Line After Line

Every time I impulsively open the app, I find a few more chapters have been deleted… How many have been deleted in total? What have I said all these years? Deleting content is so easy; entire chapters disappear in a flash, much faster than writing. I just want to ask, what is it about this novel that's worth deleting? If you delete everything, then nobody should read anything anymore, okay?

What's going on? A book that started being updated in 2012? And it's still being updated for free now? Is it really that persistent?

I finally finished reading it. Although the novel is not finished yet, I always feel that the tone of this novel is very heavy. Even someone as sunny and innocent as Shan Cici was betrayed by her relatives and friends more than once. And Shan Wuyi, who was equally innocent and pure, never hurt anyone, but ended up with such a tragic ending. What must his sister and his mother think?

Okra and the protagonist are not a couple; treating them as such will make the later parts of the story very frustrating. Especially the second male lead, who initially compared the protagonist and Okra to Xiangjun and Xiangfuren, later became a couple with Okra, which was incredibly exciting and made my blood pressure soar.

I can't say the author wrote badly, but unless you're extremely bored, don't bother reading this book... I personally don't want to read it anymore; it left me with a sense of oppression and resentment.

The first few chapters were alright, with the young Taoist priest encountering all sorts of people as he first enters the martial world. But it got worse later on; the protagonist's screen time was less than that of the second male lead. I've already given up on it.

Author, you've only written a novel, not some literary masterpiece! Who reads novels to relieve stress? Who is the male lead in your book anyway? Okra is paired with Shen?! Wouldn't a perfect pairing of two beauties be better? You can write pure love stories, but that Shen is truly disgusting. Is the author a woman? 😄 You have a natural affinity for this kind of character, don't you? Traditional martial arts novels are almost extinct thanks to the efforts of authors like you.

I'm so disgusted! This is the first time my blood pressure has spiked like this.

Speechless 😓 The male lead is such a wimp. Even the second male lead is more suitable to be the protagonist.

I deliberately jumped to the back to see whose hand the main character would hold, but it turned out to be Cici. Oh well.