Futang

After reading the whole book, I just feel that the plot becomes more idealistic towards the end, the writing style is a bit childish, and the language is a bit naive. The wording and sentence construction are even a bit weak, and it even destroys the world 😅

After reading so many novels for so many years, only this Tang Dynasty historical novel left the deepest impression on me. It is my favorite one because the protagonist has an online IQ and is not a brainless novel. In the end, he gained huge power. Instead of becoming the king and emperor in the Tang Dynasty, he chose to guard the Western Regions. This level is much higher. Only the protagonist in Yueguan's "Return to the Ming Dynasty to Be a Prince" can compare.

The emotional scenes were so awkward. . . There is nothing attractive about female characters. Shangguan Wan'er was originally supposed to be a very sensible woman in the center of power, but she fell in love with the male protagonist after only a few meetings, and rushed to deliver news to him; Princess Taiping was described well at first, as a pampered and smart princess, and a consort. After she got off the line, she became mentally retarded. She teased the male protagonist in various ways, and soon she was with him. To be honest, it was too ironic compared to the deep love between husband and wife before. Moreover, after she realized that she wanted to seize power, she was willing to give money to the male protagonist and everything was fine. From then on, why did you describe her changes in mood for a long time? Taiping still had sovereignty when she was with Xue, but when she was with the male protagonist, she made wedding clothes for others; the alien princess was also fascinated, and inexplicably went from tit-for-tat to sacrificing for the male protagonist; and The princess is extremely obedient; Wei Tuan'er is even more funny. She is obviously Wu Zetian's spy, and it is understandable that she seduces the male protagonist. After all, she has to win further trust, but after sleeping with the male protagonist, she becomes a little woman who is willing to be a slave. To be honest, Wu Zetian's skill in training people is too poor. The female secretary she trained around her from childhood became a love brain. Her pet daughter quickly fell in love with a man with ulterior motives and gave up her power. The two most legendary women around Wu Zetian have become this kind of character. It is simply Jack Su Long's arrogance to the extreme. To be honest, historical texts don't care about your stallion harem. Hooking up with princesses or exotic princesses from aristocratic families is also a common routine, but you can pass it by. If you choose to describe the emotional drama seriously, it must at least be logical and humane. The female protagonist will lose her IQ when she meets the male protagonist, and the male protagonist said in the previous chapter that he does not love and will not be tempted. , The next chapter is about to get married, and it is written with deep affection. With such deep affection, you praise Shangguan Wan'er in front of Wei Tuan'er, miss Taiping in front of Shangguan Wan'er, and feel sorry for the princess in front of Taiping. Wouldn't it be better to just write that the male protagonist wants to have a harem? Why do you keep writing about who you love most so and so, and who you want to marry so and so

A shady businessman rented the same house to two different blind people. They didn't know that they had an extra neighbor. Just like that, a month later, the businessman received two rents. He was very happy and wanted to see how the two blind people lived. However, he looked through the small hole in the door for a few minutes and then left in a hurry. The next day, the businessman sold the house to someone else and left the city. God please explain......

I started to feel aggrieved, and it was very messy and messy later.

No, no, no, I'm just making do in the front. But it was poisonous just from the beginning

Actually, I think the writing has a bit of Xue Gang's rebellion against the Tang Dynasty, plus some messy plot development trends, which makes people can't help but think about it.

He also had the top martial arts champion in the Tang Dynasty, why can't he be found?

Old White Pig, first come to check in with the author, and then tell your friends that the bones of the Han Dynasty will last forever. Friends can take a look. The author already has a complete novel of 3 million words, so don't worry.

If you plan to make Taiping the heroine, you should write it honestly and wait for someone else to get married and her husband to die before getting together with the protagonist. It's really drunk. I don't know what's going on. I have to be a wife, or a wife who is in love with her husband. It's really disgusting. I can't walk when I see a woman. It's a rubbish book.