Tokyo: From Nisekoi to Becoming the Perfect Male God

Did I force you to watch it? I kept squirting.

This is your second book, right? Guo Mei, I have a plot 🤓

Look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, please look at it, please You guys😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Oh no! The author writes about being young all his life

What does this author mean? It's so obvious to copy from Xinhua Dictionary

Hey, the author has been following me for so long, and he just wrote this thing?

It turns out that the first volume is almost finished 🙂

This is not your first account, I have a virgin account!

Cat, to be honest, I think your writing style and plot rhythm are very good. Not because of this score. There are some articles on the list with high monthly votes. I think there is no difference between you and me in terms of writing style. The key lies in the characters and content. I have been reading the light novel category this month. I feel that the current market may prefer systems, yandere, cross-dressing and explosive Shura Fields. Take the previous book as an example. I think the Suzumiya sisters are well portrayed (at least it's refreshing to me anyway), but the others are a bit expected, and simply speaking, they're not exciting enough. It feels a bit overwhelming. It doesn't seem to have enough gravity. It doesn't seem that traditional to make love. Maybe it would be better to focus on a certain branch. What readers now want to see more is the tit-for-tat confrontation between different female protagonists, jealously vying for the position of the male protagonist's wife. In the previous book, everyone basically knew who the real one was, so there was no conflict or suspense. In addition, the female protagonists did not have the kind of normal character who gradually fell in love with the male protagonist. This may make many people think that it is just a routine love story, and they left without seeing the explosive point. As far as my personal statistics are concerned, if the system is satisfied, the process of gradual gravity blackening, and the Shura field, basically the monthly ticket starts at 500, and one or two thousand is the norm. Of course, I don't mean to guide you in writing a book. I just think the book you wrote is quite good, but there are still areas where the data can be improved. After all, now is an era of fast pace and great depression. Readers like to see explosive points and contrasts quickly. At the same time, because reality lacks love, their expectations and tolerance for yandere contrasting women in online articles are also increasing. When you meet a knight on the road, you must present your sword. If you are not a talented person, don't present a poem. Your writing style is not the problem, it's just that I haven't found the content yet. Just like some authors who are originally unknown, but as soon as they find the right theme, they shine all over the place (this is the author of the starting point). He who travels a hundred miles is only half a mile, so keep writing: D

Why isn't Tokyo written in Japanese? What do Tokyoites think?🙂

Lu Ye Aoi found out that the male protagonist was in love, thinking that the secret love could not die silently, so she took the courage to confess her love. However, the male protagonist was extremely entangled because of the fake love contract and her admiration for Bai Yueguang, and was unable to respond. When she was about to find out that her belongings were about to be stolen, she declared sovereignty out of possessiveness and partial love😋, so delicious.

So far, it looks pretty good. The writing is not awkward, and the plot is quite smooth so far. It is still relatively fragile at this stage. Please support the author.

From reading "Homeless", the level of this book has obviously improved a lot, and the upper limit of the subject matter and writing style is also higher.

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The last book was very interesting, but it was a pity that it wasn't popular. This book will help you.

It looks good. I feel like my grades will be much better if I write them down.

This book is still very good, but there are too few updates per chapter a day. If you update more, the results should be better. Come on.

It's so well written, please don't be a eunuch, okay?

I would like to ask the author, how does the male protagonist's appearance compare to mine? If it is too ugly, it will not make sense of the character. After all, Kishimoto followed me for three years before drawing the character of Sasuke.

Judging from the introduction, the protagonist is actually a profession in Japan. Cowherd

Classic background: Is his sister also the heroine?

Do you live as a young male protagonist? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

The beginning of Tokyo, where there are no parents, a sister but no house, and a part-time job to treat a disease, is too classic. Unfortunately, there are not many new novels. I will take a look at the details.

The eldest lady's name is so strange, and there are five or six suspected heroines in just twenty chapters. Do we have to accept it?

Come on update, I want more and more!

I hope the author can write the characters more vividly. There may not be many heroines, but they must be distinctive. Some of the branch plots in the previous book could actually be cut off or moved to some of the heroines.

I haven't finished the first one yet, how can I start a new one

Is the introduction too short? I don't even know what to say.

Wow, the previous book was very delicious. Come on

Compared with the first book, the writing level of the new book has indeed improved a lot. Especially after reading the last two books and comparing them with the first one, the difference is huge. Come on, author!