Arrival 1994

1. The protagonist is a time traveler, which is the biggest failure 2. The protagonist's IQ is too low 3. The plot is confusing and the logical analysis is poor 4. The psychological description is too far-fetched

In the mind of the 21st century, back in the United States in the 1990s, even if you were an otaku, you wouldn't be able to beg for money even if you were reborn as a child, right? He also said that he was a (pig) and couldn't stand it anymore!

The aura of intelligence reduction at full level, the first experience of Jurassic can make people's IQ negative, it's so damn cruel

It's not very well written, so let me give you my opinion. First of all, the protagonist in this novel does not have any golden fingers. In other words, the protagonist is just an ordinary person. There is also no power system. For a long time, I didn't know what level the protagonist's combat power was. Then there is the fact that this novel was very useless when I first read it. The protagonist has been in a suppressed state in the early stage, and this is still the case in the later stage. Reading this novel, it was simply frustrating. I read novels to enjoy them, not to feel uncomfortable. I don't even want to talk about the later part of this novel, because the plot is even more messy. There is no such writing style that is still scribbling the plot here. Piece here and there, a mess. After watching it, my senses are not very good. What a waste of time. The author has no idea who the protagonist is. I am also speechless at this writing.

This is the first novel I've ever read that travels back to the movie world

After four books were written and two were discontinued, there is no one left.

The front is fine, but it's getting more and more messy, and I can't see the main line.

It's so toxic from the beginning. A 10-year-old child would be sent to an orphanage whether in China or the United States. He was found by the police and kicked out by the police to become a beggar?

This is my first time writing an article, and I know that I must have many shortcomings. There will be some logical inaccuracies, some sentences that are not refined enough, and there will definitely be deficiencies in the characterization, and I don't know how to grasp the reader's mind... When I had 30,000 words before, I automatically applied for the visa, but unfortunately it didn't pass. Of course, now I'm lucky enough to have been notified, and then I got it. But even so, I also know that I still have many shortcomings, and I also want to know where I am lacking and where I can improve. If you can see this advertisement, I hope you can help me, read my book, and tell me where I am lacking. I will treat you with sincerity. Book Title: The Trial of Infinite Death Thank you!

It is really not easy for the author. This book would be better if it started from the fifth chapter.

I was baffled by what I saw, it was all so messed up. . The character of the protagonist looks cold and arrogant, but he is actually a very arrogant person. I am really drunk.

There are a lot of missing chapters, it's really uncomfortable to watch, and I don't know what's going on.

This is a cool article, dark and pig's feet, and the plot links smoothly!