Rebirth, Rebirth, Infinite Rebirth

I saw people commenting on Douyin. I read three or four chapters. Please leave some comments. First, you have to know who your protagonist is. Although your protagonist is a bystander, as a protagonist, you must go out a lot. For this point, you can read "The Ming Dynasty in the Box" written by the author "Thirty-two Changes". Although the subject matter is different, the concept is similar. You have to show that the protagonist, as a "god", can help the weak main supporting characters. This is the reader's expectation. Then there are conflicts and contradictions. The beginning is based on the illness of the second male lead's daughter. I feel that we should not think about how to solve it from the second male lead's perspective, but let the protagonist guide the second male lead on what to do, and still let the readers fix their perspective on the protagonist. When writing the plot of the second male lead, you should take the protagonist as a bystander as the perspective, then what the reader brings into the story is the protagonist. However, the point of view you wrote is that of the second male lead, which makes people think that the second male lead is the protagonist. This is a shortcoming. This part of the plot should be written from a third-person perspective. It does not need to be the protagonist's perspective, but it cannot be from the second male perspective, unless it is a female character and her inner activities must be described. Enhance the plot of the protagonist! Enhance the protagonist's plot! Enhance the protagonist's plot. If you don't want to cut it, I suggest you make major changes while keeping the outline unchanged. Purely a personal suggestion.