Those Classmates Who Suddenly Disappeared

Author, you are a ruthless person. You have written three books, each of which has exceeded one million, and the recommendation votes have not exceeded 30,000, but you still insist on writing. I have to say that you are a ruthless person. If it were an ordinary person, this account would have been abandoned long ago.

The author's perseverance allowed him to travel back in time to the 1960s and 1970s. One person could develop half of the northwest.

The author of more than 10 million words is really convinced that he is still a first-class author. The electricity generated with love is enough for the people of the whole country for three years.

Hey, when I see the results, I just want to say that the author has worked hard, so I have the perseverance to give it a try. The author really considers changing to a more popular subject I insist on so many words, and I don't want to be popular, but I don't deserve this result Either online writing is really not suitable for you, or you really haven't found the right way To be honest, your writing may not be excellent, but It shouldn't have ended up like this. The few rebirth urban novels I read, about being reborn as a warm man, etc., Their writing skills are really no better than yours But there are still people who voted for it, and the author level is not lv1 Change your thinking and try other methods and other genres, don't force yourself to read a book, readers will feel distressed after seeing your results.

The beginning is unrealistic. When both parties confirm the relationship, they should clearly announce it to the public and reject other suitors. Otherwise, your boyfriend (girlfriend) will suspect that you are cuckolding him (her).

From the Land of the Abyss is the second online novel I have read. Although it has shortcomings, it is the first novel that made me addicted. From then on, I fell into the quagmire of online writing out of control. After the Dragon and the Sky was no longer updated, I thought the author would never write again, so I stopped paying attention to it. I accidentally thought of coming over to take a look today. I am very happy to see the author writing again. Anyway, keep up the good work!

After reading chapter 52, the male protagonist proposed a bait plan, which led to the disappearance of the seventh classmate. The first tourist destination disappeared, the second nightclub disappeared, the third school disappeared, the fourth hotel disappeared, the 56th amusement park disappeared, and the seventh one, the movie theater volunteered to be the bait. 16 Students appeared together in a certain place. The students were followed and disappeared one after another. This is the seventh time. After 4-5 disappearances, this case should not alert the Provincial Public Security Department? Even alert the Ministry of Public Security??? These people are not allowed to be surrounded by plainclothes police officers, or even people from the National Security Bureau. What's going on??? If so many people are missing from a school, why don't parents make a fuss? Public opinion is not allowed to make headlines? The Ministry of Public Security is not allowed to set up a joint investigation team, and all kinds of criminal investigation experts and authorities are not allowed to rush over. What's more, there are policemen around the hero, so at least let her participate in the bait plan, right??? How can we tolerate flaws in the writing, but your plot is too much. Your setting is a modern city, so it must conform to the laws of a modern city. Otherwise, write about a parallel world where the laws are different from ours. It would take hundreds of people to die to alert the Public Security Department!!!!! 10 years of perseverance is certainly valuable, but well, your failure is not just a problem for readers. Those who like suspense novels and do not consider the logic of the plot can ignore it. After all, I am an old bookworm and may be picky. PS I would like to give the author a little suggestion. Whether it is urban or fantasy, the plot must be reasonable, and the character's personality and behavior must be logical, which is what readers pay more attention to. For example, in your article, when traveling, the male protagonist knows that there may be dangers and there is a third party involved, so he does not accompany his girlfriend up the mountain. This is unreasonable. Think to yourself, if you were the male protagonist and your girlfriend insisted on going, would you accompany your girlfriend to the mountain? If you want readers to accept the plot and feel that his behavior is reasonable, you have to set him up as a scumbag, or have something very important that prevents him from accompanying his girlfriend. If readers don't agree, why should they be interested in continuing reading? Why vote and follow up?

I saw a brother say that the author does not feel like writing a book, but like filming a TV series. I feel the same way. It is not wordy, but the writing is very cumbersome. Every plot and dialogue must be written clearly. It is very tiring to read. But at the same time, I also admire the author's perseverance. I hope to become a god in the future. I will leave for now.

Don't mention it, the author moved me to tears. He wrote the book day and night, and the book has over a million dollars, but it is still not popular. If it is not popular, forget it. He didn't practice the trumpet, and he didn't even have a eunuch! "Is there still a king's law? Is there still a law?" Such a dedicated author, I will just do a 360-degree somersault and kneel down in an Armstrong spin. The eldest brother is on top. Please accept my bow. Pah pah pah pah pah Okay, it's done 😁😁

How many people really watched it? I looked at Quan Ding and estimated that there are only 10. You have to understand that there are pirated websites that contribute Quan Ding to you.