
Sequence 0: Red Priest, but in Douluo Dalu
序列0红祭司,但斗罗大陆
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 157k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3d ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
67Chapters
111Votes
598Recs
47Fans
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Reader comments 42
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Tell us about the current problems
First, the protagonist's character is too gentle and his mouth is not poisonous enough. He doesn't look like a hunter. Second, there is the problem of identity dislocation. If you want the protagonist to gain faith as a god, you must maintain a sense of mystery. How can a god work like a village chief in every detail? Otherwise, just open it a little louder. If you don't have the strength of a god, you should first show the power of a god.
Author, centralization of power does not seem to be the authority of the Red Priest, right? I remember that the authority of the red priest is conquest, charm, war, destruction, priestly male, fire, disaster, courage. If you insist on having something to do with the authority of the red priest, centralization is more like the subordinate of war.
Is this book a farming style?
Is this book a simple farming flow, or is it like the previous two books a behind-the-scenes flow of spreading vests everywhere and distributing extraordinary characteristics? I think the behind-the-scenes flow is more interesting and more suitable for the mysterious system. I always feel a bit bored when doing farming in the mysterious system.
I hope this book won't go as high as the previous one
Is this the Red Priest of the Lord of Mysteries? People do not have the authority to rally. Rallying to rally is essentially the application of the power of war
In fact, I think it is not a good start for children, especially as a baby. The main reason is that it is too inconsistent and does not fit the temperament of this path. It is best to grow up quickly. War is a serious matter, and people in war should also be serious artistic images. When writing about war, you can write about veterans who will not die, you can write about middle-aged people making contributions, you can write about young heroes. If you want to start farming and develop, you must at least have a strategic image. But if you are a child or even an infant, it will be difficult to break down at the beginning. People can only think of Shiwu heroes, which makes Zhu Zi famous, and it is very difficult to bring in.
The plot progress is too slow
As mentioned, I feel that the author did not control the early plot very well. After explaining the protagonist's abilities in the early stage, he should jump directly to the contact with the original Douluo people, and then expand the influence of the protagonist during the contact and introduce the team that the protagonist has brought together. Otherwise, as the author writes in such detail about various things (such as composting, research and development of alcohol), the villagers' repeated admiration is actually very unqualified, and the protagonist cannot achieve a certain sense of mystery, which is a loss of points.
Regarding the correspondence between the two systems
I ranked them based on the performance of the two series
666, The blood-moving realm is here, the next step is for the soul ring to transform into the cave, and the spirit to transform into the soul 😏
Personally, I feel that the pace is a bit slow, and the children's performance is too restricted at the beginning. You can speed up the current plot if appropriate.