Summon the Sacred Sword

I feel a little emotional when I read this book again after ten years. When I read the book ten years ago, I was still a middle school student, and I was not a big ACG fan. Although there are many jokes that don't affect reading, I can't get them. On the contrary, when I re-read it this time, I saw some jokes one after another and smiled knowingly. It turns out that there are still such jokes hidden here The world view created by this book and the many lovely female characters depicted are really fresh in my memory. So even though I have never had the impression that this is such an amazing online novel with such extraordinary writing and amazing plot, this book and this world have still firmly occupied a place in my heart in the past ten years Even if I have never read it again, the images of some characters are still clearly visible in my mind. From time to time, I recall a few names, their character origins, and major events that happened to them The reason why I refuse to look at them again is because I am not willing to experience farewell to this world again. Obviously this is a refreshing novel, and overall it is a refreshing, happy and happy story. However, because I didn't want to experience the "complete book" again, I had a strong feeling that I couldn't bear to finish reading it as soon as I opened it. Including this re-reading, although I have a very clear memory of the beginning of the story, and there is no particularly heavy part in the development of the story, I was still filled with a strong sense of depression. So far, although this feeling has gradually eased, when I read on the mobile app, I still feel pressure and sadness every time I scan the percentage number in the lower left corner that shows the reading progress - ah, it is still so far away from the end. It can be said that this book is really the white moonlight of my online writing career. Its additional points for me are too high If you ask me to judge all the online articles I have read from an objective and neutral perspective and rank the overall quality, then "Summoning the Holy Sword" is obviously far from being ranked. Even among Xibeimao's own works, it is definitely not the first But for me, it will always be special. In any case, it is my only online article Bai Yueguang Back to the book itself The world of Dragon Soul Continent and the protagonist's system itself obviously have a lot of inspiration from MMORPG. Needless to say, it goes without saying that Sister Cat's OS at the end of some chapters can also be seen that she plays World of Warcraft But from today's perspective, applying the old-school MMORPG settings in the real Dragon Soul world will cause some obvious misalignments For example, the most typical level problem. The most uncomfortable description I read this time was about the angel army sent by Archduke Lydia to support the male protagonist's territory when the Kingdom of Darkness first invaded. The narrator wrote that the average level of these angels is sixty or seventy or even more than seventy. According to the basic set class corresponding level, this is a legion of legendary masters sent here But in fact, judging from the ideas revealed in Sister Cat's description, she distinguished ordinary units from elite and heroic template unique units. Although they share a level system, the level of ordinary units is simply another thing. She herself wrote in this battle that legendary masters are enough to change the situation of the battle; and when the group of elementary legends in the Necromancer group who have just passed level 60 are ready to take action, knowing that there is an entire angel army of level 60 or 70 on the opposite side, they definitely believe that their spells are enough to directly end the battle with one blow - so it is very simple. Those angels of level 60 or 70 are not legends. Although they are legendary levels, they are ordinary units. Therefore, no matter how high the level is, they are still miscellaneous soldiers and not a single master who can change the situation of the battle Besides, there are many more taken-for-granted settings and plot arrangements. For example, in the battle in the Southern Rebellion chapter, the rebels who suffered more than half of their casualties and yet did not flee are really contrary to common sense. It must be a legendary army to have such a level of discipline, right? But in fact, it was just a miscellaneous army, and it was completely wiped out in the end when the protagonist had no strength advantage. It was a bit unimaginable Another example is Marlene's erratic level setting in the early and middle stages. Obviously, Marlene's appearance positioning does not match her plot performance. Her strength setting for her appearance is very high. It is said that she is almost on par with her teacher in the academy. However, there is no way to let her join the team and arrange a plot where she is beaten by the male protagonist. Therefore, her detailed strength setting in the early stage is completely blurred. At first, she was given a very high positioning. She is the daughter of the first magic family in the principality and the leading magic genius in the principality. However, she appeared in order to be beaten by the male protagonist who was just level 10, so she was written as level 15. Then it was blurred all the time. Unexpectedly, after dozens of chapters, because I had to fight other mercenary group masters, it suddenly became 20+ again. The subsequent development is also mentioned again after the previous plot, and the level suddenly becomes higher. Obviously, after so many years of training and leaning on family resources, I have only reached level 15. After doing a few tasks and working hard for a month or two, I suddenly went up to a few levels or more. Although there are aborigines in the basic settings who will not level up level by level like the players in the game, but will suddenly have an "epiphany" based on various conditions and then increase a lot of levels at once. But obviously, Marin's level improvement in the early and middle stages did not reflect this point. On the contrary, the level surge in the middle and late Demon Chapter did reflect this setting. It can only be said that many settings in Cat Sister's book are taken for granted. It seems that there is no very detailed setting outline. The specific settings are all determined based on the current writing progress and the progress of the story. So although most of them can be put together and justified, they are a bit unable to withstand scrutiny and cannot be thought about carefully. If you think about it carefully, you will feel poisonous Speaking of the setting problem of Marlene, I am really entangled. I personally don't like the Western fantasy noble lady aspect at all, but Marlene is a rare character in this genre that I like very much. I am very satisfied with her plot arrangements in the early and middle stages and I like her very much. Although she has a setting conflict between positioning and performance, I can't think of a way to make it more satisfactory to me than the current plot arrangement even if it needs to be changed Theoretically, according to her setting and positioning, she should appear later or join the team later, but the character of Marlene should indeed join the team early to cultivate relationships and become a core team member. She is indeed very suitable for the current plot arrangement In addition to the setting level problems, Sister Mao's writing style is also a big or small problem during this period Although I have never thought that Xibei Mao is an author with outstanding writing skills, it still seems too immature at this period There are endless typos and omissions, and long and difficult sentences that appear from time to time. From time to time, I would even read in some of the long and difficult sentences she wrote, "She seemed to have forgotten what she was writing, so the subject changed and the things she said changed." I summoned the holy sword and started reading Sister Cat's book. I have also read the Lord of Darkness and the City of the End, and I have read almost a thousand chapters of the Dimensional Code. By comparison, we can indeed see the different writing levels and language abilities in different periods. I was really young when I wrote this book The last problem is the length and rhythm. In fact, it can be clearly seen that the plot accelerates towards the later stages. Some of the foreshadowing and hidden lines have obviously been cut off [actually, I think she may have forgotten it after writing it] Some characters have clues, but Sister Cat is eager to advance the plot, so there is no space, so she can only end it hastily And also because she is eager to advance the story and wants to finish it as soon as possible, so the later the new female characters are, the more they tend to be "figured". There are often only a few chapters from the time they appear to being harvested/joined the team, and there is not much shaping. As a result, he entered the Crystal Palace directly and basically found no such person. The situation becomes more intense for the Six Pillar Demon Gods and the Ten Holy Swords as they come later. Some of them didn't even write a few words in total. They only showed one scene and ended hastily And even for the characters who appeared earlier, there are still many characters who feel that their scenes are scarce and not enough to watch What I regret most is that Celia, who accompanies me from the beginning to the end, is basically a pure fighting tool in the whole book. I think she is my favorite character in the setting, but there is almost no personal plot for her, and her emotional line is better than nothing. The confession at the end is also instrumental in the same way. After the plot is over, there is no more. And judging by the meaning, this relationship will actually have no follow-up results Another example is the other white elf sisters I like very much in the Holy Sword Sisters. The two sisters, the Sons of the Wind, really filled me with mystery and expectations, but in the end, my curiosity and desire to spy on them were not fulfilled, which is also a pity - There are quite a lot of situations like this. It can only be said that there are too many characters and not enough space But then again This may be another point that shows that Xibei Mao was still relatively young at this period This is the first time Xibei Mao has written a book of this length, and he may feel more and more unable to control it. At the same time, it may be because I have never written such a long novel and have no experience, so I feel more and more impatient and don't want to write anymore. In the end, I speed up the plot and want to finish it as soon as possible. As a result, the ending of the main line and many branch lines has a "sloppy feeling". The shaping of many characters and the amount of content make people feel that they are obviously insufficient. It can be said to be the biggest regret of this book ——Unexpectedly, I spent twice as much time writing this dimensional code. To be honest, I think that while maintaining the existing outline framework and the existing character lineup, Summoning the Holy Sword is more suitable to have the space of the Dimensional Code If we can slow down the pace of promoting the main line, expand the capacity of branch lines, and add space between the plots to those characters who have few roles or are gradually being left out in the later period, this book and the cute characters in the book will become more "delicious", right? For many characters, I even think it is not an exaggeration to insert a large number of daily extras between "plot chapters" to show their image or to have a fun scene with the protagonist. Or the form of a small theater that occasionally drops at the end of the chapter in the early stages of the book is also good. It can easily supplement the richness and "realism" of the characters. It's a shame It would be great if one day this book could be rewritten and the details optimized and greatly expanded on the existing basis

Everything else is good, but the dialogue always smells like Japanese comics. The information density in one sentence is very low and full of meaningless modal particles. It's uncomfortable to watch.

This book is so solid that entering a dark room is a common occurrence. I went in for a while and then came out... I went in for a while and then came out again... Constantly going in and out... There are some books that go in but never come out, such as The Rise of the Literary Heroes of the Republic of China.

It is the pinnacle work of Cat Sister alongside Amber Sword. It can be said that after the completion of Amber and Summoning and before the appearance of Qi Miao, all the Amber books in the middle are full of rotten fish and rotten shrimps.

As the book goes on, more and more parts have been deleted. It is common for several chapters to be in a row. Smart people know where to read it.

I finally know what you mean when you say a lot has been deleted. The original version is too brilliant.

I can only say that the best part of this book has been deleted.

What is Cat Sister's background? None of this is prohibited. So strong, she deserves to be Qidian's own daughter

Maybe the requirements are too high. After reading a quarter of it, I felt that it didn't quite suit my taste. The protagonist's charisma is a bit low, to be honest. It would be okay if you traveled to a world without extraordinary power, but in some worlds, you still don't have any defense or interpretation of the system. Always follow the mission. Moreover, the various choices and things to deal with are too far-fetched. I am not very anxious to improve my personal strength, but I always cling to the system and build power. I always feel stupid. In short, I can't put it into words, it's very uncomfortable to watch, the main plot is not very clear, and it feels like the main story is overshadowed. And the biggest reason is that the division of strength in the entire world, where blood is supreme, erases all efforts, and only needs to accept a fixed path to regain strength. Anyway, there are conflicting values ​​and inconsistent ideas, but the writing style is still okay, but the scale is relatively large 2333

What can I use the Enjoy Voucher for? Is it better to trick people into giving me some rags than not giving them at all?

Who said this was written by Stallion, Stallion at least still has love. This is a little pornographic novel. The author is probably Qidian's own daughter. Hurry up and download it. It will be gone in two years 😂😂😂

Deliberately leveling up, the villain is always dozens of levels higher than the protagonist. Every boss fight is basically a hard fight, and you can't beat the feeling of Lord of Darkness or Knight of the End.

The back is so yellow... But I like it

The best part of this book is gone. This is still the original version. I hate it.

I just want to know how the Adventurer's Guild knew that the protagonist was a noble in the early stage. The article only said that it was about the adventurers of Dongfang Mountain. Did I miss something?

My favorite book, I personally think this is the one that makes Cat Sister the best, followed by Endgame and Lord of Darkness.

It's too old. Whether it's the layout, plot rhythm, or even the theme, it's full of the flavor of the times.

The book is very good, but it's a pity that many of the essence and chapters have been deleted.

It's so uncomfortable to watch. Instead of conquering the world as a player, you have already been arranged by fate and blood. It's uncomfortable.

Wow, have you finished the book? Congratulations! I've been busy lately and haven't bothered to read it. I have been reading this book for a long time and I feel it is the best one among Cat Sister's works.

Are still readable without thinking about the rationality of the values ​​​​ and the characters' actions in the book, and it is tolerable. 🙂

In the last few hundred chapters, when the earth is connected with the Dragon Soul Continent, the author wrote it very imaginatively.

The plot is good, but it's very tiring to read without segmenting it 😒 It's a long paragraph on one page

I read it again this year, and when I saw the plot of the Grien people, I felt that what the author said was so right. I apologize for questioning Sister Cat back then.

I thought I would never see this book again

I remember when I read this book before, I was deeply impressed by the protagonist's sentence that only the weak would feel that the world is cruel. I felt bad for the protagonist. Since he is the strong one in the end, why should he escape instead of destroying the world?

It looks good, I love watching it, come on, come on, come on! ! ! !

As far as free chapters are concerned, many places talk a lot about settings. Even if you occasionally skip a few chapters, it will hardly affect reading. However, today's readers probably have no intention of savoring your worldview in detail from the beginning. In addition, after all, the plot, characters, etc. Of the book written 10 years ago are a bit old-fashioned, and there is nothing particularly attractive about it. I also entered it because of the title of "Comparable to the Amber Sword". Another point I have to say is that in the very first chapter, the male and female protagonists have just known each other for a long time, so it is not surprising that the female protagonist blames herself and is sad. They come to the male protagonist for enlightenment, and the male protagonist just slaps him. It seems that the name is to wake the other person up or to arouse anger to overwhelm sadness? A pure god, I don't like this kind of male protagonist.

I heard from many book friends that this book has a lot of twists and turns. Where are they? 😍😍😍😍😍

I have a question, what is Qilian, artificial intelligence? Then why does Rhodes recognize her?