Burning Moscow

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I have been reading this book a few days ago and finished it the day before yesterday. It is very well written. Let me give you a brief introduction first. The protagonist time travels into the body of a Soviet female soldier named Lida, who is the heroine in "The Dawns Here Are Quiet", but the time is changed to 1941. First person, In terms of writing: it's good and fluent, and the later words are much smoother than the first 300,000 words. Cheating level: low And the author has done a lot of homework, so that some chapters look like direct copies of historical materials. There are some unreasonable things, but the flaws are not concealed. Generally speaking, it is still very rigorous. Perhaps because the author lives in Russia, reading this book feels like watching a Soviet movie, because the dialogues of the characters all have a "Russian" flavor, and the Russian speaking habits are well expressed. It may be because the author lives in Russia. What impressed me most was that the author emphasized the difference between "you" and "you". The former represents guarded alienation, while the latter can only be addressed by people who are close to each other. So you can see in this book that most people use the word you, and there are many more, such as the issue of patronymic and birth name. Perhaps it is because of these details that people feel like watching a Soviet movie. Summary: The dialogue between the characters has a Russian flavor and the cultural details are good. The protagonist, Goldfinger, is not so unfaithful. She has inherited the skills of the original and the knowledge of later generations, and she is doing well. Note that I said "doing well". In fact, the protagonist's early command of the battle and victory are often based on luck, and the author has repeatedly emphasized that the protagonist's command ability is insufficient. For example: Because the protagonist knew in advance how much damage winter would cause to the Nazi army, he decisively attacked in the defense of Moscow and won a huge victory and got the position of major general at once. He didn't show much military literacy, he couldn't read a map, and he didn't even understand the configuration of the army. Perhaps the author wanted to hone the military qualities of the protagonist and asked the impulsive protagonist to shoot dozens of Nazi prisoners because of Zoya's incident (he was Baidu Zoya). Because they were secretly abducted by reporters and reported, it caused adverse effects. She got into trouble, and her superiors wanted to punish her. With the plea of ​​her patron Zhukov, she was only demoted to major, from major general to major (and now major general again). Then her superiors treat her like a panacea, and the protagonist is impulsive and straightforward. When she sees her superiors' mistakes in command, she can't help but come up with a better plan of her own. This immature approach also makes her find that she is thankless. Even if her plan succeeds, nothing will happen to her. I digress. In short, the protagonist is a kind and straightforward person. She sympathizes with her subordinates and hates the practice of blindly using the blood of soldiers to win victory. Although this has caused her a lot of pain, she has never changed her approach. The author has done a good job in this regard. He does not let the world revolve around the protagonist. The protagonist's setbacks make her more mature, rather than using the hand of God to wipe out her enemies and obstacles. This is what I like. The protagonist is like a witness to history, not a person who changes history. She does not bring anything cool to change history. When the Soviet Union believed that the direction of the German army's general attack was not Stalingrad, the protagonist knew that even if she told her superiors, it would be futile, because no one would believe it and she would be angry. However, she still chose to report it. Even if the hope was slim, she was willing to risk her career for it. She asked her superiors who admired her to report to Stalin, but she was scolded. Because the protagonist's thoughts are different from those of this era in some aspects, she is often shot by the violent Ministry of Internal Affairs. Of course, she is saved every time by a backer (all kinds of backers have been found in the early stage). She almost died several times, making readers grit their teeth at the unreasonable Ministry of Internal Affairs. Then the Ministry of Internal Affairs was not retaliated by the law of causality weapon and continued to embarrass the protagonist... The author has always deliberately suppressed the development of the protagonist and prevented her from being promoted too quickly. I think this is very good. Commanding an army group in combat is not interesting. Moreover, with so many achievements, the protagonist will probably reach Zhukov's status in the later stage. It is not easy to write - reporting a Datong number and commanding troops are not interesting. The protagonist is a stubborn person who always

The quality of the book is pretty good. I have a few suggestions. First, you don't have to write it completely according to history. Just like the Romance of the Three Kingdoms and the Chronicle of the Three Kingdoms, there are far more people who like to read the romance than those who like to read the romance. Most of the people who give you rewards are people who like to read the romance. When writing a novel, you write a story rather than a history. The general line is good. Other characters or time can be adapted appropriately. 2. The characteristics of the characters are not outstanding enough. Let's take the Romance of the Three Kingdoms as an example. Many characters in the novel have distinct characteristics and readers can distinguish them clearly. In your novel, if readers who have not watched movies about the Patriotic War will have a hard time remembering who the generals are against. Most of them have the same face. For example, this Vlasov, you can put He portrayed characters like Wei Yan or Zhang Jia (I say him now because his role is almost over and will not have much impact on the author's conception), as well as the previous Soviet generals. Although many died early and had few roles, why not refer to the techniques of Liu Pi, Gong Du, Yan Liang, and Wen Chou in shaping them? Loyal and brave. 3. The way of fighting, the Soviet army seems to be too rigid. The description of the battle is more like the Three Kingdoms. It can be appropriately added with the elements of the romance, and it is a battle of wits and courage. The rigidity of the Soviet army also sets off the low IQ of the German generals, making the process not exciting enough. In fact, these generals are very good, but there are too many, which makes everyone a little aesthetically tired. This is where you can play. The above are just suggestions. If you don't like them, you can ignore them. After all, the author's own ideas are the most important.

Please don't make it! In this historical context, there is no need for such long-term rivalry. . . One more such fictitious non-partner opponent will cause more plot bugs. . . Would you like to be a little more reasonable? . . Isn't it okay if I don't have the blood of a little white dog? I beg the author to think carefully! War is not a TV series, so don't be so coincidental. . . And if there is an imaginary male senior officer, that one is the protagonist. If there is a protagonist who occupies the senior officer, the plot can be changed. . . No matter how many there are, it feels like there are too many protagonists... Having too many protagonists is definitely evil! Not all of this book is heroic. . . . I beg the author not to add a lifelong rival! Just some short-term backups will be enough. . . I beg you and I have been waiting for a year. I don't want to be dragged into the ditch just after updating this book! 😭😭😭

Looking forward to extras such as "Valkyrie in the Far East", "Red War Goddess in the Cold War", "1991, Turning the Tide"...

Recently, I read the book "Struggle in Soviet Russia" from an external website. It currently has more than 900,000 words. The time is one year before Germany attacks the Soviet Union. The protagonist is engaged in intelligence, starting from a small boss. He is currently the chairman of the National Security Bureau and a member of the Central Committee, in charge of foreign intelligence, and is very trusted by Stalin. Highly recommended

Fourteen years have passed in a flash. I only read the first few chapters and didn't read to the end. I didn't expect that I had written so many words. It can be called a masterpiece!

I originally thought that "Moscow is Burning" would be the beginning of Soviet-German war novels, but I didn't expect it to be the pinnacle. Both "Red Moscow" and "Soviet Union 1941" have many problems, and there are many places that are seriously inconsistent with history.

Only by getting close to Lao Maozi can you know what they are like. As a Northeasterner, the impression I heard from the oldest generation is that the little devil is hateful! Lao Maozi is even more hateful

Moscow is Burning is an extremely realistic time-travel novel. The author should have spent a lot of effort to research many historical events and characters of the former Soviet Union's Patriotic War. It mentioned that the extremely arrogant and domineering Ministry of Internal Affairs was one of the reasons for the disintegration of the former Soviet Union.

After looking at the table of contents, conquering Berlin is all? I can't write about the Northeast, there is still a lot of content! The Cold War, the Soviet Communist Party's many years of mistakes, and the fact that it would be about 70 years old in 1991. . . Why don't you explain these? .

I personally feel that these so-called historical novels are a silent satire on the 10 million casualties of Soviet officers and soldiers and 15 million Soviet civilians. What's the use of having so many of you die? One Long Aotian can deal with it directly!

I'm a long-time reader and have read it several times. It's much better than the current sword-fighting and spy-related series.

There are too many loopholes, and they will feed you a mouthful of poison every time you look at them. Moreover, the protagonist often cannot control his mouth and loses control of his emotions at every turn. Is he a primary school student?

I think this book is the only true heroine military novel. I like it very much. I have read the whole book over and over again. I hope there will be a sequel. I hope people will like me if there is a sequel.

Is this the end? It's okay if my husband loses his memory and doesn't write. My son has no explanation. You can also write extras. Write more about postwar life. And I personally think it's okay for men to wear women's clothes. You don't have to write down anything you dislike. Or pass it off in one stroke. It doesn't matter if you kiss the original owner's husband. And you also wrote about cooperation earlier. It doesn't matter if there are one or two.

Gan, I read this book ten years ago. Now I am so old, am I old?

He always gets angry at just one word, and can't save face even when he knows he's wrong. I will always be the one to start a group with my teammates, but I will not follow my teammates when they start a group. Always fail to report plans to your superiors and be reminded that you are sweating. It is always a matter of arguing with superiors and discussing status with subordinates. "You know that orders from superiors can only be obeyed and not discussed." Always show off the knowledge of future generations without looking at the atmosphere, and then go to great lengths to cover up oneself.

Niche books are good... Md's highly popular book reviews are like public toilets. No matter cats or dogs, you can come in and puke.

Indeed, many people have been deceived by the U. S. Blackmail. The list of U. S. Aid to the Soviet Union during World War II is compiled according to the "Economic History of Soviet Socialism" by the Institute of Economics, Academy of Social Sciences of the Soviet Union: Planes: 14,018 Tanks and armored vehicles: 22,800 Transport vehicles: 501,660 Motorcycles: 30,000 Railway vehicles: 13,041 Aircraft guns: 7944 Submachine guns: 108293 Smokeless powder: 130713 tons Explosives: 132237 tons Steel: 2589766 tons Aluminum: 26110 tons Oil: 2622357 tons Chemicals: 631017 tons Ships: 672 ships In 1941, the Soviet Union's own production of high-quality aviation oil could only meet 4% of its needs. From August 1941 to September 1945, almost all the high-octane fuel used by the Soviet Union to produce aviation gasoline came from aid from the United States and Britain. The aviation oil provided to the Soviet Union by the Western Allies under the Lend-Lease Act was four times the Soviet Union's own production, providing 2.6 Million tons of oil. The Soviets claimed that they had x million tons of gasoline, but in fact they were obviously bragging. What were the main oil-producing regions of the Soviet Union? Western Siberia, the Volga-Urals, and Transcaucasia, all of these places were destroyed in the early stages of the war. In terms of road transportation, the United States provided 409,500 cars to the Soviet Union, which was 1.5 Times the total production of the Soviet Union during the war; the motorcycles it provided were 1.2 Times the total production of the Soviet Union. If we also take into account the large tonnage and excellent performance of American cars, their role is even greater. The United States also provided a total of 5,606,000 car tires to the Soviet Union, and they were mainly tires for large cars. The UK also provided 103,500 tons of rubber. The United States and Britain provided a total of 427,000 transport vehicles and 35,000 motorcycles to the Soviet Union. Two-thirds of the Soviet military vehicles came from American aid. Without this assistance, it is estimated that the Soviets would have to devote at least half of their factories to manufacturing delivery vehicles, and then don't expect them to be able to build so many tanks. At the same time, the Allies provided the equivalent of more than 620,000 rails, accounting for 56.5% Of the Soviet Union's total rail production. That is, half of the rails on the Soviet wartime railways were provided by the United States. The steam locomotives provided by the United States and Britain were 2.4 Times the total output of the Soviet Union, the electric locomotives were 11 times, and the carriages were 10.2 Times.​

The most interesting thing about the book is that the heroine directs the battle, and she can handle it until she is the commander of the group army. But in the end, she was appointed as the deputy commander of the front army. Instead of taking over Berlin as the commander of the front army, it was not satisfying enough, and the ending did not explain what happened to Oshanin and his son. The 26-year-old Soviet general has yet to conquer the Far East, and he has yet to become a marshal.

Akhromeev was born in Tambov in 1923 and left the farm at the age of 17 to join the Red Army. Graduated from the Naval Academy. During the Great Patriotic War, he fought in Leningrad, Stalingrad, and Southern Ukraine as a Marine Corps soldier and junior officer. In 1942, he joined the party when he served as a company commander in Leningrad. This was the position with the highest death rate. He said: "I joined the party not to find a job at the headquarters or in the rear, but to stay on the front line and to make the soldiers and sergeants trust me more." Marshal Akhromeev[1] His troops were stationed about 35 miles from Leningrad. The siege lasted for 890 days, and as many as 830,000 Leningrad civilians were killed by bombings and starvation. "For 18 months," Akhromeev said, "I have not entered the house, even when the temperature was as low as minus 50 degrees Celsius. I slept outside for two winters and never had a warm day. I was always fighting, always hungry." When he spoke, there was no sound in the house. "Moreover, there were so many dead people. Eight out of 10 boys my age died. Among my 32 middle school classmates, only one other classmate and I survived [2]." At the end of the war, he was the commander of a tank battalion.

I don't like this book, maybe I'm too narrow-minded, but as a soul from a foreign country, it's impossible for me to sacrifice my life for Stalin.

What about the sequel?,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

The German stick was shocked by this, why is there no such good German language?

I just want to know if the protagonist can unify China and fulfill his dream of becoming a goose?

First person books are garbage

There are so many egos, egos, and egos. As expected, the first person is too difficult.

Chapter 29: Poisoned to death by a mysterious man

The heroine's perspective? No sense of immersion