The Hongmeng Path of Divine Refinement

I'm dizzy, what are these? The protagonist's portrayal is not flexible and vivid enough. Are those passers-by showing up to show off to the protagonist (once or twice is enough, so many times...), And Jiang Lan in the God Realm. Her family sent an uncle to take Jiang Lan back. Uncle Wang is persuading Jiang Lan to go back. The protagonist is better, just interrupt and say "Uncle Wang, right?" I'm a Buddha, can you have some concepts of hierarchy and seniority?

I can't stand it, can't women write less? There are also those young and beautiful young people who are disgusting to look at. Now is a society ruled by law. There is no logic at all. If you want to become an immortal, you can become an immortal. You don't even know what to do when you write some messy things.

You start as a mortal and go through hundreds of reincarnations in the world of mortals to refine your heart. Is this to distort your own character?

The male protagonist is an orphan, so his financial situation should not be very good, so his means of travel should be a hard seat on a train or something like that! The girl is obviously a top rich girl! Then it gets interesting! A wealthy daughter travels by train? ? ? Then there is the cannon fodder senior who will not survive more than three chapters, an arrogant and domineering rich second generation dude who still travels by train! Is there no other means of transportation in that world? As far as the two chapters I read are concerned: Vulgar, brainless, and bound to be in a harem! The protagonist should have three auras: 1: A beautiful woman with a name and a description of more than 20 words will definitely fall in love with the aura of the male protagonist! 2: Everyone's IQ is reduced by 90%, and the villain's reduction value is doubled! 3: All good things belong to the protagonist's halo!

Let me tell you, I have read more than 200 chapters now, and I feel that the upgrade is really fast, and the realms are usually more than ten chapters each, which is fast, and the age of the protagonist is really less, which is not good. If it is normal, it seems to take decades to break through a realm, and it is still up to a hundred years. Novels with pitfalls are actually very good. It's best to create a big hole to make it difficult for readers to guess. Now that I have seen it, I have not given up on this novel. I hope to see the finished copy. I have already ordered it. The author will be able to express the next storyline. Come on! ! ! 🌹🥺

Why did you join the Security Bureau and gave up?

I can't stand it without thinking.

Is it crazy to still go to school after becoming a fantasy person? What kind of plot is this? If you meet an old person, you will recognize your ancestors; if you meet a woman, you will lick the dog.

It's too poisonous, the basics are very good, it's Hongmeng level, the writing is still unclear and a gangster, the villain dies because he talks too much, and the protagonist has died countless times! You are overestimating your own ability, and you are hurt even if you work for someone else's overseas agency. Why don't you just go to someone else's nest without being too clumsy! Let's all perish together! I can't stand it anymore!

What the hell is this Chapter 4? I have a Rolls-Royce and take a train. Is it because the kidnappers are sleeping or because the public security is too good?