The Boundless Land

Author, I took a look and found that the writing is indeed good, but the plot is really crappy. I keep saying what happens next, but if the front is not good, readers will not be able to read it. I hope you can learn from the experience and write a mainstream novel. Which category is the most popular? The outline must be well thought out and organized. The plot is very important, and your writing is also very good. Come on! There will be a bright future! Ten years! If it still doesn't work, give up on the path of online writing...

Don't deceive my feelings... Anyway, I left after reading 100 chapters... The author has been working on it for so long, but he can't say how good his book is, but readers don't read it. Why don't you look at the problem from your own perspective? A niche is a niche, but at the same time, the fantasy arcane throne is also a niche science novel. Why is it so popular? This is no longer a question of whether the wine is fragrant or not, but a question of packaging and taste. Just like I like stinky tofu, but not many people are willing to go with me to find the "stinkiest and smelliest" (I think it is fragrant) stinky tofu. But it's also tofu, Mapo tofu, tofu puffs, tofu puffs… all very popular. If you package it again, Shanshui Tofu also sells well. If you insist that your stinky tofu is the best, then you should be satisfied setting up a street stall every day and chatting with a few regular customers. But it is unrealistic for you, a seller of stinky tofu, to achieve the same results as selling landscape tofu. What is the packaging? The first ten chapters! Even the first three chapters! What's the taste? Audience! Now your audience is young people and so on. An overly serious style will drive away most readers because there is basically no sense of immersion. Those who can read your book are basically the audience for physical books. But where is this? Starting point! Internet novel! However, your writing style has not reached the level of substance, so it is doomed if you follow the substance. I can only analyze it for you so far. It's up to you whether you want to hear it or not. You can continue to sell stinky tofu, because your stall has already gathered a group of regular customers, and transformation will lose existing customers. If so, how about an attractive packaging? At least people who like it won't leave because the stall is dirty. Come on, if you can persist for five years, as long as you are willing to use your brain, you will succeed sooner or later.

But how could the results be so bad? . . This is not scientific. It is much better than those on the list.

Author, have you ever wondered why the names of light novels in Japan have become longer and longer over the years? A name like yours should be used after readers gain stickiness. You can look at the changes in the names of Big Eyeball's works.

I don't know how to praise people. I think you are awesome.

The writing style is really good. I feel that I have read a lot of books, and the writing style of this book is my favorite. I feel that the reason why the author did not succeed is that he is too honest. People who read books are just for entertainment. The author's books are too literary and artistic, which has led to many people not being able to read them.

Why are you so cute? The author is great

Miracles can only happen to authors like you, so don't follow the crowd! I feel that only by insisting on doing your own thing can you create good works

I read the recommendation and watched it, but when I saw the two protagonists, I decisively quit.

If you directly imitate the mainstream and write a book, it will become popular.