ring Lin Dong: I think back then, in Qingyang Town, I got a ring A rune stone Xiao Yan: There is Yao Lao in my ring, and his origin is mysterious Lin Dong: There is Master Diao in my rune stone, and his origin is also mysterious Xiao Yan: There is an auction house in Wutan City, and I often sell pills there Lin Dong: There is an underground exchange in Qingyang Town, and I also sell pills there Xiao Yan: I have a sister named Xun'er, who is not my biological child Lin Dong: I have one too My younger sister is Qingtan, and she is not my biological child either Xiao Yan: My confidante, the Little Medical Fairy, is a poisonous body. She was originally suffering a lot, but she became powerful after controlling the poison pill Lin Dong: My childhood sweetheart Qingtan It's a Yin evil demon body. It's been very painful to begin with, but it's even more powerful after controlling the Yin Dan. Xiao Yan: My goal is to go to the Yunlan Sect and defeat Nalan Yanran Lin Dong: My goal is to go to the Lin family in Dayan and defeat him. Lin Langtian Xiao Yan: I also have an identity, and I am an alchemist Lin Dong: I also have an identity, and I am a talisman master Xiao Yan: We alchemists rely on mental power Lin Dong: Our talisman masters also rely on mental power Xiao Yan: We have a tower called Dan Pagoda Lin Dong: We have a tower called Talisman Pagoda Xiao Yan: Yao Lao took me to practice Lin Dong: Master Diao accompanied me I will practice Xiao Yan: The purpose of my practice is to find the strange fire Lin Dong: The purpose of my practice is to find the ancestral talisman Xiao Yan: With the strange fire, I will be a powerful alchemist, and my strength will be doubled Lin Dong: With the ancestral talisman, I will be a powerful talisman master, and my strength will be doubled Xiao Yan: My first time was given to Medusa Lin Dong: My first time was given to Ling Qingzhu Xiao Yan : My first time... It wasn't voluntary... I lost control Lin Dong: My first time... It wasn't voluntary... I lost control too Xiao Yan: After it was done, Medusa wanted to kill me, but she saved me again Lin Dong: After it was done, Ling Qingzhu also wanted to kill me, but she also saved me again Xiao Yan: When I was in Douwang, I could leapfrog and challenge Douhuang. Lin Dong: I was in Xiaoyuan Dan. I can defeat the Great Yuan Danjing even when I was in the Douhuang realm. Xiao Yan: After I upgraded, I felt that the Douhuang and the Douwang are really not on the same level. Lin Dong: I think so too. Xiao Yan: When I was the Douhuang, I had never even seen the hair of the Dou Sheng. Lin Dong: When I entered the Three Creation realms, even the passers-by were in the Creation realm. Xiao Yan: Every time I go to a place, There is a force that provokes me, and I kill it Lin Dong: Every time I go to a place, there is always a force that provokes me, and I kill it too Xiao Yan:... Lin Dong:... Xiao Yan: I was written by a guy named Tudou Lin Dong: I was also written by a guy named Tudou Xiao Yan: If there are any similarities Lin Dong: It's just a coincidence

After a fight, Tudou became famous. A book about martial arts can also make readers feel a little excited. A master of a book, Tudou has completely exhausted his talent, and also completely exhausted the last trace of love between him and the readers. When I wrote this, everyone couldn't help but take a deep breath. Just like a platinum author like Tudou also feels a little threatened?]. (No wonder global warming has caused all the cool air to be absorbed by potatoes?). Three novels, or should I say one novel, with three same protagonists and one same story. If there are no new ideas, I hope Tudou will close the book and spend enough money, so that many years from now, maybe some people will still remember that there is a book called "Fights Break the Sky", and there is an Internet author named Tiancan Tudou who created a new fantasy theme. Otherwise, I'm afraid you will wipe out every last trace of your connection with the readers. Is there only money left in your hand at the end? Maybe that's good too🙂

I have previously posted the third chapter I wrote. This is a continuation of the previous one. Please forgive me for any shortcomings. Ice Spirit Clan Chapter 4 Boom! Over this ancient Ice Spirit ancestral land, huge thunderclouds were gathering at this moment. The roar of thunder resounded, completely destroying the astonishing chill in the world. What was left was a sound that was even more terrifying than the thunder. "Since senior insists on doing this, Lin Dong will no longer be polite!" Lin Dong held the thunder staff and stood in front of the Ice Spirit Ancestor with a calm expression. The staff pointed at him, but there was undisguised madness in his black eyes. This madness actually made the Ice Spirit Tribe's ancestor tremble from the bottom of his heart. His old blue face actually trembled subconsciously at this moment. This person from the lower plane, who was not in his eyes at all, actually gave him a meaning that he couldn't go against in his words. You must know that he is a Heavenly Supreme, and his reputation has been resounding in this world for a long time. What's more, he is also the ancestor of the Ice Spirit Tribe. His faint words not only shocked the Ice Spirit Ancestor, but also made the three Heavenly Supreme Powerhouses sitting at the back of the Ice Spirit tribe's camp tremble in their hearts. The expression of the War Emperor, who had always been full of smiles, slowly solidified. "Is this kid really from the lower plane?" The old man Snow Demon's voice was choked with sobs, and his face was full of disbelief. This method shocked even the true superpowers in the world. Is this man really from that lower plane where the path of cultivation is full of obstacles and obstacles? For a moment, the ancient world was filled with only the sound of thunder and roar. Lin Dong didn't want to delay any longer. For Ying Huanhuan, he walked step by step to where he is today. No matter who was in front of him, he would wipe them out one by one. No matter who the other party is from the Ice Spirit Clan or Heavenly Supreme, they can't stop him. "Senior, let me ask you one last time, do you want to borrow the Ice God Monument or not?" There was a hint of threat in his voice. The spreading thunder staff moved the thunder clouds, and the violent roar of the dragon was deafening. It was obvious that Lin Dong's patience had reached its limit. In front of countless strong men from the entire Ice Spirit Clan and the three Heavenly Supremes sitting behind the formation, this man who had conquered the entire Ice Spirit Clan actually forced the Heavenly Supreme Ancestor of the clan to lend him the clan's most precious treasure. How domineering and arrogant is this! As the Heavenly Supreme Being, the Ice Spirit Ancestor would not be threatened by Lin Dong. He gritted his teeth so hard that he seemed to shatter countless ice crystals in front of him, and his face was distorted. "No borrowing!" Roar! When the words "I don't want to borrow" fell, Lin Dong waved his staff, and the huge thunder dragon entrenched in the thunder clouds above the Ice Spirit Ancestral Land roared angrily, and the terrifying power of thunder exploded, like a thunder pillar, directly covering the Ice Spirit Ancestor. Without hesitation. The lightning fell so fast that even the Heavenly Sovereign could not avoid it. The Ice Spirit Ancestor's face was ashen, but at this critical moment, a seal condensed out of his hand. A wave of coldness swept out once again, seeming to disperse all the thunderclouds that were entrenched in the sky. A huge ice crystal giant of several hundred thousand feet also emerged. The chill was astonishing as it breathed in and out. With every movement, it had the terrifying power to freeze the world. The thundering beam that suddenly fell was also carried down by him, and the Ice Spirit Ancestor who used the Supreme dharma body was furious, and immediately activated the dharma body. The huge palm of the dharma body was enough to cover the sky and the sun. With a wave of his hand, a rolling cold current hit, freezing the space, which was extremely terrifying. "You actually pushed this old ghost to this point." Dragon Venerable's dragon eyes were solemn. In order to deal with this person from the lower plane, the Ice Spirit Ancestor directly summoned the Supreme Dharma Body. It was the Ice Spirit Tribe's inherited Dharma Body. It was called the Ice God Sealed Celestial Body. It ranked twentieth among the ninety-nine supreme Dharma Bodies in the world. It had the power to freeze the world with every move. "Boy, this is the Ice Spirit Clan, how can we allow you to act recklessly!" At this moment, every word and deed of Patriarch Bing Ling seemed to affect the heaven and earth. The Supreme Dharma Body of the Earth Supreme could be called the Dharma Appearance, and he, the Heaven Supreme

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Xiao Yan said: "My name is Xiao Yan, and I am a person who levels up every day." Lin Dong said: "My name is Lin Dong, and I am a person who levels up every day." Muchen said: "My name is Muchen, and I am a person who levels up every day." " Zhou Yuan said: "My name is Zhou Yuan, and I am a person who levels up every day. " Xiao Yan said: "I practice every day, and my goal is to become a Dou Emperor. " Lin Dong said: "I practice every day, and my goal is to advance to the ancestral position. Muchen said: "I practice every day, and my goal is to become a master." Zhou Yuan said: "I practice every day, and my goal is to advance to the divine position." Xiao Yan said: "There is a Yao Lao in my ring, who knows everything, and is better than the guide. Lin Dong said: "There is a Diao Master in my stone talisman, who knows everything, and is better than the guide." " Muchen said: "There is a Nine Nether Bird in my black paper. It knows everything and is better than the guide. Zhou Yuan said: "There is Tiantian beside me, who knows everything, and is better than the guide. Xiao Yan said: "In my world, there is something called strange fire, which is as powerful as artifact-level out-of-print equipment. " Lin Dong said: "In my world, there is something called an ancestral talisman, which is as powerful as an out-of-print artifact-level equipment. ' Mu Chen said: "In my world, there is something called the Supreme Body Technique, which is as powerful as artifact-level out-of-print equipment.' Zhou Yuan said: "In my world, there is something called the Nine Seals of the Heavens, which is as powerful as artifact-level out-of-print equipment. " Xiao Yan said: "I come from the Xiao family in Wutan City, and I am a young master Lin Dong said: "I come from the Lin family in Qingyang Town, and I am a young master." Muchen said: "I come from the Muyu of Beiling Realm, and I am a young master." Zhou Yuan said: "I come from the Zhou Dynasty in the Vast Continent, and I am a young master." Xiao Yan said: "I like a girl, her name is Gu Xun'er, but her ancient clan is very powerful, and she won't let me be with her. Lin Dong said, "I like a girl, her name is Ling Qingzhu, but her family, Jiutian Taiqing Palace, is very powerful, and they won't let me be with her. Muchen said, "I like a girl, her name is Luo Li, but her family is not allowed to be together. The Luo Shen clan is powerful and won't let me be with her. Zhou Yuan said: "I like a girl, her name is Su Youwei, but her family is powerful in the Zixiao domain and won't let me be with her." Xiao Yan said, "When I was young, I didn't have any lofty ambitions. My only goal was to defeat Nalan Yanran." Lin Dong said: "When I was young, I didn't have any lofty ambitions. My only goal was to kill Lin Langtian." Muchen said, "When I was a kid, I didn't have any lofty ambitions. My only goal was to defeat Ji Xuan." Zhou Yuan said, "When I was a kid, I didn't have any lofty ambitions. My only goal was to defeat Wu Huang." " Xiao Yan said: "To be honest, the reason why I have achieved what I have today is entirely due to chance. I have taken countless high-level pills and encountered ancient inheritance. Lin Dong said: "To be honest, the reason why I have achieved what I have today is entirely due to chance. The treasures from heaven and earth I have eaten and the ancient inheritances I have encountered are countless." Mu Chen said: "To be honest, the reason why I have achieved what I have today is entirely due to chance. The medicinal herbs and herbs I have eaten and the ancient inheritances I have encountered are countless. Zhou Yuan said: To be honest, the reason why I have achieved what I have today is entirely due to chance. I have eaten countless medicinal herbs and sacred herbs and encountered ancient inheritance. Xiao Yan said: "I have a hobby, that is, I like to pretend to be a pig and eat tigers. I remember that when I was fighting against the emperor, a lot of Dou Zong fell on my hands." Lin Dong said: "I have a hobby, that is, I like to pretend to be a pig and eat tigers. I remember that when I was in the Shengxuan realm, a lot of people from the Death Mysterious Realm fell on my hands." Muchen said: "I have a hobby, that is, I like to pretend to be a pig and eat tigers. I remember that when I was in the Heaven Transformation Realm, a lot of Tongtian Realm fell on my hands. Zhou Yuan said: "I have a hobby, that is, I like to pretend to be a pig and eat tigers. I think about when I was in the Tianguan Realm, a lot of Taichu Realm fell on my hands. " Xiao Yan said: "I have special skills, I can make alchemy. ' Lin Dong said: "I have a specialty, I can draw talismans.' Mu Chen said: "I have a specialty, I can set up formations. ' Zhou Yuan said: "I have special skills, I can carve patterns. Xiao Yan said: "I have two wives. ' Lin Dong said: "I also have two wives." Muchen said: "I only have one wife." Zhou Yuan said: "I only have one wife now, but I believe I will have a second one. ' Xiao Yan said: "My weapon is a ruler, and his name is Xuan Zhongzhi Lin Dong said: "I have many weapons, and they are collectively called the Nine Divine Weapons. " Muchen said: "My weapon is a pillar, and his name is Dashumi. Zhou Yuan said: "My weapon is a brush, and his name is Tianyuan Brush." Xiao Yan said: "I finally became the Fighting Emperor, defeated the Soul Emperor, and regained the peace of the mainland." " Lin Dong said: "I finally advanced to the ancestral realm, defeated the strange demon emperor, and saved thousands of creatures in the world. ' Mu Chen said: "I finally became the master, defeated the evil god, and saved the world. Zhou Yuan said: "I finally became the Yuan Zun, defeated the holy god, and saved Tianyuan. Xiao Yan said: "Later, I joined Canaan College, participated in the student competition, and became famous in one battle." Lin Dong said: "Later, I joined Entered the Dao Sect, participated in the palace examination, and became famous. " Muchen said: "Later, I joined Beicang Lingyuan, participated in the hunting competition, and became famous in one battle. " Zhou Yuan said, "Later, I joined Cangxuan Sect, participated in the Mountain Selection Ceremony, and became famous in one battle. Xiao Yan said, "I have a special NB move called Buddha's Furious Fire Lotus." " Lin Dong said: "I have a very special ultimate move called Qinglong Transformation Technique. " Muchen said: "I have a special NB ultimate move, called Level 9 ❌❌❌ Zhou Yuan said: "I have a special NB ultimate move, called Colorful Sky-Slaying Gourd." Xiao Yan said: "If there is any similarity." Lin Dong said: "It's purely a coincidence." Mu Chen said: "It was written by Tudou.' Zhou Yuan said: "I have no idea. '

The fall of the evil god is also the fall of the potato.

Yandi Martial Ancestor is written exactly like one person, all with trumpets...

The Great Master is one of my favorite books, but I think Muchen owes Jiuyou a title. Jiuyou has been with Muchen from beginning to end 😭

I dare to say that "The Great Master" is definitely an unsurpassed classic. Don't listen to the trolls. I have been following Tudou for 5 years. His books definitely have charm.