Line After Line

Every time I open the app on a whim, I find that a few more chapters have been deleted... How many chapters have been deleted in total? What have I said after all these years? It's so easy to delete an article. The entire chapter is gone. It's much faster than writing. I just want to ask you what is worth deleting in this novel. If you delete it, don't read anything else, okay?

What's going on? Which book has been updated since 2012? It's actually been updated for free until now. Is it so persistent?

I finally finished reading it. Although the novel is not finished yet, I always feel that the tone of this novel is very heavy. Even if Sunshine is as innocent as a single thorn, he has been plotted by his relatives and friends more than once. And Shan Wuyi, who is equally pure and perfect, has clearly never hurt anyone, but finally ended up with such a miserable ending. How should his sister and his mother feel? And among the male protagonists, Jun Li, none of the sadness and misfortune he encountered was caused by himself. All incidents were caused by the entanglement of the people involved. But he himself is the most miserable person inside, always punishing himself for the mistakes of others, which has developed his timid temperament. To be honest, it is precisely because he cares so much about feelings that he cares so much about his orders. It has to be said that it is a trick of fate. Jun Li thought that as long as he treated others well, others would treat him well, but in the eyes of others, he might just treat him as a pawn. His sincerity is like a molten fire in the darkness, warming those who have lost their inner warmth in the world. Some people regard this warmth as a beacon in their lives and work hard to protect it, but most people are reluctant to part with this warmth and are unwilling to work hard to protect it. In addition to the cutest Jun Li and Ci Ci, it was Suzaku who moved me the most in this story. Although he has a very awkward personality, he is very sincere towards the people who matter to him, whether it is Qiu Kui or Jun Li. Although he occasionally gets stubborn and makes people angry, he will never make people feel as cold as Shan Jiquan. All love is the most sincere and heartfelt. Both Shen Fengming and Shan Jiquan are good at scheming. The only advantage may be that he has relatively little experience, so he still has a minimum of conscience and compassion in his heart. But with his calculations like this, it's really hard to say whether he will become the second Shan Jiquan in the future. The most annoying one is none other than Lou Qianshan. Although her life is pathetic, she blindly does whatever she wants because of her own selfish wishes. There were so many times that I thought this woman should die, but he survived and continued to use his pity and scheming to hurt others. Is this the real scourge left for thousands of years? Why did she harm so many innocent people but still not get the punishment she deserved in the end? Don't tell me that Shan Wu's death is the heaviest punishment for her. It just makes her completely hopeless. Even so, she will continue to work hard for her goal. One more day she lives, and she hurts more people. Her behavior is really incomprehensible and disgusting.

Okra and the protagonist are not CPs, and it would be very frustrating to watch them as CPs; especially the second male lead who compared the protagonist and Okra to Xiangjun and Mrs. Xiang at the beginning. When I watched the CP with Okra later, my blood boiled and my blood pressure soared; Okra's high-spirited character collapsed directly under the buff of the second male savior, which showed that he was out of control. Going to fetch water and being treated like a gangster by the second male lead is tolerable; however, the author's writing is good and he skips the emotional scenes and writes other plots very well; and the audience does not come to the novel to find reality, so the author does not charge for this book and it is just for self-pleasure; it can only be said that the relationship between Okra and the protagonist, who has the most emotional relationship with the protagonist in the early stage, is written to death, which can only be said to be deceiving the audience.

I can't say that the author's writing is not good, but if you really don't have enough time, don't read this book. Anyway, I don't want to read it. I can see a sense of depression and resentment.

The first few chapters are okay. The little Taoist priest first enters the world and meets all kinds of people. But the later chapters are not good. There is not even a male lead in the main character's role, so he has already given up.

Author, what you wrote is just a novel, not a literary masterpiece! Who doesn't read novels to relieve stress? Who is the male protagonist in your book? ? ? Okra is actually rationed? ? ? Isn't it good to have one dragon and two phoenixes? You can write about pure love, but Shen is really disgusting. The author is a woman, right? You are naturally attracted to this kind of person, right? Traditional martial arts novels are almost extinct due to the efforts of outstanding authors like you.

It makes me sick. It's the first time my blood pressure has soared

I'm speechless😓 The male lead is really a loser. The second male lead is more suitable to be the protagonist than the male lead.

I jumped to the back on purpose to see whose hand the protagonist would hold, but I didn't expect it to be Jab, forget it.