
Return to Yejin
归夜烬
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 62k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 13d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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27Chapters
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There are a lot of inexplicable metaphors, and the word "like" appears too much. I can find 4 in the first chapter alone. Generally speaking, I judge this kind of metaphorical sentences in AI writing, but I didn't see it very much in this book, so I probably don't.
I am also a newbie, learning and writing at the same time, making progress together! My book
Are you referring to Naruto, Sasuke and Itachi? The opening chapter is full of stories of the door being destroyed and the protagonist escaping! Stay in suspense, the secret will be revealed step by step later. This will be better.
Coming from Douyin, tell me what the time is. The opening chapter is about practicing shooting and chatting about daily routine! It's not interesting, the story pace is too slow, and how could the father and son's names be different only in the third character? The second character in a three-character name refers to seniority, so they can't be the same. The father and son are the same generation! The opening should be attractive and the entry point should be chosen well! Just like the opening chapter of Da Feng's The Watcher, it cuts from the prison cell, leaving the reader full of doubts and wanting to know what happened? Will continue to look down.