What Do You Think, Miss Detective?

In the middle of the night, I dreamed that I could become the King of Heaven. Compared to being a king, I want 100 friends who think highly of me. Thank you so much to everyone who invested in me! Your small investment will control my big head. Additional updates still hope to add a picture of me in a certain segment to the book - the investors have the final say. I filled it out myself when signing the contract—— I have to write 2,000,000 words. The 100 original shareholders are my little wish now. It would be a great honor for me if you could help promote it! If you have any ideas and suggestions, please feel free to discuss them in book reviews and book circles. Finally, nothing else, I just want to thank you for reading my book.

My level is neither high nor low. I can make a few illustrations that won't pass the review. I would like to make more illustrations in the future. Bring you a different reading experience!

The writing is good, with a solid writing style and a natural style (although the occasional jokes are a bit dramatic), the current character creation is also very likable, the plot design can feel that the author is very careful, and the development of the world view is not abrupt. Not many people have read it, probably because the exposure is too poor. I turned through several pages in the new book to find it. Anyway, please encourage the author😊

Greetings to all the Hongmeng system family, I have always been unable to post anything in the book club of the old version of the system! Now it's finally solved... Woooooooooo In short, the book has been signed and everyone is welcome to invest! Readers and friends are welcome to discuss, communicate and give suggestions!

Thank you all for your encouragement! Suggestion! Invest! Recommended vote! Something good has happened, meow~

Some book friends have mentioned the advantages and would like to give some optimization suggestions. The plot is a bit slow to read so far. First of all, it is recommended to set the main plot or main line and sub-plots, highlight the key points, and then allocate the space reasonably. For example, there are seven transitional chapters starting from Chapter 22 to the present, and there is still no sign of ending. Secondly, what are the main themes and secondary themes? There are many themes, but the focus is not clear. If you want them all, it may be too full and not enough. Again, there are many characters and they are all carefully portrayed, the same as above. At the same time, the characteristics of the characters may not be distinctive and may need to be reorganized and refined. Finally, two consecutive flashbacks at the beginning may have a bad impact on the reader's reading continuity. It is recommended to use them as little as possible if possible. If there are any errors or omissions, please correct me. I wish the book will be successfully completed, and I hope the author will continue to work hard.

What's wrong with no one posting? Is the author's book data good?

Isa Raymore