Lord of the Mysteries: The Stars Shine

I'm not trying to criticize, but... The protagonist, a dual-path true god with near-original strength (if I remember correctly), is invincible within the barrier. Having this prior knowledge makes the plot quite mysterious. As an invincible being who doesn't participate in history, it's clear the author wanted to gloss over this. Why not just jump to the Fifth Age from the start?

As the title suggests, it's not that the background in the first dozen or so chapters is bad. Instead, these are outlines that you, the author, should have hidden away. I feel like I have two options if I really want to write this stuff. Either write about it in detail as part of the main story, since the protagonist's presence is currently extremely weak, or don't write about it at all and…

First of all, I want to apologize here. The book's mention of "original" may have misled many readers into thinking it refers to the original God. This was my oversight, but in fact, "original" refers to "original chaos," which is the "original creator." In the book, Bubble consistently refers to the "Primordial God" as "God," so theoretically, Bubble hasn't confused the two.

If you have any questions or find anything illogical in the story, please feel free to comment here. Even if I can't fix everything in this book, I'll definitely pay attention to the points in my next one. 🤓Only through constant criticism can we improve. 😜

In the past, symbolism was paramount; in the true God, authority, not power, is paramount. Power is subordinate to authority.

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It's actually very well written, but the setup at the beginning is too long, which can easily discourage impatient readers. Even if I labeled it as a prequel, it would be better to keep readers engaged, letting them know that they haven't entered the main story yet and are only reading about the background setting and historical deductions.

I think it's well-written.

The author's time-series rituals for achieving godhood, including Sequence One, have nothing to do with time. Becoming a god requires blessings, while Sequence One requires hatred. What is the connection between these two and time?

That's very well written. If I could give you a monthly pass, I would. I've already given you six recommendations.