Those Classmates Who Suddenly Disappeared

After reading chapter 52, the male protagonist proposed a bait plan, which led to the disappearance of the seventh classmate. The first tourist destination disappeared, the second nightclub disappeared, the third school disappeared, the fourth hotel disappeared, the 56th amusement park disappeared, and the seventh one, the movie theater volunteered to be the bait. 16 Students appeared together in a certain place. The students were followed and disappeared one after another. This is the seventh time. After 4-5 disappearances, this case should not alert the Provincial Public Security Department? Even alert the Ministry of Public Security? ? ? These people are not allowed to be surrounded by plainclothes police officers, or even people from the National Security Bureau. What's going on? ? ? If so many people are missing from a school, why don't parents make a fuss? Public opinion is not allowed to make headlines? The Ministry of Public Security is not allowed to set up a joint investigation team, and all kinds of criminal investigation experts and authorities are not allowed to rush over. What's more, there are policemen around the hero, so at least let her participate in the bait plan, right? ? ? How can we tolerate flaws in the writing, but your plot is too much. Your setting is a modern city, so it must conform to the laws of a modern city. Otherwise, write about a parallel world where the laws are different from ours. It would take hundreds of people to die to alert the Public Security Department! ! ! ! ! 10 years of perseverance is certainly valuable, but well, your failure is not just a problem for readers. Those who like suspense novels and do not consider the logic of the plot can ignore it. After all, I am an old bookworm and may be picky. PS I would like to give the author a little suggestion. Whether it is urban or fantasy, the plot must be reasonable, and the character's personality and behavior must be logical, which is what readers pay more attention to. For example, in your article, when traveling, the male protagonist knows that there may be dangers and there is a third party involved, so he does not accompany his girlfriend up the mountain. This is unreasonable. Think to yourself, if you were the male protagonist and your girlfriend insisted on going, would you accompany your girlfriend to the mountain? If you want readers to accept the plot and feel that his behavior is reasonable, you have to set him up as a scumbag, or have something very important that prevents him from accompanying his girlfriend. If readers don't agree, why should they be interested in continuing reading? Why vote and follow up?

First of all, I admire the author's perseverance, which is something that most people and even most authors don't have. Secondly, there is still a lot of room for improvement in the novel. The author can now accumulate experience and suggest that he start a new book and write the beginning carefully. Many of the suggestions given by readers in the comment area are very meaningful. For example, I also think that the author's writing at the beginning is very complicated. I did not read the key points and it is easy to lose interest in reading. 1. The beginning is very important and unattractive. 2. The description is cumbersome and complicated, and many dialogues can be brushed off without any core. 3. There is no outstanding point in the writing style. Whether the suspense article you write is mainly funny or horror, you can write either type of suspense article. For example, suspense should be thick and detailed, leaving suspense, rather than meaningless nonsense. This is not suspense, this is commonplace. 4. Innovation 5. The characters are distinct. The characters in this book are templated, and even the protagonist has a facial makeup. I am not a professional, but learning from mistakes and gaining wisdom from others is the prerequisite for becoming better.

After reading dozens of chapters, let me talk about what I found uncomfortable 1. There are too many characters, the protagonist has little sense of existence, and the psychological activities are not rich. After reading more than ten chapters, I forgot who the protagonist is, and there is no sense of immersion in the atmosphere at all 2. Your "no way" and "no" are too dramatic. Where in reality do people often talk like this? It's almost all intersex 3. The narration describes too much, making it feel like an outsider is explaining, without a sense of substitution, and it also feels very watery when written this way.

The beginning of the novel is very attractive, and it is well written. I stopped reading it even before I finished it. I have to say that it is well written, but it was hard to read even if it had some flaws. Keep up the good work, author, and look forward to the day when your book reviews will exceed 1,000 (๑• . •๑)

I am a bookworm of 12 years. I was attracted by your self-introduction. I just want to see how the author who has been on the street for 10 years writes.

Author, you are a ruthless person. You have written three books, each of which has exceeded one million, and the recommendation votes have not exceeded 30,000, but you still insist on writing. I have to say that you are a ruthless person. If it were an ordinary person, this account would have been abandoned long ago.

The author's perseverance allowed him to travel back in time to the 1960s and 1970s. One person could develop half of the northwest.

The author of more than 10 million words is really convinced that he is still a first-class author. The electricity generated with love is enough for the people of the whole country for three years.

Hey, when I see the results, I just want to say that the author has worked hard, so I have the perseverance to give it a try. The author really considers changing to a more popular subject I insist on so many words, and I don't want to be popular, but I don't deserve this result Either online writing is really not suitable for you, or you really haven't found the right way To be honest, your writing may not be excellent, but It shouldn't have ended up like this. The few rebirth urban novels I read, about being reborn as a warm man, etc., Their writing skills are really no better than yours But there are still people who voted for it, and the author level is not lv1 Change your thinking and try other methods and other genres, don't force yourself to read a book, readers will feel distressed after seeing your results.

The beginning is unrealistic. When both parties confirm the relationship, they should clearly announce it to the public and reject other suitors. Otherwise, your boyfriend (girlfriend) will suspect that you are cuckolding him (her).

From the Land of the Abyss is the second online novel I have read. Although it has shortcomings, it is the first novel that made me addicted. From then on, I fell into the quagmire of online writing out of control. After the Dragon and the Sky was no longer updated, I thought the author would never write again, so I stopped paying attention to it. I accidentally thought of coming over to take a look today. I am very happy to see the author writing again. Anyway, keep up the good work!

I saw a brother say that the author does not feel like writing a book, but like filming a TV series. I feel the same way. It is not wordy, but the writing is very cumbersome. Every plot and dialogue must be written clearly. It is very tiring to read. But at the same time, I also admire the author's perseverance. I hope to become a god in the future. I will leave for now.

Don't mention it, the author moved me to tears. He wrote the book day and night, and the book has over a million dollars, but it is still not popular. If it is not popular, forget it. He didn't practice the trumpet, and he didn't even have a eunuch! "Is there still a king's law? Is there still a law?" Such a dedicated author, I will just do a 360-degree somersault and kneel down in an Armstrong spin. The eldest brother is on top. Please accept my bow. Pah pah pah pah pah Okay, it's done 😁😁

How many people really watched it? I looked at Quan Ding and estimated that there are only 10. You have to understand that there are pirated websites that contribute Quan Ding to you.

If you are so perseverant, you can actually write historical articles, even if they are fictional. As long as the information you check is hard-core enough, someone will read it.

Author, you are so awesome! I really admire it! Compared to those dead pigeons and dead eunuchs! I don't know how many times more awesome, this perseverance! I haven't read the book, but I admire it!

It is said that the author simply writes a story about urban rebirth and commercial harem. As long as the writing style is good, he will not be a cuckold. The author's perseverance will definitely become popular 🤓

I feel that the author's writing style has matured, and he can conceive a good storyline to open up a new pit. If he can persist for so many years, his family is relatively not short of money. Writing must be a hobby, and a hobby is a hobby. Who doesn't want to make some achievements. Communicate with the editor and directly invest in it to open a new vest. Although this vest already has fans, they have already defined you as a "hard-working" author, and there is a high probability that they will not read it seriously. They will still only encourage you, but they will not read it seriously, believe me (you can wait until the book is on the shelves and then push the new book on this vest, which will have unexpected effects) Two updates a day before it is put on the shelf, save two updates a day, and update it ten thousand times immediately after it is put on the shelf. This way the chance of exposure is very high. Of course, it must have a similar beginning. I am a salty fish, and my opinion must be as worthless as farts, but after seeing the author's behavior, I sincerely recommend it.

I couldn't stand it after reading more than 20 chapters. I changed the title to The Daily Life of an Incompetent Protagonist. The running account is equally unattractive. I just want to watch the ending directly.

Awesome, the author's perseverance is really awesome

Seeing that you have written so many words and you are still at the first level, I will give you a recommendation vote as an encouragement😅

In fact, the author could change the introduction, even if it exposes a little bit of the plot. This mediocre and featureless introduction really makes people have no desire to read on. I fell in love with this book mainly because of the recommendation of friends. . No one told me that I've crossed out this book n times. It's really not very popular.

I read some of the previous chapters, and I feel like someone like me has a big brain, and dug a hole for suspense and stuff. I don't know if it will be filled, but the hole was dug pretty well. However, the writing style and rhythm are not very good. As a suspense, the beginning is like a running account, and there is no eye-catching point. All you want to watch is fast forward to the finale. Another point is that the protagonist is too ordinary, so ordinary that he does not have a "personality". In all novels, the protagonist is either aloof or funny, which will create a character anyway, but this protagonist feels like a passerby to me. The author has honed his writing skills and thought about what kind of rhythm a web novel needs, what is interesting, and what suspense relies on to attract readers' attention. As the protagonist, why can he become the protagonist again? I think the author can survive it.

Has the author been blocked by the platform? After reading a few chapters, I feel that the novel is much worse than yours, but it's not all 0. Has it offended the editor? No recommendation, blocked or something? It's obviously okay, but the results are confusing.

After reading books for so many years, this is the first time I see an author who has written 10 million words and is still a first-class author. The author is really passionate about it.

I persisted until Chapter 162, died...

What is the content of this book? Can anyone introduce it to me?

It is now eleven o'clock in the evening. Due to the lack of books today, I saw the author's message in the comment section of a book I forgot about in the afternoon. I discovered these more than 10 million words and planned to try to listen to it. So at 11 o'clock in the evening, I listened to Chapter 29 and talked about my feelings. The writing is still readable. I will save it on my bookshelf and read it slowly. But it stands to reason that the plot is not going by too slowly, but when I heard about the missing third person, I got tired and wanted to change to other books. It felt like I had listened to seventy or eighty chapters, and then I realized that I had only listened to chapter 29. This strange feeling should be because the protagonist was confused all the time and made me very tired. Let's continue listening to the next part tomorrow. Oh, by the way, come on, author

The front is good, but the back is too fake. The protagonist and his party encountered a lot of dangers and no one died. What's more important is that they found the place where the protagonist and his party were useless. They tied the protagonist and his party without searching them. Normally, thousands of years of belief will break the hands and feet of the pig's feet and the party even if they don't kill the pig's feet to complete the task. The villain is too smart.

Today I suddenly discovered that this book actually has an audio book