The Hongmeng Path of Divine Refinement

I can't stand it. Can't they write less about women? And those playboys are disgusting. We live in a society governed by law, and they have absolutely no logic. If you're going to cultivate immortality, just cultivate immortality. Why write this nonsense? I don't know what they're trying to achieve.

Seriously, what is all this? The main character isn't portrayed vividly enough. Are all those extras just there to show off to the main character? (Once or twice would be enough, why so many times...) And when Jiang Lan's family from the God Realm sent Uncle Wang to take her back, and Uncle Wang was trying to persuade Jiang Lan to go back, the main character just interrupted with "Uncle Wang, right?" I'm speechless. Can't he have a little sense of hierarchy and seniority?

Starting as a mere mortal, you're subjected to a hundred lifetimes of reincarnation and worldly trials—are you trying to warp your own mind?

The male lead is an orphan, so his financial situation is probably not very good, meaning he travels by train, likely in a hard seat. The female lead is clearly a top-tier heiress! And then things get interesting! A rich heiress traveling by train?!

Just to clarify, I've read over two hundred chapters now, and I feel the leveling up is indeed very fast. Moreover, each new realm is only ten or so chapters apart, which is really fast. Also, the protagonist's age is indeed quite low, which is not good. Normally, breaking through a realm would take several decades, or even a hundred years.

Why join the Security Bureau? I gave up.

Even someone without a brain couldn't stand watching this.

It's all fantasy, why are there still schools and classrooms? Are they out of their minds? And what kind of ridiculous plot is this? They act like they're ancestors to anyone old, and they fawn over any woman.

This is too much! The foundation is excellent, even at the Hongmeng level, yet the writing can't even handle a scoundrel. The villain dies from talking too much, and the protagonist would have died countless times already! And he's so overconfident! He gets injured taking down an overseas agency, and instead of playing it safe, he goes and attacks their headquarters! It ends in mutual destruction! I can't stand it anymore!

What the heck is this fourth chapter? A Rolls-Royce and they're taking the train? Were the kidnappers asleep, or is the security just too good?