Abyssless Earth

Author, I took a look and found that the writing is indeed good, but the plot is really crappy. I keep saying what happens next, but if the front is not good, readers will not be able to read it. I hope you can learn from the experience and write a mainstream novel. Which category is the most popular? The outline must be well thought out and organized. The plot is very important, and your writing is also very good. Come on! There will be a bright future! Ten years! If it still doesn't work, give up on the path of online writing...

Don't deceive my feelings... Anyway, I left after reading 100 chapters... The author has been working on it for so long, but he can't say how good his book is, but readers don't read it. Why don't you look at the problem from your own perspective? A niche is a niche, but at the same time, the fantasy arcane throne is also a niche science novel. Why is it so popular? This is no longer a question of whether the wine is fragrant or not, but a question of packaging and taste. Just like I like stinky tofu, but not many people are willing to go with me to find the "stinkiest and smelliest" (I think it is fragrant) stinky tofu. But it's also tofu, Mapo tofu, tofu puffs, tofu puffs… all very popular. If you package it again, Shanshui Tofu also sells well. If you insist that your stinky tofu is the best, then you should be satisfied setting up a street stall every day and chatting with a few regular customers. But it is unrealistic for you, a seller of stinky tofu, to achieve the same results as selling landscape tofu. What is the packaging? The first ten chapters! Even the first three chapters! What's the taste? Audience! Now your audience is young people and so on. An overly serious style will drive away most readers because there is basically no sense of immersion. Those who can read your book are basically the audience for physical books. But where is this? Starting point! Internet novel! However, your writing style has not reached the level of substance, so it is doomed if you follow the substance. I can only analyze it for you so far. It's up to you whether you want to hear it or not. You can continue to sell stinky tofu, because your stall has already gathered a group of regular customers, and transformation will lose existing customers. If so, how about an attractive packaging? At least people who like it won't leave because the stall is dirty. Come on, if you can persist for five years, as long as you are willing to use your brain, you will succeed sooner or later.

But how could the results be so bad? . . This is not scientific. It is much better than those on the list.

Author, have you ever wondered why the names of light novels in Japan have become longer and longer over the years? A name like yours should be used after readers gain stickiness. You can look at the changes in the names of Big Eyeball's works.

I don't know how to praise people. I think you are awesome.

The writing style is really good. I feel that I have read a lot of books, and the writing style of this book is my favorite. I feel that the reason why the author did not succeed is that he is too honest. People who read books are just for entertainment. The author's books are too literary and artistic, which has led to many people not being able to read them.

Why are you so cute? The author is great

I read the recommendation and watched it, but when I saw the two protagonists, I decisively quit.

Miracles can only happen to authors like you, so don't follow the crowd! I feel that only by insisting on doing your own thing can you create good works

If you directly imitate the mainstream and write a book, it will become popular.

I really don't understand why I'm still at Level 1 after finishing two books...

The book is a good book, but the dual-protagonist mode is too confusing

Since the author worked so hard to send a private message recommendation, this is the first private message I have received in several years, so I always come to take a look. This work is still quite old (well, compared to the speed of development of online writing...), But the traditional fantasy writing is better than many hodgepodges nowadays. Let's take a look first, but as a veteran, I won't keep reading if there are no highlights, although the author writes very seriously.

To be honest, it has a strong ancient flavor

The description of Lord Yuan is the most flesh-and-blood. We should spend more space describing Lord Yuan.

I guess there's something wrong with the title of the book... I don't want to read it when I see this title... At least I have to have this kind of funny title after it becomes popular...

Can you change the cover? I don't even have the desire to click in and take a look.

When reading, I always feel that the characters are not vivid and independent enough, as if they live in the author's subjective thoughts rather than in the story. This may be because the personality is not established enough.

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When I first started watching it, I saw in the comments section that there were two male protagonists. Which two were they?

The beginning of a book is really important. It determines a person's desire to read the book. If the beginning does not impress a person, then who can persist in reading the book? Just like in reality, who would not care about a person's appearance to understand a person's soul. Even if there is, how much?

How do you say this? These are the first two pictures I read of the author's writing, and they are indeed good! The writing is okay, but I feel like the author may be lacking in fame! I don't recommend it very much, and the appeal from the front doesn't feel very strong! There are so many authors and books nowadays. If you want to be famous and get out of the industry, you have to rely on fame or opportunities! It feels a bit like writing about dragons!

I can no longer hold back the passion in my heart and decided to give you 999 likes

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The author, the first book is better than the latest one, the writing style is really good. Even the plot is still as flowing as ever

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Borrowing precious treasures, I recommend a book with three vulgarities and many joys. "Old man in time travels to pick up rags and makes a living by making bad movies". Don't read it while eating! The world of laughter…

The words and sentences in this novel are really awkward

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It's very beautiful, both the characters and the scenes are well written. I swear, I have fallen in love with this book! ! ! ! I started reading it last night and have already read more than a hundred chapters. I feel that the author wrote it very carefully, not like someone, hey! I can't name it because I'm afraid others will criticize me. Anyway, it looks good... I support you. Come on! ! ! ! !