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I actually really want to say, isn't Zhongzhou Tianmo Sect the best? Why is it that one of the three major overseas forces is stronger than it at the end? The combat power system is really broken. I quite liked it at first, ugh

Xiaolou is awesome at writing books, even if he doesn't write about female protagonists, he can still write so awesomely! I hope Xiaolou doesn't write a female protagonist! Thanks! I wish you better and better as you write! Xiaolou will become a god sooner or later, because like Tomato, he can become a god even if he doesn't write a female protagonist! How does he look like Third Young Master!

This book is well written. It's a pity that it didn't become popular back then.

A dark classic. I feel that the so-called demon sect is just an ordinary sect with strange names for its magic weapons. The protagonist has an aura of ridicule, and the supporting characters are brainless. There is no caution and cunningness that I imagined people in the demon sect to have.

I don't understand what the author was thinking, making the main character so ugly, forgetting about being ugly, but since the main character started practicing San Gong again, he suddenly became more confident and felt like he had the world at his fingertips. He behaves in a high-profile manner, retaliates, and is domineering. The most speechless thing is that he loves to smile. He smiles whenever he wants. I am speechless. The protagonist has such an ugly face. I am afraid that a smile can stop my child from crying at night. I can't stand the thought of the main character smiling.

This book has nothing to do with the era. There are too many logical loopholes. Foundation building adds 300 years to lifespan, and golden elixir also adds 300 years. Shouldn't it mean that the higher the level of cultivation, the more? Then when Tianwei came down, all the people who were at the peak of foundation building knelt down, but he was a little piece of trash at level 5 of Qi training and he wouldn't kneel down. You said he would rather bend than bend, right? I saw a guy at the peak of his Qi training before kneeling down again. It was really disgusting.

If only the author could rewrite this book. Replace the outdated routines from a few years ago, improve the rhetorical descriptions, and put old wine in new bottles, and the taste will be good.

The plot is not great, but there is no heroine and no emotional drama. It is very good. I want to say where the author died or changed his vest.

If you want to comment, please first check the update time. This is a book written in 12 years. At that time, this was already a fairy tale in the novel world, okay? Book lovers who have experienced that era will definitely know that, and book friends who were still wearing crotchless pants in that era will start with the current interface where a hundred flowers bloom. It is normal to feel different. It's like giving you an original copy of Journey to the West. Can you read it? But what about the people of that era? So stop it, don't spray all the time

I barely saw 74 pictures. A fantasy novel in the style of cultivating immortals What should I say? The old routine at the beginning is to pretend to be slapped in the face, pretend to be slapped in the face... Then the level is a bit too much. Kill the early stage of foundation building at the 5th level of Qi training The 74th picture is a group of bandits. Yes, they are the bandits in the world of cultivating immortals. There are a lot of foundation building and qi training. They are all muggles anyway. They were killed randomly by the protagonist of the 12th level of qi training Alas, the realm of the book is the same as that of Wangyu mortals. I see that there are at least 2 in the Yuan Ying stage of the sect. This sect is just a third-rate sect. Qi training is the outer sect, and foundation building is the inner sect disciple. Grandmaster Jiedan is the core disciple (it is said in the book that Jiedan is the master). It should really be changed into a fantasy novel. The more I read, the weirder it gets

Why don't the male protagonist change his appearance? He has always emphasized that the black spots on the male protagonist's face that look like copper coins are disgusting. I feel disgusted when I see these words.

The main character is so brainless and so damn disgusting. Isn't it a good idea to stay among the demons? I have to leave, and the early stage is also very disgusting. The whole novel looks good, but it is very annoying 😡😡😡😡😡😡

When I read Chapter 100, I wanted to ask the author, how many new inner disciples are there in a year? Judging from the number of people who died after the protagonist entered, a few deaths in one day is considered a small number, so wouldn't it mean that at least one or two thousand of the disciples would die within a year? In a few years, the entire sect will be dead. What does the author think about this? Uh.

To be honest, I really don't like this process where the protagonist slowly grows from a white guy into a dark boss character. In the early stage, there are all kinds of emotions, so I won't talk about them. After killing someone, there are all kinds of doubts about life. When you grow into a dark boss character, the novel will be over.

The protagonist's breakthrough is about to face failure, and then he thinks in his heart: "I think that I relied on the protagonist's halo to get to where I am today. That is my lost youth." At this time, the protagonist's eyes were wide open with anger, veins popped out, and his heart was full of unwillingness. Anger arose in his heart, and he yelled "Break it for me... Ah", and then he broke through like shit.

A group of people are sick, right? This novel has been around for at least ten years, isn't it sick from today's perspective?

Chapter 10: Where does the protagonist feel guilty for killing someone? He also wanted to commit suicide. The protagonist climbed up from the bottom after experiencing countless hardships. This plot is too brainless.

It was fine for a few dozen chapters in the first place, but it completely fell apart in the later part. If I lowered my IQ forcibly, I would become invincible anyway. I was at the peak of mid-stage foundation building. I killed a dozen or so people who were at the peak of late stage foundation building without taking any rest. I couldn't stand it anymore.

Nonsense white text, confusing logic, and too long-winded. It feels like only a child of twelve or thirteen years old can read it

I found it after looking for a dark novel. I read ten chapters before I felt something was wrong. I looked at the upload time of the chapter - it was really a book from ten years ago... The protagonist is indeed dark and poisonous, and the aura of wisdom is also very strong, but I only read the free chapters. Those who want to do archeology can try it.

Does the author have any new books? I still opened a small account and wrote a book.

When the protagonist was a handyman, the outer disciples regarded him as a lowly slave. When the protagonist was an outer disciple, others thought he was a lowly slave. When the protagonist was promoted to the inner sect, others regarded him as a lowly person. Behind him, there was actually the master of the three sects with all the disciples rushing to work as slaves for others. As the old saying goes, it is better to be the head of a chicken than the tail of a phoenix. I think this book is more suitable to be called slave ancestor. The protagonist and supporting characters in this book are all mentally retarded and speak and do things without thinking.

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It's a very good novel, and it's the first time I read it using the method of reading ten paragraphs at a time without any violation. . .

At the beginning, he said that no one should know about this inheritance. Otherwise, Echigo lowered the price and later even told the woman named Zhi that she had no brain. Then, although the woman was controlled by the slave seal, she had her own thinking.

The writing is quite rubbish, and the human nature is too dark. What kind of devil is there? Isn't it still the case that people cultivate immortality? For the sake of black or black. It's just about the evil ways of the outside world, the style is too low The devil way written by others, the devil, has no good or evil, only instinct, how can there be so many emotions?

Is there any magic repair book? It doesn't even look good.

The name of this pig's trotter is really fucking good.

Nonsense, pure history

Is the author still around? Is there a Q group? Ask for 😌