Immortal from the Day I Became a Hound of the Imperial Court

The beginning is a bit unbelievable. In the first chapter, to test whether it hurts, you have to poke a bleeding hole in your leg. Then you know that you have traveled through the game. You go to the streets without doing anything and are treated as refugees and thrown into jail. I remember that this way of writing was very poisonous in the past. Has the trend changed now?

I don't know why, but I don't want to read it when I see the introduction.

Mom's cooking??? Can you go back? If you can't go back, then sacrifice this world 🤭

Barely enough food. There are many flaws. Make your thighs bleed to see if you have traveled through time. He wandered around the military camp and was arrested. Report a spy. Obviously you don't know much about this spy, but you know everything about this spy.

At first I remembered every plant and tree here, but in a blink of an eye I was thrown into jail because I was unfamiliar and couldn't answer the questions.

As a protagonist in a game novel, he is so upright and behaves like a loyal minister and filial son who helps the country. The whole court is anxiously waiting for the end of the court to welcome the new dynasty. The protagonist is so tragic. This kind of plot is too cliche. There is no goal or main plot. The purpose of promotion is to become stronger, and to become stronger is to become an official. The plot is not interesting at first glance.

Did you see a foreigner entrusting you halfway? The protagonist still accepts it? What is the author's brain circuit? Isn't this a fight? They were almost fighting in, but then a foreign master came to take care of the orphan and give the baby away???

I see that you want to play with swords in your novel, but you actually use knives all the time. So what kind of weapon do you want to use? It seems that you are planning to use the sword in the later stage, and are waiting for the opportunity to combine the sword skill talent with the sword skill talent!

I've been reading Tomato recently, and this introduction smells like tomato

It's really well written and tells the story with the help of the game background. Full of refreshing feeling and smooth writing. The display of some necessary values ​​​​and attributes is just an embellishment to let people know that it is the background of the game, but it is not presented in large quantities and does not overwhelm the focus. The protagonist is not a robot who only cares about killing monsters and upgrading, he is also quite humane.