The Beast-Taming Chronicles

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The taste was alright, but the plot dragged on, lacking closure and positive feedback. Normally, the first chapter should establish the background, the protagonist's situation, and create a predicament. By the end of the first chapter, or even the second, the protagonist's abilities should be developed, how they overcome the predicament, how they level up, and the closure, showing both positive and negative aspects. However, after reading several chapters, you felt like you were constantly pressuring the protagonist, without seeing them take action and receive positive feedback.

Dear author, your new book is great! I've joined the new book investment group, please update!