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Shiluo is very grateful to Fushen for her support. . . . It's hard work on a business trip, so take a good rest when you get home. . . Send the ticket. . The voting number is 'Mo Leng Yue Han'. . . Come on. . ~~❤️🌹🌹

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The poem is coming. . . The Mo Leng Yue Han sent two votes. . . Support ups and downs. . ~~~❤️🌹🌹🌹🌹

The poem is coming. . Support ups and downs. . ~~~~~Hoho. . ❤️🌹🌹

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The poem is coming. . Support ups and downs. . Shiluo has been quite busy recently, so I haven't had time to type, so I won't update it. . Another thing is that my good friend has known about Shiluo Wen's situation for half a year. . . . So I'll think about whether I should continue writing. No announcement was made. . ❤️🌹

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I saw your work in the works of the same fans as Perfect World. The cover and the title of the novel are so beautiful that I can't say anything about it. Like it first! Okay, let's get down to business. Tell me some thoughts on the text. 1. I wonder if the author has such a feeling. It gives me a headache to read the names of characters in Western novels, such transliterations, and the obscure names. The most important thing is that they are difficult to remember. In fact, online literature does not need to be so rigorous, as long as it is easy to remember. For example, Lin Lei in Coiling Dragon, etc. (Coupled with the unfamiliar cultural background, this is probably why it is difficult for Western fantasy to become mainstream.) 2. The beginning of the novel. First of all, I would like to praise the author's writing style. Not to mention how good it is, but among the writings written by novices like Qidian, it is considered to be above average. Nowadays, many writers completely give up writing in order to speed up the update speed, just to feel refreshed. I can only laugh at this kind of behavior. 3. The fatal point of the opening chapter, especially for a newbie writing by hand, the first three chapters of the opening chapter are particularly important, focus on the highlights! Get the selling point! Only in this way can we survive in the troubled times and stand out. If you don't know what the highlight of the opening chapter is, I suggest you watch the Japanese anime "One Piece". In the first episode, Luffy said, I am the man who wants to become the Pirate King. Just such a sentence can make millions of fans stick with it for five to six hundred episodes. 🌹 4. We are fellow writers and encourage each other.